#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 77

The update was amazing.. I loved the writer's POV .. Love it.. Update soon.. :)

Gr8 chapter as always ...u write so well that u actually make us cry for N... Poor innocent soil being punished for no fault of hers ... I Hv a feeling Antonia is behind all the misunderstandings & rift created btw Maan ... N is ready to give up her life for M & his baby ... He is gonna b super guilty when he finds the truth ... I liked how u wrote how N delft when she walked into M & other girl naked ... Can't imagine the hell she must Hv gone through
... I hope he accidentally meets the doctor & finds what risk N is taking to save his baby
Continue soon ... Awesome writing !!!!

As I have said before ur updates r awesome...I just love them hope to get next part soon

Sorry for commenting late.sorryyy i'm lil busy as my mom is not well
Fabulous update .
Vry emotional 😒
Can't believe that manik can hurt her soo much..
he toh started loving her na?? But How he became such devil 😡
nandini is too hurt ...she did good by not telling manik about her pregnancy
both are hurt.😔
but i pity nandini . .
she is suffering without even knowing her mistake
their pov's were awesome
plzz if possible include writer's pov also from nxt update
and i'm not understanding nyonika's character...is she really showing sympathy towards nandin or is she still devil minded personality😕
plzz continue soon
thank you soo much for the pm 😊

it was just awesome..pm me also

no no no dont do that
plz do continue ur work
ur one word has put so many in action 😆😆
i have allways been ur admirer n have replyed when eva possible so plz dont scare us

Originally posted by: harshikarocks

Amazing part... I m a little confused.. Is nyonika playing a positive role or a negative one??? Why is manik behaving dis way... He loves nandini but still he is doing all this...when will manik know about the baby??? N the pov were beautifully written...u penned it down beautifully... Luved it... Pls pm me when u update next

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

Well..girl..I read all the parts in one go and must say..you are amazing...

Firstly such big updates and secondly the way this story is been progressed from Kameena Manik to lovey dovey hubby and again a monster..

Comign to nandini..she is, will be a fighter...that girl fought for everything in life..awww...

and Nyonika...what Can i say abt her...Why Dhruv is bringing insecurity to Manik...Aliya ditched him to get a craeere then who spoiled my Manik's mind and made him so ruthless...

What was that, he locked her up in the room with full of insects ,rats and what not and that female is preggy and he dnt knw...

what made him think that she cheated upon him...WHAT...

Dont get disheartened with less comments, you are being appreciated for your wonderful piece of work trust me..in ofce we started disucssing abt ur story...trust me...

Do continue this fantastic story and hats off for showing so many emotions of humans in just an update 👏👏👏

hey di...
amazing update...
vry emotional n touchinggg...
neithr manik is talking to hr nor ltting her go...
he lves hr n she too...
bt a misundrstanding...is seprating bth of thmm...
this track is vry emotional n i m really loving it...
life is nt only a bed of roses it hs thorns too...
so yah i lvd it..
nandu s pov... i m hppy tht she is trying to bcm strong... to ovrcm this pain...
i hope manik cmes to knw the truth ...n improves his mistake...bt i dnt think nandu will b able to frgive him ...easily..n whn will he cm to knw abt their baby...
n i really lvd ur pov..
amazing it ws..
cntinue soonnn..
tc .