#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#731

i jst hope manik 's misunderstndng get solvd

vry emotional prt

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piies96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#732

that was emotional update. but now i am intrigued to know actually what happened ?? why is manik behaving this way 😲

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aishamemon1994

@aishamemon1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#733

dear this part is very emotional and heart talks i like it very much plz add me i send u buddy... plz mai iss story ko bht love karti hn dear plz mjhe bhi pm send karna ok me ronaque. love u di Aashna_chawla

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 9 years ago

#734

Well..girl..I read all the parts in one go and must say..you are amazing...

Firstly such big updates and secondly the way this story is been progressed from Kameena Manik to lovey dovey hubby and again a monster..

Comign to nandini..she is, will be a fighter...that girl fought for everything in life..awww...

and Nyonika...what Can i say abt her...Why Dhruv is bringing insecurity to Manik...Aliya ditched him to get a craeere then who spoiled my Manik's mind and made him so ruthless...

What was that, he locked her up in the room with full of insects ,rats and what not and that female is preggy and he dnt knw...

what made him think that she cheated upon him...WHAT...

Dont get disheartened with less comments, you are being appreciated for your wonderful piece of work trust me..in ofce we started disucssing abt ur story...trust me...

Do continue this fantastic story and hats off for showing so many emotions of humans in just an update 👏👏👏

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absnads

@absnads

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Posted: 9 years ago

#735

amazing and emotional update

what made manik think that nandini is cheating him

plz make him know the truth soon..

update soon.

plz pm me plzzz

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priyanair04

@priyanair04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#736

It was too emotional chapter..pain tat both of them r going through...y cnt they speak up ter heart...oh god...y manik has to b always monster...but both r in pain ..I dnt understand one thing what is nyonika up to..is she really making nandu understand ABT her self respect and telling to b strong or making them go apart...waiting for next ...

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#737

OMG

i have no words to express this chapter

though it was emotional the way you wrote it potrayed the core feeling very well

the depth of emotions could be felt,the irony could be visualized

it was all beautifully written and compilled

and honestly your harwork could be seen and felt as the dialogues and more than that the pov"s

you added had a depth of emotions and aroused the same emotions in me

to be honest i could feel my eyes getting moist as the chapter proceeded

pls you should never stop writing you have amazing writing skills...

pls update the next part soon and cant stop praising the chapter !!!!😛

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Pari

@kyy_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#738

Really interesting chap

It must b really tough fr uh to write these POVs

Hattss off to you fr that

Both r in immense pain

Bt manik has to clear all his doubts by talking to her

He assumes n judges her n believes wat oders say to him

N here nandini always trusts him

Dunno why manik is hurting nandini

He is hurting her n at the same time wen she says to move on he doesnt allow her to do that also

Hope all this will b cleared n alri8 soon

I know this is past n present is diff

Bt still i know all will b alri8

Thankyou

Waiting fr nxt

Lots of love

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SHUBHAYU

@SHUBHAYU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#739

i'm a die hard fan of ur writing👍🏼 . srry i couldnt ever comment bcuz of my slowww 😭2G net its tooo slow i always loved and appreciated ur hard work. so im really a very big wala srry srry srry srry srrry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry srry..😭...plz forgive me if u can ipromish iwil comment in every update again sholly😳keep shining like a star👍🏼

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harshikarocks

@harshikarocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#740

Amazing part... I m a little confused.. Is nyonika playing a positive role or a negative one??? Why is manik behaving dis way... He loves nandini but still he is doing all this...when will manik know about the baby??? N the pov were beautifully written...u penned it down beautifully... Luved it... Pls pm me when u update next

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