Just this one - a Manan FF pg 8 IMP NOTE - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Loved the first part :)
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey new to your story here!
But I loved it, continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2
Nandini's POV:
What did i just say oh shit no nono,,, what will he think of me nandu what did you do now ?!

Manik's POV
Did she just ask me out ?!
Wait! i usually get pissed when girls ask me on a date ? but i am feeling warm and fuzzy what is happening to me ?!
Before i could figure out a answer i heard her,
"ummm mmm i didnt mean a date i meant..."

I was looking at her while i was smiling to hear her reply.
"I meant we should umm, you know get to know each other first right ?!"

I smirked and said "so what better way than to go on a date ? how about dinner?!"

NAndini's pov:
My mind is running with all thoughts as how to cover up my stupid blunder and when i heard him, i was shocked and scared,ans started my blabbering
"Ayioo ayippa what will amma and appa think and manik's mom and dad?! ayioo i just wanted to get to know him better ,what if they think bad of me or what if they blame amma and appa on my growth what will---"

Before i could continue my rantings he came closer and silenced me with his finger and i became still not knowing what to react and looked upto him.

MAnik's POV:
OMG she is so cute ,her rantings and her over thinking mind and just when i went close to her she looked up at me with her big eyes and that cute confused expression! man this girl has already started to drive me crazy,,

"Nandini stop overthinking!! If you hadnt asked me i would have definitely asked you the same so chill and no one is going to think wrong of you okay so just relax"

And i then i removed my finger from her lips which had formed a cute "o" shape and i couldn't help but to pull her cheeks and i said "if you dont stop with these expressions i might have to eat you up".

Nandini's POV:
Hearing him say so my body relaxed a bit and when i heard his next sentence on eating me up i just gaped at him with my wide eyes and the he said
"what did i say?"
and he came close to me.
I got shocked and moved back to run away when i felt someone hold my hand.

" I thought you wanted to get to know me more ?!"

When i turned around i saw him smirking at me.

Manik's pov:

Man this girl is so cute and she is so different she wants to know me more not flirt with she already cares about my parents and she became shy she i definetly one in a million.
"yeah, but i dont want to go out ?" i heard her say so.
"So what lets make use of the time now, so we have the table here in the garden itself and the atmosphere is pleasant and if we just have a cup of coffee ,then it would perfect don't you think so?!"saying so i winked at her.

I thought she would shy away and was waiting for her cheeks to turn apple red, but she shocked me by saying "I will get the coffee why don;t you have a seat ?"

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So sorry guys had an exam today and was held up, i hope this was upto the mark and you like this update
please share your views and i might update tomorrow
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Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
first comment...
wow..u decided to make ur os as ff..
thanku for that..
ur os was amazing...the first 2 chapters too...
thanks for the pm..continue sooon.. 😉
Edited by lovemylyf - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manan are just adorable...nandi is too cute...manik and his smirks...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
very sweet update.
interesting characterisation.
all the best.
hope you continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Okay I hadn't read this before, but now that I have, it gives me such a warm and fuzzy feeling!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Plzzz
keep updating it's amazing plzzz update next part sooon
n who is husband plzzz clear it
plzzz update sooon
once 10 to 15 chaps hooo jaye tooo bohat lyks n comments ayege sooo plzzz atleast tabtak keep updating continue sooon...
Plzzz update sooon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice chapter
Read all in a go
Continue soon
And pm me if u can
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
It's not usual dear..it's amazing.
So cute..
N u have shown Nandini also soo cute 😆
Can I get a PM..!?
I'm loving it

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