manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB)

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: MyGuitarVina
very nice story
read in one go
like concept very much
update soon

thanks a lot

i am glad u liked it

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: Manishadevnani
I came across it story 2day only I really lyked it...
By let me tel u u r really testing my patience n yes itna said krvaya h toh wan manan confession spl...
N who is dat guy jiska marriage proposal aaya 4 nandu if it is maniks dad den y is he hiding dis manik n mukti bcoz he toh knws he luv her...
Update soon...
Begging dnt separate manan...

thanks a lot

i am very much glad that u liked it

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#503

He ran towards nandini and caught her and stood in front of her due to which nandini closed her eyes in fear. the bullet is fired.

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D: haa aunty pata nahi shaadi ki baad humari kya hoga in logon ko khana bhanana nahi aata

He said pointing towards alya and mukti

Ab: u r right druv

A: wht?? U guys want us to cook when we were married

D: nahi lekin ek din bhi nahi banavgi kya??

Mu: then u will prepare

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. Manik felt nandini head on his shoulder and looked towards her she was sleeping peacefully on his shoulder. Manik smiled and kept his hand on her cheeks and she smiled feeling his touch.

C: engagement toh mera hey lekin yaha kisi ka honey moon horaha hey

He said these lines eyeing towards manan.

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N: manik utho na

M: nandini plz 5 mins let me sleep

N: acha thum sojaw but let me wake up

M: nahi be with me only like this I sleep happily in your arms

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C: lagtahey kisi ka wake up style bahot acha tha

Mu: wht r u saying cabir??

C: arey mey manik ki style ki barimey baat karrahi hu dekho nandini kitna blush kar rahi hey

All now looked towards and smiled understanding cabir dialogues while nandini was now blushing in deeper shade of red.

so here is the short sa promo

but it think its not short

next one will be the longest part

of mine till now

thanks for ur response to the last part

keep ur blessings on me on the same way

i want to apologize now only

as many of u requested me of manan scenes

and while adding them

the confession part is going back for 2 parts

dont know wht to do

want to see confession fastly or need manan in every part from now

do help me

i will edit it based on ur views

spread love

love u all

prathyusha

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#504

seventh position in hall of fame

first time came in top 10

thank u friends its all possible only because of u

all

thanks a lot

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Swagatika

@sws2

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#505

Nice promo

Congratulationsss

🥳

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#506

its totally up to u
nice promo
bullet manik ko lagi kya?
manan scene ki jhoti si jhalak hi bht awesome the upar se kabir ki teasingss
update soon
take care
ty for pm

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#507

Want both. ..

Manan scenes and confession..

Awesome promo..

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#508

congo and nice promo update soon

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#509

Congrats for the position in hall of fame.awesome promo.dhrulya and mukti's convo was amazing.mananbir's convo was mindblowing.eagerly waiting for update. Thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊