HUM HAI DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE (CHAP 30 ON PAGE NO.136) - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update love the way nandini did mimicry of manik
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat an amazing update...
Nandini acts as manik... Nd r manan intimate scene...
Bt nandini wear gown wo bhi bckless ab toh gyi nandini... Kaise smbhalegi manik ko
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Posted: 9 years ago
This story is getting damn interesting with every update
You are going a fab job there gal
Kudos to u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read your story for first time and am head over heels in love with it... Such an interesting story... I don't about other readers but I loved over protective side of Manik...
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey
I just read your story today in one-go
N I must tell you that itz a superb story
Thanks for giving us such a lovely story
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAP 13:

Nandini was constantly calling him but he was not picking up his phone. She went near roy and asked "roy manik nhi aaye ab tak cabir bhai to keh rahe the k wo kab ke nikal gye he office se" and roy replied "manik sir to aaye the party mein pr wo 5 minute main ghar wapas chale bhi gye" Nandini was very shocked and replied "chale bhi gye roy pls ghar chalo muje ghar jana hai abhi" and she informed her friends and left the party with roy.

Manik was sitting on the bar chair. He was drinking and smoking and thinking about party. Nandini came and saw manik was drinking she came near and put her hand on his shoulder but he jerked her hand and said sarcastically "nandu itni kyun jaldi aa gyi go and dance with Aryamaan and show your backless gown to everyone go main roy ko bolta hoon wo tumhe drop kar dega chalo" Nandini was very shocked but she tried to explain him "no manik aisa nhi hai maine sari hi pehni thi but alya aur mukti sab ne forcefully.." she was about to continue her sentence but manik cut her off "oh god nandu you are not a kid jo tumhe koi ku6 kahega aur tum wo karogi" Nandini again said with tearful eyes "manik pls trust me.." but manik throw a glass on the floor and pinned her to the wall and said "how many times I have told k sirf main tumhe aise dekh skta hoon sirf main tumhe touch kr skta hoon..!! you know that I don't like this such types of clothes on your body but tumhe kya fark padta hai kitni bar bola hai maine k you are only mine only and only mine but you don't care about my feelings tumhe mere alawa sab ku6 pasand hai aur mere dil mein jo pyar jo junnon jo deewangi tumhare pyar ke liye hai na wo tumhare dil main mere liye kahin nhhi hai, its just like one sided love only from me haina Nandini?" Nandini was just looking at him and he jerked her and said "you know what Nandini go from here go right now in the room right Nandini without saying anything left the hall and came into the room and changed her clothes lay down on the bed and she was crying silently.

In the late night manik came to his room and saw that Nandini was sleeping. He lay down beside her. Her back was facing him and manik touched her arm and said "Nandini" but she said nothing manik again try but again no response manik was thinking something when he heard silent sobs of his doll. He came near her and said "nandu pls doll just once look at me" but Nandini shut her eyes and said "muje subah jaldi uthana hai so pls let me sleep" and manik can feel her pain but he said nothing and made a note and stick on the side table of Nandini "doll pls muje bhi jaldi utha dena subah 7'o clock office kal jaldi jana hai" and manik kissed her arm and drifted into sleep.

Nandini woke up early in the morning. She saw the sticky note of manik. She went to bathroom and got ready in sari. She saw at watch and she also sticks a note on the manik's side table "manik get up its 7 clock now" and went down.

Manik woke up at 8'o clock and he shout "doll muje uthaya kyun nhi?" he was about to continue but he saw nandini's note and he laughed out loud and went bathroom to got ready. Nandini was preparing his breakfast and manik called Nandini "nandu mere kapde?" but Nandini didn't reply him and manik saw his clothes were ready as always. She was just ignoring him. manik sighed in defeat and get down for breakfast. He was eating his breakfast silently. Nandini went in kitchen and manik left for the office. Nandini came to dining table and saw sorry stick. She went to saw manik to main door and she saw sorry stick on main door also. She went to her room and saw again a sorry note on door of the room. She opened her room and saw every wall was covered with SORRY sticky note. She smiled fully and sticky note was stick on bed and note was: "nandu doll I am sorry and pls forgive me agar tumne muje maaf kr diya hona to plz just call me once honey plz"

Nandini was about to call him but she smiled mischievously and didn't call him and went to kitchen to made lunch for him. manik was impatiently waiting for her call. Manik was in his conference room for important meeting but he was just staring at his phone. Receptionist calls him and said "sir I am sorry to disturb but mam aye hai aapse milna chahte hai" and manik smiled fully and cancelled his all meetings and went to meet his doll.

Nandini was waiting for him in his cabin and manik came and went near her to hug her but she took backwards steps and his smiled vanished. Manik made her sit on his chair and he himself kneeled down in front her. Manik held her hand in and said "sorry na baby pls doll you know na main out of control ho jata hoon jab baat tumhari hoti hai aur tum na mere samne jo bhi pehnana chahti ho pehno but bahar aise aur jab maine tumhe wo Aryamaan ke sath dekha to muje bahot gussa aa gaya pata hai doll sab tumhe dekh rahe the" manik cutely said and Nandini smiled on his cute explanation. Nandini said "manik main nhi pehnugi thik hai agar aap ko a6a nhi lagta to but plz don't say that k I don't love you, main aapki tarah express nhi kr pati it doesn't mean k main aapse pyar nhi karti." And manik kissed her forehead and sit infront of her. "manik aap ki chair ye hai aap yahan aayein main wahan beth jati hoon" Nandini was about to get up from chair but manik came near her and made her sit again and said "doll mare liye this chair this industry its nothing important for me, only and only you are important In my life doll meri hare k cheez pr mujse pehle tumhara haq hai, muje is chair pr bethne se sukoon nhi milta jitna muje tumhare sath rahne se sukoon milta hai thik hai ab no more argument okay" and Nandini cutely pout her lips.

Nandini served his food and gesture him to eat but he nodded his head in no. Nandini asked him "why?" and he cutely said "doll aap khilao" and Nandini made him eat with her hand. After lunch Nandini was about to go but manik held her hand and pulled her towards him and clutched her waist tightly and manik leaned closer to her lips and he was about to kiss her lips but Nandini hug him tightly and manik also hugged her back. Someone knocked his cabin's door Nandini tried to broke the hug but manik hugged her very tightly and said "yes come in" and his PA came in cabin he saw Nandini was trying to break the hug but manik held her very tightly in his arms. His pa was smiling and talking to manik and Nandini was constantly trying to break the hug because she was feeling very embarrassing. When pa left manik also break the hug and Nandini slapped his shoulder "aap aise kaise behave kar skte hai manik wo kya sochenge hamare bare mein?" and manik laughed and Nandini made a bad face and manik said "oh god nandu my doll mein apni biwi ko hug kr raha hoon kisi or ki biwi ko nahin to main kyun 6odu apni wife ko bolo?" and Nandini smiled and again hug him.

Manik was sleeping in her lap and she was ruffling his hair. Manik get up from her lap and said "chalo doll aaj hum pura din ghumne jayenge, come lets go.." and he dragged her with him and both sat in his car and he drove away.

Nandini and manik both were talking with each other when Nandini saw gol gappa stall and she shout "manik stop..stop." manik stopped the car and said "kya hua doll are you fine? Thik ho tum" and Nandini cutely said "manik see golgappa" and manik said "tum golgappa khao aur main apne golgappa ko khaunga" Nandini look at him with confused expression and asked "tumhara golgappa?" and manik said "tum, tum ho na mera gol gappa main tumhe khaunga" and Nandini cutely pout her lips and said "main aapko golgappa dikhti hoon?" and he pulled her cheeks and said "ha dekho tumhare ye cheeks aise hi hai gol gappe jaise a6a ab chalo tumhe khane hai to but yahan nhi hum kisi a6e se hotel mein chalte hai yahan pe nhi thik hai" Nandini stopped him and said "plz na manik muje nhi jana aapke wo bade se hotel mein muje yahin khana hai wrna main cutty apse" and she turned her face away and manik get down from his car and opened the door for her and forward his hand towards her and she smilingly held his hand and both went to the gol gappa stall. Nandini was eating gol gappa and manik was just staring at her with amused expression. After gol gappa Nandini asked him for ice cream and he within a minute came with lots of ice cream and Nandini said "manik itna sara ice cream I love you so much" and manik said "are kaise nhi lata meri doll ne pehli baar muje order diya hai to main kaise puri na krta hmm?" and Nandini giggled. She was eating ice cream with her fingers and moaning in pleasure. Manik deathly came close to her ear and said "aise aawaz karogi to doll main bhul jaunga ke hum kahan hai" and Nandini turned into crimson red and forward her ice cream towards manik but manik take his fingers and licked each and every fingers and she shivered at her place but nadini composed herself and said "manik 6odo plz koi dekhega to kya kahega plz yahan nhi" and manik kissed her fingers and left her hand. They both enjoyed a lot full day. Manik also take her for a long drive and both came to their house at night and went to their room.

Nandini came out from bathroom and sat on the bed and manik was in his study because he had some important work. Suddenly Nandini check the date in mobile and she shout in excitement "omg main kaise bhul gyi kal manik ka birthday hai kya karoon main yes sab ko call krti hoon." She call cabir and everyone was talking to her at conference call and they decided to arrange surprise party for manik. Nandini said to everyone "yaad rakhna kal koi bhi unhe wish nhi karega" and with that she cut her call and in mind she also arranged a beautiful surprise for manik. She lay down on bed and she pretend to sleep when she heard a sound of door. Manik came and saw that Nandini was sleeping peacefully he lay down beside her and said "12 baj gaye lekin doll ne muje wish bhi nhi kiya, wo to bahot excited thi mere bday ko lekar pehle, may be dhyan se nikal gya hoga but aise kaise yar kr skti hain doll aap my first bday with you. Aap kaise bhul skti hai, thik hai to main bhi yaad nhi dilaunga aapko." And with that he hugged her and drifted into sleep and Nandini smiled and said "kal ka bday aapke bahot hi zyada special banaugi mein I promise.." and she also drifted into sleep.

So kaisa laga? Manik's birthday, surprise party aur most awaited moment in next update..

And for pm sorry guys pata nhi main har bar try krti hoon but problem aa jati hai phhir bhi today I will try again for you guys

Love u all

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Posted: 9 years ago
It's a very nice update.
Manik's possessiveness is cute in a weird way.
Loved the way nandini showed him that she was hurt.
Manik's love for nandini is simple overwhelming. So is nandini's love l.
Waiting to see what nandini has planned for manik's birthday.
Hope you continue Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Amazing
Mindblowing update
Nandu tum toh sach mein gol gappa ho...manik toh tumhe khaa hi jayega...nandu kya pln bnayea manik ko koi bhi bday wish nhi krega...
W8ng for Manik's bday surprise...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update manik n his gussa but usne mama liya nandu KO their day out was superb
Waiting for maniks birthday.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice lovely cute update
Continue soon
Take care
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