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PART 14 B


M: NANDINI

He ran towards nandini and caught her and stood in front of her due to which nandini closed her eyes in fear. She opened her eyes after some time and saw manik standing infront of him. she got afraid and immediately turned manik and checked if he had any injury but she found him fine. She hugged him tighter and he also hugged her more tighter. After sometime she broke the hug

N: manik u r fine na

M: yeah nandini

N: then whom did the bullet hit??

Manik pointed her towards aryaman who was lying on the floor lifelessly. Nandini was shocked to see him dead.

N: who shoot him???

M: police

He pointed her towards a police officer who fired aryaman when he was about to shoot nandini. She felt relief and ran towards CaVya and hugged them. They too responded with equal favor.

All did a group hug due to their success and decided to leave for house.

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All reached to their CabNi house and were eating lunch.

M: sach mey aunty food was superb

D: haa aunty pata nahi shaadi ki baad humari kya hoga in logon ko khana bhanana nahi aata

He said pointing towards alya and mukti

Ab: u r right druv

A: wht?? U guys want us to cook when we were married

D: nahi lekin ek din bhi nahi banavgi kya??

Mu: then u will prepare

Their cute fight was broken by shilpa

Shilpa: bacho when you will get married u will do anything for getting ur loved ones happy cooking is just a small one don't feel they will do it

Nazriya: yeah me and my sis never cooked befor our wedding and we learnt it because of our husband and that too for them only.

All smiled listening to their story. Suddenly something hit in manik brain

M: cabir u said u want to say some thing???

C: yeah

They finished the lunch mean while and all settled themselves in cabir room. Cabir and navya on the bed while alya was sitting in lap of druv and mukti kept her head in abhi lap. Manik and nandini sat beside each other on the couch.

Mu: say atleast kya batane???

C: we are getting married on 5 of next month

All were happy to listen to this and all flung themselves on CaVya for a hug.

M: acha then when is engagement???

C: this Sunday

A: wht??? There is only less time and we have lots of work to do

C: relax alya all were done and only shopping of our clothes is left

Mu: thum kab se plan karrahi hey??

C: mom said to me yesterday only

D: then how all preparations are done

C: they were palnning it from the day I came home and it was finalized yesterday only.

All smiled and settled back in their previous positions and were talking on the arrangements for engagement. Manik felt nandini head on his shoulder and looked towards her she was sleeping peacefully on his shoulder. Manik smiled and kept his hand on her cheeks and she smiled feeling his touch.

C: engagement toh mera hey lekin yaha kisi ka honey moon horaha hey

He said these lines eyeing towards manan. All smiled at his dialogues while manik rolled his eyes.

Cabir continued his teasing session and finally all drifted into sleep in their respective places.





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Nandini woke up after sometime and found her head on manik heart while manik was lying on the couch and she was lying on him and his hands around her shoulder and her hands around her waist. She smiled seeing their position and moved to get up but manik tightened his grip around her and didn't let her to move. Nandini looked around and found none and the room was closed. She kept her one hand on his cheek

N: manik utho na

M: nandini plz 5 mins let me sleep

N: acha thum sojaw but let me wake up

M: nahi be with me only like this I sleep happily in your arms

Nandini smiled listening to his words. Nandini traced his face with her fingers which were turning him on and he was controlling himself with great difficulty. Manik flipped their positions and now nandini is under him and she was shocked with the sudden move of manik

N: manik wht is this??

M: ye question I should ask u??? do u know wht are u doing??? Haa

He asked the question raising his eyebrows and nandini was looking here and there. Manik turned her face towards him with his hand and came close to her face.

M: do u know where your action is leading??

He came close to her lips

M: bolo nandini do u know

Nandini is having a tough time with his proximity and she was not able to utter a word.

M: bolo na

Nandini moved forward and kissed him on his cheeks and manik was shocked with her sudden move and looked at her with his mouth open. She took the chance and pushed him and left from his grip and reached the door and before she opened the door she looked towards manik

N: why are u starring like that do u only have the right to kiss me and I too have the right to kiss u

She left from there saying these words and manik was too shocked that he took 5 minutes to realize what happened. He smiled at her courageous move and smiled to himself

M: get ready Ms. Nandini Murthy u has to pay for this move

He said in a determined tone and left from there.

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Nandini reached downstairs smiling and blushing.

C: lagtahey kisi ka wake up style bahot acha tha

Mu: wht r u saying cabir??

C: arey mey manik ki style ki barimey baat karrahi hu dekho nandini kitna blush kar rahi hey

All now looked towards and smiled understanding cabir dialogues while nandini was now blushing in deeper shade of red. Her blushing was even increased by manik who came and stood beside her

M: kya hua???sab aise kyu dekh rahi hey aur thum itna blush kyu karrahihey

C: vo kya hey na manik baba thum humari ladoo ko kitni achi tarike uthahey na dekho vo kitna blush karrahihey

Manik now understood cabir pranks and glared at him. nandini cant handle cabir teasing anymore excused herself from there.

M: guys stop na see how uncomfortable she is in this matter

C: dekho aagaya nandini ka savior

Manik rolled his eyes upwards.

M: acha vo sab chodo and say me what are these arrangements??

A: its party time for our victory and for these love birds

She pointed towards cavya

M: hoo acha theek hey

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All were sitting in the garden and were busy in partying while manik was getting restless to talk to nandini. He has not seen her since the time he woke up while others were eagerly waiting for their girls.

M: where are these girls??? How much time will they take to come??

C: baba manik wait for some time they will come

D: really how much time they will take yaar

C: agaya manik ki carbon copy

M: shut up cabir jab dekho kisina kiso thang kartha hey

C: vo toh mera all time kaam hey

Ab: see they are here

All turned towards the girls and were speechless to see them. Nandini came in a cream color long frok while mukti is in pink color knee length frok and alya is in red color knee length tight dress while navya is in white color anarkali. All the boys were looking at their girls.

All: beautiful

All the 4 members said this word at a time and smiling seeing them. Girls started to blush listening to their words and sensing their intense gaze on them.

Manik was looking nandini from top to bottom. Nandini was also lost looking at him. manik is in white color shirt and jacket with jeans. All their trance were broken by shilpa and nazriya.

Shilpa: looks like love is in air here

Nazriya: dekho navya kitna khoobsurat hey

Shipla: yes she is so beautiful but my son is more handsome

She said this while hugging cabir.

Manik was not in a mood to listen to anyone.

MANIK POV

I saw her in cream color long frok. She was so beautiful that the dress color was matching to her skin color and she was glowing more than usual. I want to grab her and kiss her till eternity. Stop it manik what are u thinking.

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NANDINI POV

He is looking at me without listening to others I want to hug and kiss him by seeing his cute expressions, and his intense gaze was making me weak on my knee. What to do agar yeha koyi nahi hota toh definatley I am gona kiss him.

POV ENDS

Both of their thoughts were broken by cabir

C: guys lets have some fun

M: wht??

C: matlab lets dance

All agreed to him and decided to dance. All were rocking the dance floor when manik being manik sneaked nandini from there and took her to a corner of a room and closed it. Nandini was shocked by the sudden action of manik. Manik was engrossed in her eyes while nandini was trying to escape from his grip.

N: manik leave me koi dekh lega

M: koi nahi dekh saktha thum ne nahi dekha I locked the room

N: lekin y did u bring me here??

Manik was playing with her fingers and her hair strands. He took her hand in his and kissed her fingers. Nandini was blushing seeing him.

M: to look at u

N: wht??

M: haa I am not able to see u properly down and want to spend some time with u

N: sirf this is the reason

M: haa

By now he was tracing his finger on her face. Nandini was having a tough time to speak.

M: nandu say even u want to spend some time with me na??

Nandini was not saying anything and was looking in his eyes. Manik grabbed her by her waist

M: bolo nandu

N: haaa...

She was stammering with the words and manik took a chance and kissed her on her neck to which she moaned his name. manik smirked seeing her reaction.

M: agar mey thumko itna effect kartha hu then y did u said that u want to leave me and go

Nandini came back to her senses and looked at him with shocked expressions.

M: why are looking like that say na

N: seriously manik I said na I cant leave u

M: then y did u say that??

N: manik its just a joke

Manik became angry grabbed her by her waist and spoke very angrily.

M: never ever pull that to me again...samji thum

Nandini was worried for him because she didn't see this side of manik before.

N: I am sorry manik

She apologized holding her ears. Manik smiled seeing her childish behaviour and immediately pulled her for bone crashing hug. Nandini too responded with equal fervor.



so here is the update

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i think this is the episode in which i wrote more manan

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prathyusha

Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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Awsmmm

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Awsmmm

Big wala update

Awsmmm super cute manan scene

Lovely talk and teases

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Coun sooon
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nyyc update Sab thik ho gya finally
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Awesome update
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