#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 81

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aishaa16 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
read ur whole story in one day...
ur an amazing writer
plzz do pm me ..
Edited by aishaa16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ashu first of all kaan pakkad ke sorry ... really sorry...
that i couldn't comment on last part...
yar m sorry...
but what an update yar...👏
fabulous...
specially the pov parts...
the writers pov manik and nandini pov...
awesome work...
all the emotions beautifully portrayed...
so the scene start with nandini telling neyonika that she is pregnant...
she was happy telling this news..
but neyonika was trying to make her understand that its not easy to be a single mother...
and she is already a single mother...
manik wont accept...
to which nandini is in turmoil and want to stay alone...
she want to take some decision for herself...
and neyonika leaves her...
nandini thinking abt her life...
why life has been so unfair to her...
why manik betrayed her...
she loved manik but in return manik went to another gal...
this reality was making nandini feel disgusting...
but she thought to control her life..
and she decided that now she wont let manik use her...
torture her...
ans hence decide not to tell abt the baby to manik...
as she thinks he does not deserve...
when nandini saw manik on bed with another gal...
she was shattered badly..
only the thought that manik kissed the other gal..
the same way he kissed her..
was breaking her... every second...
she came to her room and was crying badly...
she was letting her anger through tears...
and slept with it...
feeling bad for nandini as to what she is seeing in front of her...
on the other hand manik paid the gal and aksed her to leave...
he was wanted nandini to suffer in same way as he had suffered...
after gathering courage nandini went to mnaik room to talk to him...
nandini told manik that she has done and thank u and she is leaving...
but return manik insulted her...
but kehte hain na devil to hai but be careful with nandini..😆
as manik got a tight slap from nandini...
finally she said she has done with him..
and she is leaving him forever and wont come back..
she has done with him...
but that slap and this was a
manik couldn't bear that nandini will move with dhruv leaving him...
it was heart breaking for him...
he couldn't take it...
and he in anger dragged her to the store room...
and said to stay there...
nandini said she is very scared of it but he brutally replied her to die there...
she was broken completely listening this...
and she broke down..
tears flowing from her eyes..
she was thinking what life has done to her...
the scene was scary amazingly written...
the scary things were visible..
pov amazingly portrayed...
but she was determined to control herself..
for the baby she is carrying...
awesome wow nandini so proud...
that after so much this much courage...
on the other hand manik was also broken..
he loved nandini and thought that is the most amazing feeling...
but he thinks she has betrayed her...
both have misconceptions abt each other..
misunderstandings are there..
so lets see what will happen...
how these misunderstandings will solve...
and i hope things dont go out of control...

Nidhikakarwar thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
U are an amazing writer please pm me and please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update plz update soon plz send me pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
New in fourms. Love ur story. 😊 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
I was silent reader but ur writing skills made me to rpy.. It was just awesome waiting for next update.. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read ur whole story in 2 goes. U r are awesome. U balanced past and present scenes really well with right amount of romance and heartbreaks. Manik behavior is not right even though he might have misunderstanding regarding nandu. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey...be lated happy new year...love this part...manik is so rude...jldi se next update krna...plz
pm me too...
Edited by pinkypatel1993 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hats off man
this isamzing
really u nailed it
thnk u for pm
its awesome blv me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey girl! I am new to this forum and didn't comment earlier. Appologies:) I read it in a single go. You rock, seriously. On a personal level I love the people who write this good. Reading well written stories do things to me and the same happened with yours. :))
You go girl. More power to you. :D

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