A love story turns dark chapter 18(d) up note also plz read - Page 5

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It's awsm waiting for confession
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad that manan know about each other's feelings...

now they can stand together and fight against the 4 devils in their lives...aryaman, aryaan, maddy and soha...

can't wait to see what happens next...

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chapter:-7

precap:- almost confession but...


manik:-I love

I love

I love

nandu:- say now stop it

manik smiled but hide his smile and said

manik:- I love soha...

and nandu's smile vanished and she without any delay

nandu:-u monster than how come you have my first pace

manik:- being innocent yr that's not fair let me complete first

nandu:- yeah now what do u wanna say after the biggest confession uh love soha being almost a deamon part 2 nandu uttered

and manik who was suppressing his laugh said

manik:- Maine kya kiya waise confession ye kahan se aya main to keh raa tha I love soha Aryan yehi keh raha tha but u before I complete you questioned how come I have urrr

before he complete nandu put her hand on his mouth bcoz she was turned all red due to blush and she was looking down and nodding her head no but the deamon iz deamon

he kissed her hand so she became crimson red with out any delay she tried to ran off but manik pulled her with a jerk she collided with him and she kept her eyes tightly shut while manik was on cloud 9 after watching his effect on her for more teasing he biten her ear that she b/w her tremble

nandu:- ma...nii..kkk

manik being naughty said:- yes nandu say

nandu was only able to utter his name :- ma...nii...kk pl..z lea..ve M..e

manik:-why nandu u r mine after long time how will I


he started to give open mouth kisses on her neck he was enjoying her state but how come all let them happy all fab 4 with navya and abhi entered

all shouted in unison:- shit guyz hmne kuxh nae dekha

and their state was like manik's left was in top caressing her back while other was holding her that she may not fall and head was in crook of her neck after hearing this shout both came out of their lala land
and shouted
both:-shit guyz door was locked

and both again closed their eyes coz they uttered land up them in a huge teasing session and nandu ran to save herself from getting more flushed while manik said

manik:- guyz dad is calling

cabir :- yeah now if u don't go u will die

manik:- nah...no... I mean yes ...its urgent..
guyx in stammering

cabir:- yeah right wait let me call uncle what is so urgent

manik palmex hus face :- no cabir leave I will go later come lets go

cabir :- manik let me think what we saw

manik:- cabir you can tease me later but for now I need your urgent help buddy

cabir&fab3with navbhi:- anything serious

manik:- with serious face :- very serious

all got serious settle themselves around table placed in lounge

manik:- guyz its about UV

cabir:- what that amazing sir

manik:- he is not amazing sir he is Aryan

mukti:- shit nandu


to be continued hehehe...

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awesome update...

loved it so much...

loving the effect manan have on each other...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Awesome update waiting for revenge fab5 n nandu gonna make khuranas life hell n give a very dhansu confession of manan

note:-

yr q br br disappoint krte ho cmnt nae krte dil nae krta next update fun aj to thora romantic aur likhne ka soucha pr kahan se likhun ap log to barhne nae dete yr mjhw der lagti hai agai axhi nae lagti to boldo I will discontinue it at least dil main ye to nae hoga iam not good in it main ye bohut axha bnana chahti hun for that I need cmnts baqi stories pe bohut comments hote hen what's my mistake wk word cmnt bhi bohut khush krta hai karo to sae cmnt yr paisay to nae mangwy na cmnt Hi manga hai


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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Update soon dear waiting

yr ruhi it seriously hurts why can't all cmnt 😭

So romantic part loved it.

nice story keep it up update fast