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neetimehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

Good kya super duper mahagood tha

that was mindblowing

mujhe esa feel ho raha he ki manik knows about nandu crush and that also she kissed him

well lets see wat gonna happn next

update soon

thanx for pm

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isharoxx

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Posted: 9 years ago

OMG!!! IT WAS AMAZIIING!!!!

I am sure manik knows its her n he also knows that she knows it was him...waiting for next update!!

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Ammu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey doll
Thanks for the pm
This was way too awesome...
Nandu is just super cute and has a very great crush on manik little she know its not only a mere crush rather than true feelings
Wow mukku is manik's sister...
Hmm...manik is basketball player too that's wow
Yayy they had their first liplock... Wo be unknown to manik who it was... But somewhere deep down I think he can also realize her touch and aroma... So he too responded... Am i right??... Doll its simply wowww continue soon na pretty please
Take care stay blessed

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A.N

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am so sure..manik knows that its nandini...I so wanna see Manik running behind her asking...

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deekshagarg

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Posted: 9 years ago

Now the title 'mysterious kiss' suites better..

It was soo beautiful.. I loved the way nandini expressed herself throughout..

Just waiting for the next part.. please update a part in which their is manik's POV.. about the kiss.. if not now then a after 2-3 updates..

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Arunima

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aiyyo it was great,
hayee I just love it.

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anjali3010

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey...it was superb...continue soon...cant wait for d next update...:-)

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Chocolava14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oohhh...wwwooowww...it was tooo gooodd..👏👏

I m literally in luv wid ur writings...i mean the way you wrote nandu's character...explained her...it was just perfectt👏

I so verryy luvd d story lyn...so exciting it is...kissing ur crush...awww😉😳😳

It was just brilliant...m in luvd wid dis...do continue soon...luv u<3

Always keep writing😊

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sophia

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update dear kavya!!! Keep writing kavya!!!

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rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi dear update was superb and the kiss is a mystery one waiting for next one

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