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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Superb, interesting
un believable ,fantanstic, no words...😊
waiting for next.👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
awesome, amazing... super
amazing concept...
beautifully penned...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Gd naaa ...its amazing
What an intro of space students hahahahahaha super naa gadhe hai sare 😆😆
Nandu has a big crush on him and mukti is manik's sis and her best frnd
And the KISS 😳😳
Thanx for pm
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
It ws fantastic
I wish ppl get dat lucky with their crush hehe
It ws suprb
Nd i think manik ko bhi crush hoga uspe
May b
Thnq fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Update was amazing. ...too good...
Really loved the story concept... smthing different
Keep it up...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Are u crazy!!! y r u nervous!!! this was such a fab concept, fabulously written👏 i so loved everything abt it!
AND UK I THOUGHT MANIK KISSES HER, WHEN I READ THE PROMO AND I EVEN THOUGHT THAT HE KNOWS THE GIRL IN HIS ARMS IS NANDINI... WELL IK HE KNOWS THAT SHE WAS NANDINI... AND FOR HOW I KNOW KI HE KNOWS THAT SHE WAS NANDINI, READ THE COMMENT BELOW, Hehe🤣
so i start from the begining only!!
haha i loved the way she introduced herself❤️ she actually is a non stop chatter box😆
aww she loves MANIK MALHOTRA the most popular guy of the college...and she feels speacial anf diiferent around him unlike other, becoz MM is not a mere crush... but her DEEP LOVE😳
and she is "I'm all predicable with my unpredictability..." i loved this the most abt her intro, nice it was😉
and muk had to be there, after all it u who is writing... and i love her! so always keep her in ur stories😃
OMG so mukti is nandini's BFF and manik's sis... interesting😊 and she is what? we will know it soon! mystery mystery mystery... soon hi disclose karna😛
(P.S. I LOVE MANIK AND MUKTI URF PARTH AND CHARLIE KA BOND😃)
hahaha no no she doesn't want to become his sister! LOL🤣
aww... so manik knows she exist.. hehe well there is more to it which she doesn't know;) and he even share his SECRETS with her!!! still she doesn't know that... that what i came to know and u already know😆 AND YES INDEED THEY HAVE A SPECIAL VERY SPECIAL BOND❤️
she is happy to go in that party just becoz she will get to see him, & she can never get tired of adoring him.. aww... and YES THERE IS A VERY BIG DIFFERENCE B/W OGLING AND ADORING... there is... and only nandini has a right to adore him, hehe😆
oh ho smiles were being exchanged... but ek sec if she would have looked at him she would have exploded, haha..
manik mukti ko akele kaam karne ke liye chad kar aaya gaya, haha hamara lazy manik malhotra😆
ahem ahem... vibes and all she knew it was him aww...
and her mr. crush saved her... how can he not!
AND OMG SHE KISSED HIM, LIKE OMG OMG OMG! guts she has!!!!!
And he kissed her back... but then she left, i thought she must be angry at herself but she was happy infact blushing... she kissed her crush... y will she not blush😳
and there is nothing bad in being selfish in love... yes it's love! SHE LOVES HIM.. SHE DOES
and she think he didn't knew that it was her, but he knew...
coz if he didn't knew then he would not kiss back and HE LOVES HER TOO.. becoz if he didnt love her he wouldn't have kissed her... and it was always love coz MM was smiling at a girl... coz MM was sharing secrets with a girl...
IT WAS ALWAYS LOVE... HOPE THEY REALIZE soon...
and now uk what now i'm gonna fantasize something like this now😆like uk i actually imagined my love story with a STRANGER... and now its gonna be this😃
how i wish this story never ends:p
and v missed u so much... ur stories r addiction babe! can't survive without them! how can u write so well?
love u❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Oh my God ! Oh my God ! That was so freaking awesome ! Gurl,how can you write so well? I mean like seriously ! That was just beyond perfect and interesting...I am having goosebumps only by thinking wats gonna happen next ! Eee ! Too much excited...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
wt an update...
awsom it was...
keep writing dear...
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Originally posted by: LoveIsMusic

<font size="2">Are u crazy!!! y r u nervous!!! this was such a fab concept, fabulously written👏i so loved everything abt it!</font>

<font size="2">AND UK I THOUGHT MANIK KISSES HER, WHEN I READ THE PROMO AND I EVEN THOUGHT THAT HE KNOWS THE GIRL IN HIS ARMS IS NANDINI... WELL IK HE KNOWS THAT SHE WAS NANDINI... AND FOR HOW I KNOW KI HE KNOWS THAT SHE WAS NANDINI, READ THE COMMENT BELOW, Hehe🤣</font>
<font size="2">so i start from the begining only!!
</font>
<font size="2">haha i loved the way she introduced herself❤️she actually is a non stop chatter box😆</font>
<font size="2">aww she loves MANIK MALHOTRA the most popular guy of the college...and she feels speacial anf diiferent around him unlike other, becoz MM is not a mere crush... but her DEEP LOVE😳</font>
<font size="2">and she is "I'm all predicable
with my unpredictability..." i loved this the most abt her intro, nice it was😉</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">and muk had to be there, after all it u who is writing... and i love her! so always keep her in ur stories😃</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">OMG so mukti is nandini's BFF and manik's sis... interesting😊 and she is what? we will know it soon! mystery mystery mystery... soon hi disclose karna😛</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">(P.S. I LOVE MANIK AND MUKTI URF PARTH AND CHARLIE KA BOND😃)</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">hahaha no no she doesn't want to become his sister! LOL🤣</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">aww... so manik knows she exist.. hehe well there is more to it which she doesn't know;) and he even share his SECRETS with her!!! still she doesn't know that... that what i came to know and u already know😆AND YES INDEED THEY HAVE A SPECIAL VERY SPECIAL BOND❤️</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">she is happy to go in that party just becoz she will get to see him, & she can never get tired of adoring him.. aww... and YES THERE IS A VERY BIG DIFFERENCE B/W OGLING AND ADORING... there is... and only nandini has a right to adore him, hehe😆</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">oh ho smiles were being exchanged... but ek sec if she would have looked at him she would have exploded, haha..</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">manik mukti ko akele kaam karne ke liye chad kar aaya gaya, haha hamara lazy manik malhotra😆</font>
ahem ahem... vibes and all she knew it was him aww...
and her mr. crush saved her... how can he not!
AND OMG SHE KISSED HIM, LIKE OMG OMG OMG! guts she has!!!!!
And he kissed her back... but then she left, i thought she must be angry at herself but she was happy infact blushing... she kissed her crush... y will she not blush😳
and there is nothing bad in being selfish in love... yes it's love! SHE LOVES HIM.. SHE DOES
and she think he didn't knew that it was her, but he knew...
coz if he didn't knew then he would not kiss back and HE LOVES HER TOO.. becoz if he didnt love her he wouldn't have kissed her... and it was always love coz MM was smiling at a girl... coz MM was sharing secrets with a girl...
IT WAS ALWAYS LOVE... HOPE THEY REALIZE soon...
and now uk what now i'm gonna fantasize something like this now😆like uk i actually imagined my love story with a STRANGER... and now its gonna be this😃
how i wish this story never ends:p
and v missed u so much... ur stories r addiction babe! can't survive without them! how can u write so well?
love u❤️




See you again made me qoute :P
But I loved it..and I'm glad You liked it 😳
So now let's see aapke predictions kitne True hotte hai!!
Manik ka P.O.V bakki hai na ; )
PS-MANIK SHARES HIS SECRET WITH HER ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
And I'll make u quote, till the time u write :p
I LOVED IT!!!!
and I hope mere predictions true ho;p
P.S. Uk I loveee Manik pov's WHEN U WRITE THEM:)
will be waiting for his pov:) and I hope he is thinking what I thought:p
U said Manik shares his secret with her... And uk what I'm getting a feeling that , that secret is abt his love/girlfriend... OMG! If it's something like this... My predictions will b wrong... But they can be true too;) damn... Idk! i Cant think u only do this thinking ka work !
Take care:*

Originally posted by: star_struck


See you again made me qoute :P
But I loved it..and I'm glad You liked it 😳
So now let's see aapke predictions kitne True hotte hai!!
Manik ka P.O.V bakki hai na ; )
PS-MANIK SHARES HIS SECRET WITH HER ❤️

Edited by LoveIsMusic - 9 years ago

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