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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --MiNi--

Yaaay!
Harroz new update milengeyyy [:D/]
Coming to the update,
Damn it was sooo cutee. Humari nanduuu kitni cute baatein karti haiii.
Adorable update dear 😳
I loved it. 👏
Ab bas kal aa jaye n hume dusri update bhi mil jaayeee.
I can't wait. 😳
Update soon sweetie.
Lots of love
MiNi 😳

Hmm... thnkew so mch...
Glad uh liked it...
N aaj hi new update milegi dont worry...
Thnx once again
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

Garima!!! Rifa k lie bhi! Re i loved d update!! Im laughin lyk a fool ryt now! Enjoyed wholely!! Lyk srsly..who's dhruv? Who's her bro? Why manik hates d moorthy's? Nandu ka behaviour..she loved aryamann bt she says koi nai hota hai pyaar mein..tumhari dukh samajhti hu...hahahaha m laughin!! God itni casual behaviour wid her kidnapper!! Manik ka muh dekhne layak tha!! Wen cabir will listen to this na surely he'll laugh!!
Awesome update!! Update soon! Thnx fr d pm:)


Aww... Thnkew so mch Toshna...
Glad uh liked it...
keep guessing,..
N There is more fun after Cabir's entry...
N yeh mere paas tere liye ek surprise hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 3

Manik's pov :

This crazy girl ne to mera dimag kharab kar diya.What rubbish, that she thinks THE MANIK MALHOTRA will be fall for that Abhimanyu Murty's sister. No, never, kabhi nehi. I hate Murty's.Abhimanyu Murty, I wont forgive u. Ek saal mujhe isshi ghari ka intezer tha, aab tumhe samaj ayega ki humiliation kya hota hain, now u will understand ki aapne sister se dur hone ka dard kya hota hain. Tumhara liye, sirf aur sirf tumhara liye mera diii ka aaj itni buri haal hain.Bt I'm not inhuman like u, I wont do anything to ur sister, main to baas tumhara halat dekhna cahta hoon.It will great fun to see u broken.


Manik's eyes become red in anger while he was thinking about those things & tears come out from his eyes thinking about his sister. Then he again entered into the locked room and found nandani standing beside the window.


Manik : Listen, there is a bathroom over there & all your clothes are in two suitcase in the first room. U should thank cabir for this becoz tumhare saath saath usne tumhara clothes bhi kidnap kar ke le aaya. Now go & change. Aur don't try to escape, wase bhi it's a farm house and most probably it's an isolated place, so no one will come to help u.

Nandini : Ho gaya tumhara bakbak. Now come here I have something to tell u.

Manik : who is the kidnapper?? U or me??

Nandini : Of course u.

Manik : Good, then tum mera baat manogi main nehi. No, go & change.


Nandini went to washroom & murmured Monster.


Manik : kuch kaha tumne??

Nandini : No, not at all.


After 10 minutes while nandani came out from the washroom she saw manik was busy in talking over phone. Manik then saw Nandani & cut the call.


Manik : Listen,Miss Murty to ur misfortune I have to go out for sometime.when I come back I want to see the whole place cleaned up totally, actually I hate dirt. Aur be a good girl, bhaange ki idea dimag se nikal doo.

Nandini : Nandani Murty isn't ur servant. I wont clean anything. Tumhare pass nauker nehi hain kya??

Manik : Main jo bol rahi hoon chup chap wo Karo.warna I have to execute my plan number two to stop ur bloody mouth.

Nandini : In my house I was always treated like a princess, so I won't clean this place. Aur tum mere mouth ko bloody bola, u idiot.


Saying this nandani picked a nearby flower vase & throw it towards Manik bt manik caught it...


Manik : Wow Miss Murty nice aim.
Bt my catch is better than ur aim. Now u left no option. I have to do it.

Nandani : Do, what??


Manik brought a cloth & tied nandani's hand backward. He also Stuck a tape on her mouth so that she can't shout. After doing this he left.


Nandini's pov :

Ayappaa, now I can't even scream. He is such a monster.Bt ayappaa I have to search a way for escaping.plzzz meri madat kar de na.


Nandini felt that manik didn't tighten enough the clothe which he used to tie her hands. After struggling for almost fifteen minutes nandani finally freed her hands. Then she remove the tape from her mouth too & started searching a way for escaping. She came colse to a window & tried to open it. She found a metal thing with that she broke the glass of the window & opened it. After opening it, the first thing she realized that it she was on the second floor of the house. If she want to escape then she has to jump from the window.


Nandini's pov : Huhhh, aab kya karu. Jump karu ya fir na karu. Aagar jump mar diya to haddiya tut jayegi then koi mujse saadi nehi karega. Ayappaa kaha fasa diya. Think nandani think koi to solution hogi. And then "IDEA "

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LO ajka update pura... Ab jaldi jaldi likes and comments do... And I am not happy with the response that I got from previous chappy...

Babyee...
Cya...
Take care...


LOADS OF LOVE,
GARIMA & RIFA

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Amazing update
Manik tu toh gea kidnap kiya hai hahahahaha...agar manik ne abhimnyu se badla lena tha toh nandu ko q chup chap kidnap kiya aur kisi ko pta bhi ni...ab nandu kya kregi jump kregi ya nhi...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Amazing update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...firstly i want to sorry coz i couldn't comment on previous update as i read it today only when i saw the pm fr part 3 n i realised i haven't even read the part 2...(may be by mistake u forgot to pm me or hven't pm anyone..) bt then i read both the chapters...
N trust me i'm loving it totally...nandu is naive...n u can say brave at the same time...as she blabbered all the thoughts which cane to her mind even that he wants to marry her n can't see her marrying with anyone else ...goddd...it would have been so annoying fr him...bt fr me...it was damn funny...i loved it...
Waiting fr next..
Byee...tc...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chappy
This ff is very funny
I just loved it to the core
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update yar...
Still I'm thinking who is the brother of nandini...

Waiting eagerly for next

Keep going and keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update was good...
Good to see that u showed nandini soo strong...!!
N eagerly waiting to knw the idea of miss murthy...
I am sure she wont be able to escape as manik will catch her...but still it will be fun to see their fight...!!
Continue soon
Take care. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read chap 2 & 3 in a go.. shockd to c dis syd of Nandu..haha..Im loving dis Bubly Nandu.. So u cleared many doubts as to who's Nandu's bro & y did Manik kidnap her.. Thank u so much 4 dat.. A lot fun seems to b on our way..haha.. excited to read further.. ! Thank u 4 d pm & dese amazing regular updates.. ! :) Stay Blessed ! #OkThanksBye ! ;)

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