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Posted: 10 years ago

#651

wow beautiful update 😳👏

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ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: prati_25
wow beautiful update 😳👏

Wlecome Prati 25...Thank you so much, glad you liked it 😊

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Memoona Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey didii.

WOW. Level 2 accomplished. Actions speak louder than words. The way she hugged Manik tightly and was just blushing all the way, it was so beautiful. These little gestures by his girl made him so damn happy! Can't wait for Manik to propose her in a filmy way. Wanna see their love blooming! Both the POVs were amazing! Loved it. Lets wait for level 3 now. LOL 😆

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Ammu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#654

Hey anki...pairi ponna... Satsriyakaal...etc etc...aur bhi bohut hai agar kehte bait gaye toh aap hame chorenge nahi..
Firstly sorry... Aapko sagar ne pataa nahi kya kya bol ke daraaye hai Emails ya Pms mein... I'm fine now sirf weakness hai...
Secondly dare not to PM me next time by saying sorry and all...arre aapke vajese hame sach mein kisi bhi baat se boora nahi lage... Okay enough of our apology games...

Coming to the update... Haayooo rabba full dil khush kar ditta aapne byee god..
Saare songs selections... Those emotions bapaa's green tea sab kuch itne real lage ki i just don't know what to say...

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Aaah!!don't you think this aarya is little wierdo..huhh...wow..our drama queen is way more forward then what we were thinking... Hahaha...seriously nandu aur vodka shots... This is eighth wonder...navya is a Savior... She exchanged vodka to plain water... Haha...Fab4 was just amazing... Manik is full shocked by seeing this side of his princess... Oh gawdd!! This Aarya is too much...he's asking nandu for joining him in pub...like seriously... He's so chipku...huhh...Gosh!! What cast he has spelled ki nandu's MOM agreed with Aarya... This was unexpected... Hmm...Nandu in pub... Navya invited fab5 too... Hahaha...Poor guy Manik is having tough time to resist her...Holy crap!! Soha reached in your story too?? Haay ree... Wow nandu's so possessive about her guy... Hahaha...Manik's playing around to just make her jealous... Poor being drank Alcholhol thinking its water... Haha...that dhamkee was too good...poore talli...Wow...Manik dropped her to home... Hehehe... Drunk nandu is always treat to witness...Aww!!she's sweet heart... She's behaving like kiddoo...Manik is going to have tough time...;))
Anki...thank you soo soo much for this song... Its my personal favorite...Shhh..shh..shh..shh..
The song selection and manik's will power to control his hidden desires uff...finally she slept... Aww!! Manan are sleeping in each other arms under single roof...Its just wow...

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WOW!! this was very blissful morning for both... Nandu is letting her heart out rather than that brain... She's admiring him...his features... Their positions... Its just awesome... I wonder what if she didn't remembered anything about last night... Hahaha...it will be fun...Cavya's full support to Manan...Navya easily helped Manik to sneak out without Raichand's presence... Hmm...Fab4 they were simply awesome... This is too much...like seriously... Creating this type of scenes it's really not easy in acting only they take TAKES...but Aarya he did great job without rehearsing... Hahaha... Anki i was roffling by virtually imagining these things... Aiyiooo...poor Aarya trapped... Mission Aarya runaway accomplished...Cabir's threat were too good...Miss Madhubaala and her expression were icing on the cake...hahaha.
Nandu is free to express herself... Manik is on cloud 9 thinking about last night and this runaway thing...he owe one for fab4 and Navya... This was soo good...i enjoyed this update like anything... Thank you

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Nandu and navya's bond was too good...Abhi's entry was very great... His and fab4 bond also commendable... Specially with Manik...they share a very good rapport... So Manik came Delhi for shooting purpose too...with Soha..its quite undigested... Anyways I know you won't spoil the story line so I've full faith in you... You can bring whomsoever you want to stories progress...Yeah Raichand's introduction was very good...Rishab's too...(I've a catch here is he only phoned nandu on that day when she came to India??)
Anyways... Oh noo...we almost forget that nandu is on client project in India and she has to return London... Mom became emotional.. Hope nandu transfer here soon...
Finally proposal canceled officially...
Nandu accepting her feeling in front of Navya was so good... Wow Manik and fab4 are excited to make nandu confess her feeling... Cabir is back with his leg pulling... Yayy... Even i guessed BOSCO must be his choreographer...
Lotus temple was amazing... Nandu is jealous and boiling in anger by listening fan girls... Hahaha...Soha you're gone today... Gosh!! If that director won't interfered than it would've dhamaakha... Haha...leave it for me...I'll image those things on my own... HOTE HOTE.. PYAAR HOTA HAI...Anki thanks for one more beautiful song...i just loved it...Manik's way of conveying those lines directly to nandu's heart was just bliss...i really loved those guestures... His fear of her answers... Her actions... It was just tremendous... Then TUJ KO JO PAAYA was again top song...her answers for his questions in the cutest guesture of embracing him and cocooning herself more in his arms was fabulous...magical...and what not...Manik finally got his answer... His love...he's beyond happy... All are happy... Finally waiting bear the most precious fruit for all...updates was way more than amazing...
Continue soonish
Take care stay blessed

Anki you penned every single thing so beautiful its more like visualizing rather than reading...
Thanks for making me the part in this beautiful journey by Pm-ing me...
Lots of love to you my soulie...sorry for quoting this late, you know the reason behind this... Thanks for understanding me this much..
Feel blessed to have you as my dearest friend

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FairyGamer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#655

awsm

love navya and nandu bond

manik is soo mad in love

hope nandu accept her love soon

loved it

ty for pm

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ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: DesaiK
Lovely...awesome confession

Hi,

Thank you so much... it means a lot...😊

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ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: diyamanan
awsm
love navya and nandu bond
manik is soo mad in love
hope nandu accept her love soon
loved it
ty for pm

Hi,

Firstly, i have read half of your story...would complete reading the remaining parts tonight and then share my views...😊

Thank you so much for liking the chapter... I know friends like them are very rare 😊

Well, yes Manik has been mad in love for a long time...finally he is able to live some of it 😆...

Please don't say thanks for the PM, its my duty right.

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arshuaar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#658

... penned every single thing so beautifully.
Finally Manan
egarly waiting for next update...
sorry for late comments...
thanx for PM
thank you for the wonderful write ups...
stay blessed...

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: arshuaar
... penned every single thing so beautifully.
Finally Manan
egarly waiting for next update...
sorry for late comments...
thanx for PM
thank you for the wonderful write ups...
stay blessed...

Hi,

Firstly, please never say sorry for commenting late ok...you take your time out to read and then comment...which makes me thank you for it...😊

Yes, fianlly they understand they both are going through the same feelings 😆

I will surely update soon.

Take care.

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ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: memoona.zahid
Hey didii.
WOW. Level 2 accomplished. Actions speak louder than words. The way she hugged Manik tightly and was just blushing all the way, it was so beautiful. These little gestures by his girl made him so damn happy! Can't wait for Manik to propose her in a filmy way. Wanna see their love blooming! Both the POVs were amazing! Loved it. Lets wait for level 3 now. LOL 😆

Hi,

Firstly i wanna welcome you back here...though i know you never went anywhere 😉...I would like to wish you for your exams and i know you'll do well...😊

You are absolutely right 'Actions speaks louder than Words...' i have always beleved in it in my life and that's actually more wise too...

Well, coming to the story yeah she was blushing, did she have a choice after 'the sudden indirect confession by Manik...'😆

Manik's wait was finally worth...BAPPA had to let his kids finish LEVEL 2 on their own...he wanted his kids to find their way and explore their journey...but he did make sure that they don't take it forever to complete LEVEL 2...😆 So, yes now he needs to plan the LEVEL 3 soon 😆

Thank You once again for motivating me in my early days and inspite of my boring writing, you kept saying i am good writer... lol...only such positive readers and friends can bear and say such things 😆 ...

Take care...

Good Luck 👍🏼

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