MaNan SS : Tum Bin part -6pg-9 up 31/10/15 - Page 5

Wow yaar

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loving the jealous manik...hope manan get back together soon...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Read it all in a go..

Originally posted by: tas456

Superp yaar👏

Your poems are just awesome

Tqvm for the pm

Pls continue

Thank you so much for liking my poems..

Originally posted by: Calina7

Aw!!!

Well played Nandani.

Fiance!! thing made me smile for first time.

Now Nandani is gonna rock!!

Awsome update.

Thanks for pm.

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: jainishah061997

<font size="2">Nandini rocks!!!
nice story ...cont soon.</font> 😊

Thanks..

Originally posted by: myruh

Read it all in a go..

It was awesome..

Reading 1 st n 2 nd chp my eyes were full of tears... It was so emotional.. For once i was like wat manik in dead..?? Bt thnk god he is not dead.. Warna toh i would die..

Nandini still believes on manik m their love.. She can still see the love in his eyes..

So manik ne game start ki par nandu ussey apney tarikey se khatam karegi.. Game on..!!

The update was exciting, interesting, awesome, nice n superb...

Can't wait to hear more

Continue soonish

God bless

Love Myrah...

Thank you so much.
Hope u also like next Update...

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loving the jealous manik...hope manan get back together soon...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thank you so much..

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Wow yaar

Today's update is just

Amazing

Superb

Fabulous

Ausom

Yaar

I so love it

Hmmm...nandani is playing

With him ...now we will

See how much manik

Control...hehe...

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Keep loving

Keep smiling

And

Keep shining For Ur loved ones

Love

Diya😛

Thank you so much. Hope u also like next Update..

part-7
Nandani looking at Manik but Manik face is expressionless he don't know what to say.
coffee pine chale Aryaman try to distract
Nandini.
Nandini - ha haa chale main toh kabse ehi bol rehi hu.
Cafe
Aryaman - So aap kya lengi Nandini ji...
Nandini - black tea.
[Manik look at Nandini and thinking]
Flashback
Nandini - Yaaak manik tum y kaya pite ho. y koi pine ki chis hai no milk no sugar I don't like it plzz kuch or pina start karo na.
Manik - But Nandini I love black tea ummm all grey. If u want to make me smile sirf mujhe black tea pila dena ok
Flashback End
Nandini or black tea usse toh y bilkul pasand nahi thi]
Aryaman - Par aap toh coffee pina chati thi
Nandini - no coffee main aap logo ko pilana chati thi main black tea hi piti hu..
Aryaman - ok so bhai tumhare liye filter coffee order kardu.
After hearing Aryaman, Manik back on his thoughts.
Nandini - filter coffee?? [nandini look at manik face] [Manik or filter coffee mujhe jante nehi ho or meri adat ko apni adat bana diya hai nandini thinking on her mind]
Aryaman - Bro sirf filter coffee pite hai.
Then arymaan order for them.
Nandini - So Manik apne meri questions ki ans nehi di.
Aryaman - O Nandini ji aap sehi thi sayed aap bhai ko hi jaate hai bt o apko nehi janta unki ek accident main memory loss ho chuki hai so une kuch yaad nahi hai.
Nandini - o like that tabhi main sochu main itni galat kaise ho gayi.
Aryaman - Toh aap hi bata dijiye aap kaise bhai ko jante hai bhai ko toh yaad nehi hai na.
Manik silently watching them and hear their convo.
Nandini -Aree e phele bolna tha na Manik mai tumhe yaad dila deti. So Aryaman u know na manik 5 yr pehle Mumbai main tha. toh manik humari paroshi the and Roj free mai humare ghar chole khane ata tha. Or o meri college main bhi parta tha.
Aryaman - Accha he looking at Manik.
Nandini - ohh main most important baat hi toh bhul gayi isse liye toh kaal tumhe dekh kar ro pari thi tumhari girlfriend Soha. Kya halat ho gayi hai uski bechari. Pehle 2yr toh Hume y nehi pata tha tum kaha ho toh ussne socha tumne usse dhoka diya issi liye ussne shadi karli but when we all know that u r no more ussne apni pati ko divorce de k srif or srif tumhari yaad main zindagi bitana suru kar diya hai. Main abhi use tumhare bare main call kar k bata dungi kitni khush hogi o. Kitni pyaar karti o tumse.
Manik chocked his coffee
Aryaman - Soha e kon hai????
bro tune toh kabhi
Manik rolled his eyes on Aryaman
Nandini tap her shoulders on her mind and enjoy Manik's horrified face.
Nandini - Yes Soha Manik ki long time n serious girl friend unke bich toh sooo much love tha or sayed hai bhi. Manik tumne bataya nahi o sorry tumhe toh kuch yaad nahi hai na.
Manik face is now hell annoying.
Aryaman understand Manik's anger blast any time.
Acha Nandini ji hum chalte hai meri buya waiting for us. Hum baad main milenge.
Nandini - Ok milna jarur mujhe or bhi sab kuch Manik ko yaad dilana hai. Aryaman meri number toh le lo.
They exchange their number.
Aryaman - Hum kaal raat ko hi Mumbai chale jayenge.
Nandini - Ok then Mumbai me milte hai mujhe tum dono ko meri engagement k liye invite bhi karni hai. 2 week k baad ana zaroor main tum dono ko personally invite karne jaungi. And mujhe Manik and Soha ko bhi toh milana hai...
Aryaman and Manik go from there.

So step 1 Complete well played Nandini

Tujhe tujse bhi jada janti hu main
Teri haar Chupi ko bhi samajh ti hu main
kitni bhi koshish karle dur jana mujhse
tujhe tujse hi jeet lungi main

Aryaman - Bro what was that? Soha kon hai?Aapki girlfriend tune kabhi nehi bola mujhe.
Manik - Just shut up. Tujhe samajh nehi aya o mujhe provoked kar rehi thi.
Aryaman - Kuch bhi bol this girl is something
The Manik Malhotra ki hosh udra diya ussne.
Manik - Ab hotel chale nehi toh nyonika kha jaygi tujhe.
Ary-ok bro chalo! with a large smile.

manik's hotel
Nyenika - kaha the tum dono. I am waiting for you Manik
Aryaman - o buya sorry Aunty hum beach pe the.
Nyonika - whatever Manik take those files and read them. Tomorrow meeting mei you represent our Malhotra industry. I want everything perfect.
Manik and Aryaman about to leave
Nyonika - Aryaman ruko I have some important discussion for tomorrow party.
Manik come to his room.

Manik Pov

Nandini is not done main tumhe mujhse dur rakhna chata hu n tum mere sath game khel rehi ho.

Teri zid k age har bar haar Jata hu main
Teri pyaar k age har bar jhuk Jata hu main

kyu zid kar rehi ho Nandini tumhari zid tumhe hi mushkil mai le jaigi. Iss bar main tumhare pyaar k age nehi jhuk sakta sirf tumhari bhalai k liye.

Nandini's Hotel

Cabir - Abhi sab detiles main bol.
Abhi- ok
Abhi pov
when our meeting is almost finished then
Nyonika Malhotra came and announces about Malhotra industry's new MD then she invite Manik Malhotra when I hear this name I dont believe it but when Manik enter on Conference room I just frozen on my place. My mind just blank after he finish his intro he personally greeted eveyone. Jab o mere pass aya he is normally greeted me just like others ussne toh mujhe pehchaan na hi nehi.
Mukti - o Drama kar raha tha or use sacch mai kuch yaad nahi hai.
Abhi - I didn't know.
Aliya- Toh hume usse confront karna chaiye.
Dhruv - Agar usse sacch mai kuch yaad na ho toh.
Cabir - jald se jald sab kuch clear karna parega.
Dhruv - o Malhotra industry ki MD hai hum ese hi baat nehi kar sakte.
Mukti - Now what can we do???
Abhi- Toh kaal party mai usse milke sab clear karte hai na.
Aliya - Party???
Abhi- After meeting evening ko bussiness association ki party hai.
Navya - Matarani aapki lakh lakh sukar hai ki Manik zinda hai. Par Nandini ko u kaise bole use jab pata chalegi toh o kush hogi bt Manik usse na pehchaan paya toh o tuk jayegi.
Cabir - Toh e baat Nandini se chupa lete hai.
Kya chupana hai mujhse?? Nandini entered the room.
Nandini - Maine sun liya hai tum logo ki baatein. Mujhe pata hai ki Manik zinda hai main abhi usse milke arehi hu.
Kya???? all unison.
Nandini - Maine usse kaal hi dekh liya tha.
Cabir - Tu tik hai na.
Nandini - bohot acchi hu o bhi bohot din k baad and don't worry usse jaldi sab yaad dila dungi mai.

Nyonika's Room

Nyonika - Aryaman tum apna kam tik se kar rehi na. Dekho tum meri sage bhai k beta ho I only trust u. Tum He toh pata hi hai maine tumhare or tumhari bahen k liya kya kuch kiya hai now its ur turn.
Arymaan - I know buya sorry Aunty.
Nyonika - Dekho I only trust u tum Manik k sath uski Shadow banke rehna. uski har information mujhe dena.
Aryaman - Ok.
Nyonika - And one more thing Kalki party bussiness association ki hai but I want only hilighted Malhotra industry. Do it and now u go...

Aryaman pov

I know buya u do lots of things for us but main Manik k sath or bura hona nehi de sakta. Kuch rishte khun se bardi hoti hai and Manik k sath mera rishta khun se rishte se jada hai. Or main Manik and Nandini ko ek karke rahunga. Yes buya Main Manik k Shadow banke uske sath rahunga and sab burai se uski hifazat karunga. Buya very Sorry and Manik phir se MaNan banke liye ready ho jao.
He take his cell and
Hello
Nandini u remember me main bro ki bhai Aryaman.
Nandini - ha bolo.