HUM HAI DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE (CHAP 30 ON PAGE NO.136) - Page 25

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manik's possessiveness is just unbelievable...

loved the way he apologised to nandu...

excited to see what nandu has planned for manik...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Amazin
mindblowing
awesome
fabulous update
loved it
loved manik's possessive behaviour a lot
loved the way he said sorry to her
office scene was cute
eagerly waiting for nandu's surprise

nice update...plz cont soon

beautiful update...his possessiveness is too much but cute... the way nandu write note to wake up it was lovely and funny...waiting for manik's surprise birthday party

Wow manik itni cutely manata h nandu ko...
I jst love der bond...,,,,,
Wat will nandu do to surprise manik...
M excited for nxt part

awsm update.
manik !!! angry manik !!
luved it.
update soon

Very nice story loving ur writing.

CHAP 14:

Manik and Nandini both were sleeping peacefully cuddling to each other. Nandini woke up and saw manik was sleeping peacefully she very carefully untangled herself and went to bathroom. After sometime Nandini came and saw manik was not there she called his name but no response. Nandini was finding him in balcony and suddenly manik came from behind and said "bhooo..." and Nandini screamed in fear. And saw manik was smirking and she started slapping his chest and manik was laughing like a maniac. Manik held her hand and said "a6a baba soory doll sorry bas..abhi" and Nandini hugged him. After some time manik went down to join her for breakfast. Manik came and saw Nandini was very engrossed in her work manik sat beside her and she sweetly smiled. Manik said very cutely "Nandini aaj konsi date hai?" Nandini understood his meaning and said "manik ye kaisa question hai? Calendar hai mobile hai dekh lo" manik made a bad face and said "ya dekh leta hoon" and Nandini smiled.

Manik went office with frustrated mind. He was working on his laptop. He was continuously looking at his phone actually he was waiting k koi to usse wish kre. But no one wished him. Nandini called his all friends and they started preparation. In the evening they finished their work and everyone went upwards to get ready. Nandini came out bathroom and she saw herself in the mirror. She was wearing Manik's favorite red color sari. She wore her jewelry and got ready in that way which Manik likes. Everyone get down and hide behind main door. Manik came and opened the door and get shocked because the whole hall was dark. Manik entered in his house and everyone came from behind and shouted loudly "happy birthday manik" and he saw the whole mansion was decorated with lots of lights. Everyone hugged and wished him. manik said "saalo tum logo jan buj ke muje pareshaan kr rhe the haina" and everyone giggled on his statement. Manik went upstairs and he gesture her to come up and Nandini excused her and went to their room. Nandini opened the door and manik came from behind and back hugged him and put his chin on her shoulder and said "muje wish nhi karogi hmm sweetheart wish me jaan.." he kissed her back and Nandini moaned his name and said "ma..manik..happybirth..birthday" and manik roughly turned her and he said "you know what only I know how I am controlling myself? Niche jana jaruri hai doll? " and Nandini put her hand on his chest and said "manik maine tumhare kapde nikal kr rakhe hai tum jaldi se fresh ho jao ab main niche jati hoon bcoz muje apke intention thik nhi lag rahe hai mr.malhotra guest apka intezaar kr rahe hai so fast." And Nandini was about to go but he clutched her waist and kissed her neck and Nandini shivered badly with his proximity. Manik was kissing her neck and Nandini was running her fingers in his hair. Suddenly Nandini said "mukti tum yahan?" and manik immediately left her and she pushed and went out and manik turned and saw no one was there and manik angrily glared at her and she showed her tongue and went down and he went to bathroom to get ready.

After some time manik came down and joined everyone. Manik was talking with his clients and also looking at her doll. Manik gulped his wine and went near her and said "Nandini abhi aur kitni der yaar chalo na upar chalte hain muje tumhare sath time spend krna hai" Nandini replied him "manik kya keh rahe ho aap? Aise thodi na upar ja skte hai manik" and his all friends came near them and cabir said "ye dekho majnu manik ko kbhi to usse akela 6od bechari meri bahen pareshaan ho jati hai tujse" manik glared him and said "o really tuje kya main uske sath kitna bhi chipak k rahoon" everyone giggled on their cute fights. After some time manik was talking to his clients and he saw that Nandini was talking to Aryamaan. He clenched his fist and gulped down his wine in one go and went near her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her in a side hug. Nandini looked at him and Aryamaan said "Mr.malhotra wishing you a very happy birthday I wish you will get everything what you want" and manik smirked and said in his attitude "thank you so much but muje jo chahiye wo to main le hi leta hoon by hook or by crook" and manik continued "nandu come with me" he left with her.

After some time Nandini sneaked out from the party and went to their room and prepared his surprise. After some time everyone left the party and manik was calling Nandini but no response. He went upwards and opened the door of their room and get shocked. Their room was fully decorated with candles and flowers. he came in the room and saw Nandini was looking breath taking in black saree he came near her and said "doll ye sab matlab.." and Nandini put her fingers on his lips and said "no manik aaj nahin aaj tak apne muje har khushi di hain har waqt aap muje special feel karate hain mere pass apko dene ke liye ku6 nahin hai siavy mere pyar ke manik tonight make me yours manik" manik kissed her forehead and said "doll apko apna pyar proof krne ke liye ye jarooart nhi hai" and Nandini again said "no manik main apko ye proof krne ke liye nhi kr rhi hoon main sirf apki ban jana chahti hoon" and he hugged her tightly "kya ye sach hai nandu k aaj ke baad tum apni sari raatein muje sopongi" and Nandini nodded her head. Manik picked her up in his arms and lay down her on the bed and came on top of her and kissed her forehead then her eyes then her cheeks and came near her lips and manik said "I love you doll" and slammed his lips with her. And kissed her lips hungrily and Nandini clutched bed sheet very tightly and moaned in his mouth. Manik left her lips and came near her neck and kissed her neck harshly and she hissed in pain then manik blow air on her neck and she moaned in pleasure. Manik sucked her collarbone and she unpinned her pallu and entwined their hands. He throw the pallu aside and Nandini was breathing heavily manik said "relax doll its me" and Nandini nodded her head and manik kissed on her waist and stomach and Nandini moaned his name. manik opened her saree and throw it on floor and opened her knot of skirt. Manik turned her and opened the string of her blouse and Nandini shivered very badly. Manik throw their clothes on the floor and manik kissed her back madly. Manik kissed her forehead and said "doll are you sure?" and Nandini nodded her head and claimed her with a jerk. And Nandini cried in pain and tears ran down from cheeks manik kissed her tears. After sometime manik lay down beside her and hugged her tightly and said "I hope I didn't hurt you?" and Nandini nodded her head in no and kissed his cheek and said "no today you complete me manik thank you I love you" and both drifted into sleep.

SO TELL ME HOW'S IT????

SORRY FOR CHOTU SA UPDATE
BUT I PROMISE NEXT UPDATE WILL BE LONGEST...I PROMISE
MORE ROMANCE, MORE DRAMA, MORE POSSESSIVENESS IS ON THE WAY SO...KEEP READING

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