MaNan SS :Gallery st-2 pt-15aPG-81 Hatred and revenge but where i - Page 33

Originally posted by: neetamandaliya

ChotuSa update... 😭
But nice update.. . Please update soon Ya... 😭

Thanks

Originally posted by: lovePANI

flashback back was
so lovely cute..
i loved that idea..
it was so adorable n beautiful line m not alone phone n god is with me

in danger phone is there
god for their parents to know in dream
it is the cutest full of innocent idea
i got to know..
i just loved it

but geeek present track wats wrong

thanx
keep smiling

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Originally posted by: ashitha.kerala

awesome update

innocent nandu

flashback part was amazing

i loved that part

fab5 nd nandu become friends

but why manik said all this?

thanks for pm

continue soon

waiting for next part

Thanks for ur precious comments.
Story will be unfold very soon

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome update...

Nandu was soo innocent...

Fab5 became her friends...

But y manik did tht to her...

She was soo much broken...

Luved it...

Thnx for pm...

Update soon...

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Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Nandini's state was well penned. Flashback part was mindblowing and blissful. Nandini's cute antics were fab and we'll written.fab5 and nandini's convo was blissful they were amazed at her innocence. Most loveable part of the update was their friendship. Loved that part to core. Innocent nandini was phenomenal.totally an marvellous update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

Thanks for ur precious comments

Originally posted by: parimala94

thank for the pm...nice update!!...

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Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Nice update

Love there flashback

I want to knew

What happened

How she came in that condition

Jaldi flashback

Complete kardo

Continue sooonnn

Love you

Diya😛

Thanks for ur precious comments.

Manan Hatred and revenge but where is love?
Part 3
Manik after remembering memories that were closely related to nandini while sipping beer soon drifted to sleep unknowingly with a smile that had no reason behind it's existence.
Other Side, nandini was still walking on the road with continous tears. She was constantly recollecting the memories she shared with manik and his friends. Somehow she reached home and drifted into a deep slumber with the thoughts of manik still lingering around her.
Soon it was morning a new beginning and new dreams. Sun rays were peeping through the curtains and disturbing the slumber of the cute irritated girl who was trying hard to escape from the cruel world and start afresh but it was not possible. After fighting alot with the duvet and the sunrays she finally woke up with the tears of last night still smooched on her cheeks. Her eyes were red with black eyeliner and mascara all over her cheeks and all around her eyes. She was still fighting back her tears that were welling up but she somehow composed herself and thought of beginning her life with a new note.
Similar scene was been repeated in malhotra mansion. Manik was resting his head on the bar counter with his one hand surrounding his head and the other one holding a nearly emptied bottle of beer. Soon a Butler barged in with slow and steady steps trying to avoid any sort of noise that could wake manik up. He got near him in no time and then took three to four steps backwards just as precaution and then called him in his ever so soft voice. After calling him for five to six times manik flung his eyelids open and looked at the Butler which made the poor Butler gasp as he knew whats coming next
Manik (anger clearly visible on his face): "WHAT THE HELL HOW DARE YOU WAKE ME UP HUH YOU BLOODY IDIOT I WOULD FIRE YOU NEXT TIME IF YOU TRY WAKING ME UP IN THE FUTURE GOT IT NOW WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING AT GET LOST!!!!"
Poor Butler ran out of the door as soon as possible making a note of never waking manik up again. Manik stood up and glanced at his wrist watch and muttered "10:30am". He went to get ready after putting the empty bottle of beer on the bar counter.
Nandini got ready and sat on her bed remembering the events of yesterday night that changed her life forever. She was dreading the day when she started feeling for him and accepted his proposal
Other Side after manik got freshen up. He came and lied down on his bed and remembered the day when they made the plan.
Flashback:
After the first meet they started meeting each other regularly if not outside then at each others place but not a day went by without seeing each other's face.
One day, fab 5 were sitting at maniks place after nandini went back home. After few minutes of silence cabir spoke.
Cabir: "guys let's play truth or dare what say"
Mukti: "yaa...let's play"
Manik: "I will bring the bottle"
Cabir: "no need we will play dare only"
Alya: "what do you mean?"
Cabir: "so for example it's manik turn I give him a dare and he doesn't I will give a double dare which would be much harder and can be classified as a punishment"
Mukti: "interesting"
Cabir: "indeed so let's start with manik"
Manik: "ok"
Cabir: "so...erm mm. ...yaa...so you know Nandini she is reserved kinda and we all know a tough nut to crack"
Mukti: "but she has gelled up with us very easily"
Cabir: "yaa...but it's just that haven't you noticed she except me manik and dhruv ignores other guys"
Alya: "yaa...she does"
Cabir: "so manik your dare is to make nandini fall for you as we know nandini even told us she doesn't like to be in relationships and believes there is no such word as love"
Manik: "WHATTT? "
cabir: "yes...you will or not"
Manik: "obviously not"
Mukti: "actually this will be fun"
Manik: "but she is a commoner"
Cabir: "let's do it this way...how about a bet if you win then you can ask anything from me and vice versa"
Manik (smirks evilly): "Bet..ok fine"
Cabir: "let's see the game is on"
Flashback ends
Manik opens his eyes and stare at the ceiling thinking
Manik self talk: "What is wrong with me that commoner has captured my mind but no I won't let her and now is time for me to go to a club"
Other side, nandini stands in front of the mirror and looks at her reflection. After few minutes her lips curve into a smirk.
Nandini to her reflection: "manik malhotra you think I am one of those stupid girls that will just sit and cry for months and years for same guy then let me tell you that you are highly mistaken. I am not the one that's shows herself weak to gain sympathy. And you know what you don't know that yet so it's time to turn the tables around and now the ball is in my court" and she evilly laugh
She continues: "MR MANIK MALHOTRA ... Huh! What did you think? That I'm a weak fragile delicate doll who wont stand up for herself? Then let me tell you that you are so damn mistaken. You don't know who am i yet. I'm no commoner to simply take in your insult and walk away with it. You'll have to pay! You'll have to pay for every single tear I've shed, you'll have to pay for every single piece of my heart that you've shattered ! I knew you couldn't love me back the same way i did, but now I bet that no one can HATE you the same way i do! Coz i hate you from the bottom of my heart my dear monster! And i will hate you to the moon and back. Be ready to face your worst nightmares, i will make sure you will beg for your death but even death will refuse to come near you. " she smirks and goes to transform herself into a nandini which even she was unaware off.
So guys how's it do comment and like.

Wow awesome update...

superb story yaar...read all three parts in one go...how cheap R fab5 they ripped a poor soul beyond repair...now manik has to face the wrath of nandini...and nice to see confident and strong nandini...update next part soon...