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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tas456

Wow..awesome update dear

Just came across your story today got totally hooked to it
You r truly amazing yaar
Can I pls request a pm when you update next
Take care and stay blessed

Awe... thnkew...
N dont worry I will surely PM uh...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: puccha

Pari baby.. Tu ek din mjhe shock deke maaregi..
Like srsly abhi ko tune villain bana Diya.. Cute se.. Sweet se.. Abhi ko villain.. Hawww.. Harshad jaisa kamina hota to pata bhi chalta but abhi.. Hmm.. Chal koi na... Isme bhi adjust Ho jayega.. Haha..
Ab baat karte h nandu Ki wo to aise order de rahi h maano apne servants se baat kar rahi Ho.. Bechara Manik.. Haha..
Ab Manik Ki behen kaun h yaar.. Ab ye kaunsa naya siyappa h.. Chal firse koi na.. Main next update ka wait karugi.. Haha..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Bye.. Take care..
Lots of love..
Puccha..

Oye... Ye kyaa...
Apne Ispr comment kis par uspr res kar dia...
Ap bahut gandi hu...
N mai kyu marugi apko shock dekar...
Maine ni banaya villian abhi ko...
Sab rifa ki galti h...
Kya kare apni nandu ke andaaz ki alag h...
Btw mujhe bhii ni pta ki Manik ki behan kon h...
Rifa se puch kar bta dungi...
okay... babyee...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neetamandaliya

Today's update?? ?? Waiting Ya.. 😭

Trying mah best to update...
Litte stuck...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the typing errors if any...

PART 4


Nandani's pov :

"IDEA "...In excitement nandu patted her own shoulder & said "Kya baat hain, day by day I'm becoming more & more intelligent ".Ayappaa thanks for the superb idea, also thanks to the bollywood movies. Arey wo konsa movie tha jisme Heroine saadi se bhaag ne ke liye dupatta ki istemal kiya tha. Ufff, movie ka name bhul gayi to kya hua bhaag ne ka tarika to remember hain, baas it's enough.


Thinking this nandani brought three saari from her suitcase & tied them together. Then she tied one side to the nearby Almira & throw the other side through the window.


Nandini's pov :

Ayappaa now I'm going to get down by climbing this saari. Meri raaksha karna.


Saying this nandani started getting down. When she almost reached the ground, she slipped.


Nandini directly fall on the hard ground & her legs got fracture, she couldn't able to stand. Then she heard a voice.

Manik : Need any help sweetheart??


Nandini didn't bother to look at the person & subconsciously said..


Nandani : Kya timing hain aap ka, obviously I need help. U r my guardian angel. Saying this she looked at the person & her eyes got widen seeing him.


Hearing the word guardian angel a smile crept on Manik's face..


Manik : So, Miss Murty... Nice attempt bt u r too unlucky.


He picked her in his arms & entered into the house. Nandini was feeling embarrassed, so she kept quite all the way. Manik made her sit on the bed.


Manik : kya chaal raha hain tumhara dimag main, why r u so quite?

Nandini : Huhhh, kuch bolu to problem, na bolu to bhi problem.

Manik : Anyway, is it hurting??


He asked the question pointing towards her legs.


Nandini : Nehi, mujhe to aab naach ne ka maan kar raha hain. U idiot of course, it's hurting.

Manik : I told u before that don't try to escape par tum to tum hoo.

Nandini : Listen, I'm hungry.

Manik : I'm ur kidnapper not ur servant. Go & cook yourself.

Nandani : Blind ho Kya, dikhai nehi deta ki mere pair main chot lagi hain. Wase bhi I don't know how to cook.

Manik : Unbelievable,u don't know how to cook!!!

Nandani : Nehi, bt don't worry. I think u r rich enough. So, agar tum mujhe saadi karte ho to saadi ke baad hum servant rakh lenge cooking ke liye.


Saying this she winked at manik.


Manik : Tum pagal khane se bhaag ke ayi ho Kya?

Nandini : Nehi to, main to two months pehle London se ayi ho.

Manik shook his head in disbelief.

Manik : Ok, ok, I'm cooking for u.

Nandini : arey waaah, tumhe cooking bhi ata hain.I want to see ur cooking style.

Manik : What a crazy girl. Wait, main change karke ata hoon. Then I will cook.

Nandini : Hmmm, go fast.

Manik : kidnapper main hoon.So, don't order me.


Saying this manik went to washroom for changing & after few mins he came back in a vest.


Nandini : Arey waaah, Mr. Kidnapper. Kya body banaya hain tumne. Tum sallu ka fan ho Kya?? Manna padega, u r looking hot.


Hearing this a smirk crept on Manik's lips..


Manik : I'm born hot. Saying this he winked at nandani.

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I know you guyzz are angry with me...
Sab yehi keh rahe honge...
Kitna bhaav khaati hai ye...
Ek toh chote chote update deti hai upar se late mei...
Aur kuch toh yeh bhii soch rahe honge ki...
Pata nahi yeh ladki update karegi bhii yaa nahi...
I am sorry ... really sorry my dear readers...
Actually today is my bro's engagement ceremony...
So I was really busy...
Rifa send me the part in morning only...
But I really stuck with the engagement thing,...
Chalo ab jaldi se likes aur comments do...
Engagement programme ke beech mei updae kar ri hu...
Warna kal ka part cancel...

Coming to the update How was it???? Do tell me...
BABYEE
TAKE CARE

LOADS OF LOVE AND HUGS,
GARIMA
Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all congratulations for ur brothers engagement..
Enjoy to d fullest..
Secondly Maine tere wale par bhi unres kar Diya h.. Go n check.. Off course after enjoying ur brother engagement..
Now coming to update..
Itt was hilarious.. Haha.. It was amazing.. I mean.. Like srsly.. Nandini attitude is something which I loved alot.. She is like me totally.. Haha.. Mere gharwale bhi mjhse pareshaan h issi baat ko lekar.. Haha.. Jo man kehta wahi sabko bol deti Hu.. Haha..
Just loving it..
Continue soon..
Bye.. Take care..
Lots of love..
Puccha..
Ps.. Main gandi bachi nahi Hu.. WO tu h.. :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
hahaha...nyc one😆😆😆
continue sooon😊😊
Edited by cun_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooohhh very nice update...
I enjoyed a lot while reading...

Keep going and keep
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Posted: 9 years ago
Laughing update...congratulations for your brother engagement 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Areee yaar it's ok!!
We r probably fine until we get our timely updates!!
Luved it!!
Jaldi karna update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Really dear ...I love yur story...
Its soo good... it really feels good to read yur story...
Its fun seeing nok jhok between manan...aww so cute they are...
Kerp it up...
Bye tc stay blessed. ...!!

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