MaNan SS :Gallery st-2 pt-15aPG-81 Hatred and revenge but where i - Page 31

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Such an emotional one.the way u penned nandini's state was mindblowing.manik has to pay hard to seek nandini's apology. Manan's convo was well scripted.if possible make nandini's character so strong to face manik. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

Thanks for ur precious comments

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow update...

He can manik do this...

Nandu was all shattered...

Manik is gonna pay for what he has done to Nandu...

Luved it..

Update soon..

Thanks for ur precious comments

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Such an emotional one.the way u penned nandini's state was mindblowing.manik has to pay hard to seek nandini's apology. Manan's convo was well scripted.if possible make nandini's character so strong to face manik. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

.
Thanks for ur precious comments

Awesome concept...
I just loved it.. .
Please continue and update soon.. .. 😛 😉

Originally posted by: neetamandaliya

Awesome concept...
I just loved it.. .
Please continue and update soon.. .. 😛 😉

Thanks

superb update continue soon thanks for pm

Manan Hatred and revenge but where is love?
Part 2
Wow...Thankyou so much I am amazed by the number of comments and likes. Thank you so much so now I won't be wasting any more of your time so here is the next update.
Nandini was walking lifeless like there is no soul In her body. She was feeling numb but her tears were continously making there way out of her eyes. Her feet were paining her alot by the constant walking in her high heels but that pain was nothing compared to the pain she was feeling in her heart. She felt like someone stabbed her heart numerous times in a go.
At the same time a guy Was sitting near a bar counter sipping beer. Many bottles were lying around the bar counter and there was even small pieces of cracked glass all over the floor. The guy had blood shot eyes and after drinking a bottle of bear he would either throw it on the floor with great force or just put in on the counter.
He was in deep thought as he was sipping the beer. The guy was getting annoyed each passing second remembering the moments he spent with HER!!! The first meet was the one which was constantly coming in front of his eyes.
Flashback:
It was around 1 at night and the weather was beautiful. Anyone can guess by looking at the sky that it will be raining soon. A girl was walking down the road and looking at the sky continously waiting for a drop of rain to fall on her angelic face but the sky was really testing her patience which would be easily seen by her cute pouts which were changing every second. Just then she passed black BMW which was parked at the side. She glanced at it and then started walking ignoring it completely.
The car was parked by a guy and was chit chatting with his five friends. Suddenly the guy sitting on the passenger sit looked at the girl walking and thought of some mischief. He looked at his friends and signalled them to the girl and smirked to which his friends understood what his friend is up to.
Five of them got of the car. There were two girls and three boys and walked to the girl. The girl ignored them completely aware of them coming towards her and took her phone out getting engrossed in it.
They came towards her and started walking beside her. She continued walking at the same pace which was just adding fuel to there anger not able to bare the fact the girl was ignoring them. The girl in a crop top and shorts snatched the phone off her hands but still it didn't make any difference as the girl continued walking.
The tall one came in front of her not able to control anymore and looked at her. Taking the opportunity the other four surrounded her which made the girl stop in her tracks and glanced at the tall guy standing right in front of her
Girl: "can I help you?"
Tall guy: "yes"
Girl: "can you explain how?"
The other guy which had purple headphones resting on his neck spoke: "yes by letting us drop you off"
Girl confusingly: "where exactly?"
Tall guy: "well where ever you want?"
Girl still confused: "well I don't have any destination at the moment"
The girl in a knee length dress: "you don't look homeless in any angle so what do you mean that you don't have any destination"
Girl: "listen my house is just round the corner and I am here for a walk. For now I am not in in a mood to go home"
Tall guy confusingly: "walk?"
Girl: "yaa...walk actually I wasn't sleepy so I came and started walking and then as it's going to rain I decided to enjoy the rain"
Tall guy: "do you have any idea how dangerous can it be for a girl to be here at this hour of night"
Girl: "yes I am aware but I am not alone"
Girl in crop top and shorts said confusingly: "what do you mean we can't see anyone near you"
Girl: "God is with me phone is with me so yaa"
Tall guy (irritated): well how exactly is a phone and God will help you"
Girl: "well I can call if I am in anger and God is seeing my every move so he can let my parents know in there dream"
All five of them were amazed by the innocence of her and thought of becoming her friend as they never saw anyone so naive in this cruel world.
Guy with headphones forwarding his hand: "want to be our friend?"
Girl happily shaking her hand with his: "yaa...sure"
Everyone smiled seeing the naive girl being happy on making new friends and went awe on her cuteness
Tall guy: "so let's introduce ourselves...I am manik malhotra lead singer of fab 5 and the guitarist"
Girl: "hi I am nandini murty...and you have a band that's so awesome"
Guy with headphones smilingly: "hi I am cabir dhawan the drummer and yes we have a band"
Girl with crop top and shorts happily: "hi I am mukti vardhan and I play the electrical guitar"
Girl with knee length dress: "hi I am alya saxena and I play the piano"
Guy who was silent throughout finally spoke: "and I am dhruv vedant the guitarist"
Nandini : "well happy to meet you but mukti if you don't mind my phone"
Mukti handing over the phone: "sorry"
Nandini: "no problem" just then her phone rang and she made a sad pout which was seen by everyone. She picked up the call and after a few minutes of silence spoke "yaa...I am coming" with this they exchanged numbers and bidded each other a goodbye and promised to meet the very next day.
Flashback ends
Well was this a new friendship or a new relation to know more stay tuned till then do comment and like

It's awesome. ..amazing. .really nice

flashback back was
so lovely cute..
i loved that idea..
it was so adorable n beautiful line m not alone phone n god is with me

in danger phone is there
god for their parents to know in dream
it is the cutest full of innocent idea
i got to know..
i just loved it

but geeek present track wats wrong

thanx
keep smiling

awesome update