Just this one - a Manan FF pg 8 IMP NOTE

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone,
this is gonna be a story of hoe two people fell in love ,it sounds usual but this will show a different way of falling in love :P
How both overcome their insecurities and understand the other person...

My Os is just a part of this FF, but we will be starting long before and continuing well after that :D
for those who want to read it : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4497250




A small beginning...

Nandini's POV:
I was so happy i wanted to jump all around with joy, after finally cracking the deal It was my dream to work with those children and help them and to know that we will be collaborating with UNICEF. i couldn't believe it yet and we are gonna start work soon ,yeahhh,...

With this thought in mind i rushed home to share the happy news with my dearest family and especially my favorite brat XD

After reaching home and still not coming down from my high i waltzed into the living room ,joyful and doing my my signature step (dumb step-according to my bro )
"Mom ,dad you just wont believe..."
That was when i opened my eyes and saw we had company and it struck me of what i was doing...

Three people where staring at me trying to control their laughter /shock/ surprise...

Manik POV:
I saw her crazy dance, her sweet-slightly loud and melodious voice, her crazy position { you would also laugh after seeing a 25 yr old girl doing that child's step} but surprisingly i found it cute.
After realizing that there where guests I could see her changing expressions from shock -confusion and then finally to embarrassment. Her chuby cheeks slowly started to fill with red colour and i couldn't stop that stupid smile on my face from growing.

And just when her mom was gonna say something to her we all heard a voice

"Di your husband is here"...

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Index
Chapter 1- below
Chapter 2-pg 3
Chapter 3-pg 4
Chapter 4-pg 7

Hope this wasn't stupid, sorry for the short update...
if you all like i would continue or else why waste this space ;)
Tell me your view guys.

thank you,
-Niki

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Interesting and a very good start.
Looks like something new in the plot of the story is going to unfold.
Keep up your good work.
All the very best.
Waiting for your next update eagerly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
very interesting...
loving the child like nature of nandu...do innocent...
can't wait to see how the story proceeds...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

Nandini's POV:
Hearing Aarav say 'My husband' I freaked out and didnt know what to do that is when all of them bursted out laughing and I looked to see a really handsome guy who was also laughing. I was mesmerized by his laugh and he looked hot too.When I didnt know how to react my brother answered Aarav "To be husband Aarav ".

Then when I was about to walk into my room*run away rather* ,my mother-in-law ;) called me and said "No need to shy away,darling come have a seat".

Manik's POV:
That little guy has a nice timing ,I was having a nice time looking at her pretty face and when mom told her to sit the only place free was next to me, but i was surprised when she lifted the little boy and sat there keeping him on her lap. Any girl would go ballistic to have seat next to me that too if the permission is given by my mom.

I was observing her closely trying to be discreet and i could hear the conversation
"I am sho shorry "
*silence*
"I didnot do it wantedly"
with her face the other side"Its not wantedly its purposely "
"Shorrryyy I won't scream the next time"
"Awww,my naughty brat you arent saying you wont do it still"
And then a tickle war happened, I was smiling all through out.

Nandini's POV:
When I was about to get serious about this war with my favorite brat, I heard papa say"Nandu why don't you show Manik around?"
I quietly got up and noticed him also standing up,when Aarav was about to come with me my Sister-in-law caught hold of him and winked at me,i blushed a bit and moved away from the living area.He silently followed me to the garden.

Maybe he doesnt want to marry me, I turned and faced him and told "Its okay if you arent interested in this marriage i will tell mom and dad that I dont want to get married now" in one go and when i looked at him i saw him smirking and leaning on the patio door.

Manik's POV:
I waited till we went away from everyone to start my conversation with nandu ;)
When we entered the garden and i was about to say something i heard what she said and this girl shocked me again *not that i want to boost* but no girl has ever tried to stay away from me but this pretty-chubby girl has already impressed me.

I replied "I never said anything about not marrying you and i am sure Aarav likes me to, why dont you ?"

Nandini's POV:
I was shocked to hear what he said, and before i could digest it he continued " you have a boyfriend right ?" When i still didnt reply he continued "oh wait girlfriend ?! that's why you didn't tell your parents,its okay if you want i can help"

I was shocked and i said " No , no ".

He replied "Oh okay then lets get married?"

Manik's POV:
Man i am loving her expressions and i was first actually afraid what if she says yes but was glad to hear her reply, and her last expression to my question was really epic she is blushing and has her pretty eyes bulging out. I grinned and her next question surprised me "Lets go on a date first ?'
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to continue or not ?!

-please share your views
Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh! Like seriously this is soo good. .
Loved it. .
Amazing.
Updateee sooon. .
I'll be waiting. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
It's really interesting story
loved the plot
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's superb👏
Pls continue ...soon
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

please do continue ...

loved manan's straight forward way of thinking...

nandi is so innocent and adorable...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..this is super interesting
Pls continue..will be waiting eagerly for your next update
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Promo:
The date , but is it really a date ?!

Keep guessing guys, sorry to make you wait i just lost what i had written so now i cant write again right now as i have an exam tomorrow so sorry...
will try to update it tomorrow...

-Niki

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