#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 79

It hurts when the person you love the most treats you in such way.please take her out soon from store room and don't let anything happen to their child.and thanks for the update

Loved the update as usual. But confused what happened to Manik? Why he thinks ki Nandu betrayed him?

It was so emotional :'( n u ve penned down ur views very beautifully !! Its fly nyc :)

hey aashna gosh your dhamki works man! i dont know if you will be able to reply me and i totally understand after such a response you might not be able to... i respect that! leme share something... all the writers in this forum are fab! so are you and thus deserve equal respect. being a silent reader since so long of not only yours but all other stories on this forum i wana congratulate each one of u. and haan one more thing being a silent reader doesn't mean at all to disrespect your work. please i know its hurting but please do not think like this. thanks.

ohh god emotional one... N stupid manik... Mtlb misundersatnd krne ki bimmmari h ... Idiot !
Wnt to kill him... :'( ..
POVs was gud yr :)update spoon,

Fabbb

Plz reunion manan just can't read the hurt part

Originally posted by: mishghan

hey aashna gosh your dhamki works man! i dont know if you will be able to reply me and i totally understand after such a response you might not be able to... i respect that! leme share something... all the writers in this forum are fab! so are you and thus deserve equal respect. being a silent reader since so long of not only yours but all other stories on this forum i wana congratulate each one of u. and haan one more thing being a silent reader doesn't mean at all to disrespect your work. please i know its hurting but please do not think like this. thanks.

no offence to anyone.just my point of view. sorry to hurt anybody.

anyways do i need to tell u this?! it was awesome.. i love when there is judaai in any story and then they meet... judaai k baad milne ka apna hi maza hai lekin please don't make this judaai unbearable for us... update asap

i am a little confused though right now as in i feel so many thing chopped of but may be this is how the mystery remains and thus this would unfold later on in the upcoming chapters. will wait for your next part in PM as you've said.

Yeah dhamki works or its ok glad you commented now my eyes are on you from now on you have to be my regular reader if you want forgiveness and unbearable ka toh i can't say anything bcz i told you story is not at all funny or mushy dark zone h extreme to hoga hi no need to confuse on anything first let mystery open than you will understand everything

Really amazing kitna emotional hai...
They both love eachother a lot but y this misunderstandings...