#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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muskaangupta123

@muskaangupta123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#741

It was really very good. I just love your updates.
I was not a member of India forums so I couldn't reply but now that I am so I'll make sure I reply to your every post.pls pm me.

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Aditi jain

@kewlgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Hey

M new here

Bt I've read almost all parts of Ur story

First of all

I loved the way you portrayed manan's intimate scene😳

Bt m confused

Y is manik behaving like this? 😕

Have I missed something in the previous parts??

Anyways loved this concept

This is the first time that m commenting on Ur ff

Bt u should know that I really appreciate your work

Continue soon

N pm me if possible 😊

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angel_emmi

@angel_emmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#743

amazing update
loved it...feel bad for nandinii
u should continue with authors pov
keep writing
keep smiling

<3

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sweetaakie

@sweetaakie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#744

I didn't really like this update because it makes me sad and breaks my heart to read Manan fighting with each other after being in love

I loved your writing and I am not criticising your work...hope you understand

You are really good at expressing feelings of the main characters and loved the update where they make love

Thanks for your efforts

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Vidushi

@chocopie26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#745

It was really heart drenching...seriously..the store room part just made me shiver...

I have tears in my eyes ...these two souls are going thru so much...I jst wonder what !Manik will

Feel wen he will cm 2 knw d truth tht Nandini truly loved him...you penned it down very nicely

1request plz tell that what made such drastic change in Manik's behaiviour well. Knw u will tell us wen the tym cms..

N pov's were awesome writer POV also loved it...

Update Soon

Edited by chocopie26 - 9 years ago

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alind713

@alind713

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Posted: 9 years ago

#746

Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please update the next part soon

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Vidushi

@chocopie26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#747

Plz PM me the then nxt Part..

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Nawrin Jahan

@NJahan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#748

amazing update

continue soon

tnx 4 d om

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man1402

@man1402

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Posted: 9 years ago

#749

hey dear,

really loved your story to the core of my heart...

keeep writing and updating

god bless u... and keep shining...⭐️

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manan_pani_luv

@manan_pani_luv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#750

awsum update...emotional...luved it too much waiting 4 nxt

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