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Posted: 9 years ago
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part-4
Khyoya khoya hu main har pal yeha.
Har saas adhura hai tere bina
bewafa na hoke bhi na kar paya wafa tujse
bada kar ke bhi na nibha paya usse.
chudt rahi hai zindagi ret ki tarha
Srif teri ek jhalak pane ki arzoo rahi gi sada

Wow u r great kitni acha likhte ho tum or ek please bhai[ a 26 th yr old boy said his frnd] I don't understand shayari so please tell ur frnd sing a song in US plzzz.
and plzz sad song nehi ok... [a 19yrs girl said her bhai]
Bro sab tujse gaana suna chate hai but no sad wala I know ur favourite is sad songs but for us for all tik tak sa song ga de...
Ok

Dekh yeh kaisa hai..
Person close his eyes and remember some one face

Saari raat aahein bharta
Pal pal yaadon mein marta
Maane na meri mann mera..

[He remembers someone smiling face her sweet talks, pouty face, cubby cheeks,]

Thode thode hosh madhoshi si hai
Neem behoshein si hai
Jaane kuch bhi na mann mera

[he close his eyes and remembers her long hair, cute fights beatiful memories now he saw her infrnt of his eyes, She wearing white churidar, bunch of silver bangles, and silver jhumka, she came to him now she is very close to him she cupped his face and close his ear and telling something and her hand on his eye now he close his eyes and travelling his beautiful past where he belong to]

Kabhi mera tha par ab begaana hai yeh
Deewana deewana sumjhe na ho
Kabhi chup chup rahe kabhi gaaya ye kare
Bin pooche tere tarifen sunaya ye karen
Hai koi haqeeqat tu ya koi fasana hai
Kuch jaane agar toh itna ki yeh tera deewana hai
Hai re mann meraa.. maane na mann meraa..

[Now he remembers his first meeting with Her, when she get down of taxi and struggling with her long hair and jar which is on her hand,... Suddenly his eyes fall on her and he save save her jar, how they first time talk to her.,]

Rag rag woh samaya mere
Dil par woh chaaya mere
Mujh mein woh aise jaise jaa
Gire barsaat mai paani jaise
Koi kahaani jaise
Dil se ho dil tak jo bayaan
Aashiq dil tera purana hai yeh
Deewana deewana samjhe na ho

[He think how she tell him she like him, how she forcefully kiss him, How first time she tell him she only love him, And how growth a beautiful relationship, how they became two body one soul]

Kabhi chup chup rahe kabhi gaaya ye kare
Bin pooche tere tarifen sunaya ye karen
Hai koi haqeeqat tu ya koi fasana hai
Kuch jaane agar toh itna ki yeh tera deewana hai
Hai re mann meraa.. maane na mann meraa..

[Now he opens his eyes and saw she smile to him, She just enjoy his song, her beautiful smile make him Complete, But suddenly she dis appear, like every time,]

Tujhko jo dekhe yeh mujhko leke
Bas tere peeche peeche bhaage..
Tera junoon hai tu hi sukoon hai
Tujhse hi bandhein dil ke dhaage
Hai re mann meraa.. maane na mann meraa..

Wow bro it's amazing but kiske liye gaya, Teri eyes and teri smile mai e clear tha tu kisi o yaad karke e gaa raha tha...

Rab se bhi upar jise raka hai humne
Har dhadkan main basaya hai jise
e gaana usse k liye gaya hai maine

The Great Manik Malhotra kabhi kabhi hum normal logo se normal tarike se baat bhi karle

Teri Shayari mujh se toh samjhi nehi jati...
But Must say dude The Manik Malhotra only hair of Malhotra industry also a great singer. Why u not take singing professionaly.

Zindagi Mein Jo paya woh chahat nehi hoti.
or Har chahat zindagi mein puri nehi hoti.

Bol Na manik manik kabhi toh baat bhi kiya kar...

zindagi ne laya mujhe iss more pay.
baat karne ke liye laabs kam pare jubwape
kisi ko saamjawau mai kya
jee raha hu zindagi k bina.

Ok Samajh gaya abhi bol hum India kab ja rehe hay. Time agaya hai India mai sabko Malhotra industry ki only hair k sath introduce kar diya jai.

Next week...
u sure na Nyonika aunty ne mujhe bola hai jitni jaldi ho sake india Jane ko
I am sure...
Now I want some time alone please Aryaman.
Mujhe akela chorde kuch time k liye.
Ok bhai meet u tomorrow...
Next week I am coming India abhi sabko meri bare main sabPata chala jayega. But I don't want u misunderstood me 5 yr tumse dur rehna manzoor hai but tumhari nafrat mujhe manzoor nehi...

India.

Har ek raat bitthi hai teri yaad main
Har ek subha hoti hai teri intezaar main.

Aur Ek nayi din suru ho gayi aru phir se tumhare liye meri nehi intezar...
Aiyappa please give me strength mujhe apni gham ko chupake smile karne liye and sab ko khush rakh ne k liye sakti dena. Plzzz Ayippa mujhe kamjor mat hone dena...
Hello chacha, Good Morning chachi, Rishabh didi ko good morning wish nehi karege ...
Rishab - Goo... oo... d mor... ning. Nann... diniii.. didi.
Very slowly he manage to say it...
Now nandini is very happy Rishabh tu kitni improve ho gaya hai...
Chachi - Ha.. Nandini Madhyam ne toh jadu kar liya jo kisi doc ne nehi kar paya uss ne kar diya.
Nandu - ha chachi he is very good on his job..
Chachi- Nandu time hogaya hai ab toh shadi ki baat ko age barani hai.
Nandini - Chachi plzz.
Morning mai kya baat ho rahi hai hum sab ko Chord ke. Or chachi kya banaya hai breakfast main Cabir said... [fab5, Abhi and Navya enter Murthi house]
Nandu - Tum sab yaha
Mukti - Yes hum sab chachi k hatke chole khane aye hai... Tujhe koi problem hai...
Chachi- re baccho ayo na maine aaj chole k sath tomato kheer bhi banaya hai.. test karo ge tum sab.
Now Fab5 and Abhi Navya face is pale.
This time Nandini's face is full of smile...
Ok chachi we all also test is Navya said it...
After breakfast
Hum sab yeha Nandini ko shopping k liye le jana hai next week hum sab Goa ja rehe hai.
Nadu-Yeh kab fixed huya.
Abhi-Kaal raat ko aur kab baby doll meri ek bussiness meeting hai so mujhe or Mukti ko jana tha toh sabne socha kyu na ki sab ek sath kuch din choti spend karle.
Mukti - Kitni din hogaya hum sabne koi holiday main nehi gaye hai..
Nandini - Par mujhe nehi jana.
Navya-plzz nandu agar tum nehi jaoge toh hum bhi nehi jayenge..
Cabir- Chachi boliye na Nandini ko...
Chachi- Nandini sab ko ese naraz nehi karte..
Plzz plzz plzzz all unison..
ok baba main jaungi.. Happy.. finally Nandini says..
Chachi- Nandu madhyam ko bhi Jane k liye invite karna
Nandini - Nehi chachi o doctor hai he must be busy hume use disturb nehi karna chahiye.
Chachi- Ok beta jaisi tu tik samjhe...
Now all goes to shopping...


meri shayari mujhe toh nehi ayi samajh.
par tum sab samajh jao toh kar dena comments...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Part - 4
badi lage kitni bhi yeh duniya
ho jati hai choti kismat k age
rab ne chaha toh mil jate hai ussi se
dur rehna chahte hai jisse

Next week Goa---

Finally hum Goa aahi gaye thank you so much nandini tu ane k liye man gayi kitne din baad hum sab ek sath outing pe aye hai haina Cabir
..
Navya don't thanks main bhi yeha ake happy hu..
Acha abhi tour plan bolo mukti excitedly ask
Abhi-Dekho kaal or parsu meri meeting hai so e 2 din tum sab spend karo apni tarara then I will join all of u phir baki 2 din party time ok...
Cabir- ok Abhi, toh agle 2 din hum sab site seen kar lenge ok Navya ji...
Mukti - Thank god tum sab aye humare saath nehi toh kya karti main e 2 din
Dhruv-accha Abhi teri 2 din tak chale wali e meeting kis baat ki hai..
Abhi- Dhruv y India ki sab big industries ki Private meeting hai yeha sab company apni MD o seIntroduction karen ge and kuch legal issues pe discuss hogi and kuch rules set hoga sab company k bich. U all know it's most important meeting sab ko attend karna parta hai. And most interesting kuch company apni nehi generation ko iss meeting me sane layega.
Alya - Sounds interesting. but Dhruv baby why interested all of this plzz tum srif mujhpe interest lo na...
Mukti - Dhruv toh sirf tujpei interested hai kabhi toh usse kisi or baat bhi karne diya kar... But thanks for coming tum sab na ate toh 2 din main kya karti...
Cabir - ok sab fresh ho jao then lunch karte huye baat karte hai...
Afternoon
All r busy on lunch and chit chatting..
But Nandini is busy on her Manik land

Sab ke saath hu phir bhi akeli hu
Sab se bhol rahi hu phir bhi chup hu
Sab ke sath has rahi hu phir bhi
Ro rehi hu
Zinda hu phir bhi mar chuki hu main
[written by NJ my sis / frnd she want I use it on tum bin]

Sab kitni khush hai Manik hum bhi itni hi khush hote agar tum sath hote Nandini thinking herself...
Navya - Are Nandini tu itni chup kyu hai plzz kuch bol evening ki kya plan hai..
Alya- Shopping chale.
Dhruv - ok baby.
Kya ok baby main koi shopping nehi jaunga - Cabir irritatedly said.
Navya - Toh Kya kare..
Abhi- re maine pehle se hi plan banaya hai we all go for party..
Mukti - Thanks Abhi. Nehi toh main shopping pe bore hoti.
Alya - Nandini tum party pe chal rehi ho na.
Nandini - plzz guys u all know na i dont liked party. Plzz mujhe nehi jana I want to go beach.
Mukti trying to says something but Cabir stop her.
Abhi- ok baby doll Jisme teri khushi...
Evening
Fab4, Navya and Abhi going for party...
Nandini on beach, Nandini walking on beach Ans watching sunset... And
[back to my shayeri]

Dhalte huye suraj ki tarah chale gaye andhera karke zindagi meri.
Chand ki Roshan ki tarha teri yaad karti hai Roshan har pal meri.
Laheroki ki tarha aye the chale jane ke liye.
par hawa ki taraha bas gaye saaso mai meri...

Nandini thinking about her parents and past life and her manik...
Suddenly she hear music and then her favourite and most familiar voice

Apne karam kee kar ataayein
Yaaraa, Yaaraa.. yaaraa..

Nandini run towards to this voice she saw a some children making round circle around a man who sing this song..

Mujh ko iraade de
Kasmein de, vaade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaaney de
Naye bahaaney de
Khwaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimaane de
Apne karam ki kar ataayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Nandini close her eyes tears falls on her eyes. She know this is her only her manik voice but it's real or she just imagine it.
5YEARS she just wait only hear this voice want only see one face. It's this time to see him.

Dil ki anjan dor ne dekhai ek rasta
pyaar ki bandhan ne jagai ek astha
na dimag na Zamane se rehe koi wasta
Bas Teri hone ki ek hi aas rahegi sada

What I am thinking its right or not but dil kyu y kay raha hai y tum hi ho...

Sun rahaa hai naa tu
Ro rahaa hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hoon main
You're listening, right?
I am crying here..
You're listening to me right..
Why I am crying here..
Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoyaa hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltijaa
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai..
Haan..

Song is finished all children r clapping and happy now they requested to singer one more song but he trying to go from there...

Hawa ne di dastak teri.
Dil ne sunai aahat teri.
jis chehre ko dekhne ki arzoo thi nazaro ko meri.
Usse nazare milane ki himmat juto kaise.

Mujhe jana hoga I don't want to face her he about to go.
Ma... nik, Manik... Nandini screams...

Shahed se bhi jada miti awaaz teri.
Rok di kadmo ko chalne se pehle meri.

Person frozen on his place...

Now Nandini run to him and she trun him on her side...

jis chehre ko dekhne ki arzoo leke zinda hu mai
Najar ke samne le aya usse khuda ne aaj.
Sune dil ko mila sakun aaj.
Par chaake bhi bata pauna usse...

Manik tum agay I know tum mere paas wapas agaya o sab jhut tha na. I know tum zinda ho issi liye toh meri saas bhi chal rehi hai... 5yr tum He meri yaad nehi ayi. Itni tume lag gaya mujhe surprised dene k liye...
Manik just watching her without blinking his eyes...

chahat se bhi zyada chaha jise
Rabse se bhi zyada puja jise...
Mannat se bhi zyada manga jise.
samne hai o meri aaj par
mil k bhi mil na paunga usse.

Manik kuch toh bolo plzz I want u hear, I want to feel u plzzz manik...
plzzz chup mat raho u know na i cant live without you phir kyu chale gaye I met ur badi maa o kitni royi. esa koi karta hai. Chup kyu ho tum. tumhe bilkul bhi meri yaad nahi ayi. Bolo na Manik kaha the tum now she touch his face and check his face and body for any injuries marks... Manik tum tik ho na uss accident se tumhe kuch huya toh nehi.
plzz chup mat raho say something na.
Manik plzzz...
May I know u mam? Manik ask to Nandini...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Well update
Was nice
Par yeh jhatka
Kyu diya
Iski baato se lag raha
Tha he remember
Her and now
He said
May I knew u mam
Yaar Please next part asap
Taki yeh pata chal sake
Chal kya raha ha
Eagerly impatiently
Waiting for next update
Love
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
waiting fr the next part...wht will happen next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
God...i just can't imagine the pain which they are bearing since so long... Her love...it's so pure...n now he is back...i hope he'll accept her soon instead of faking that he don't recognise her... Plzz..cont. soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Omg... Just speechless
Amazing update dear
Am so curious wat will happen next
Pls update asap
Tqvm for the pm
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Kitni pain bear kar rahe honge Voh dono
Both parts were awesome
All the sayaris were toh wonderful
Please next part soon
Thanks for the pm

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manik lost his memory...

maybe due to accident or maybe he is pretending ignored to protect everyone from neyonika and raj...

glad that nandu heard his voice...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nc update.
Finally atleast they met.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Well update

Was nice
Par yeh jhatka
Kyu diya
Iski baato se lag raha
Tha he remember
Her and now
He said
May I knew u mam
Yaar Please next part asap
Taki yeh pata chal sake
Chal kya raha ha
Eagerly impatiently
Waiting for next update
Love
Diya😛



Thank you so much.
And I am trying to write next part hope I will update tomorrow.

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