#THREAD 1 Humsafar.. Editing started... note on pg 144 - Page 67

omg nandini reaction was so good.
u are one of the best writer
loved it
plz plz plz update soon
and love u bappa

Just came across ur ff n read all parts

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Hey anki...pairi ponna... Satsriyakaal...etc etc...aur bhi bohut hai agar kehte bait gaye toh aap hame chorenge nahi..
Firstly sorry... Aapko sagar ne pataa nahi kya kya bol ke daraaye hai Emails ya Pms mein... I'm fine now sirf weakness hai...
Secondly dare not to PM me next time by saying sorry and all...arre aapke vajese hame sach mein kisi bhi baat se boora nahi lage... Okay enough of our apology games...

Coming to the update... Haayooo rabba full dil khush kar ditta aapne byee god..
Saare songs selections... Those emotions bapaa's green tea sab kuch itne real lage ki i just don't know what to say...

CHAP- 16

Aaah!!don't you think this aarya is little wierdo..huhh...wow..our drama queen is way more forward then what we were thinking... Hahaha...seriously nandu aur vodka shots... This is eighth wonder...navya is a Savior... She exchanged vodka to plain water... Haha...Fab4 was just amazing... Manik is full shocked by seeing this side of his princess... Oh gawdd!! This Aarya is too much...he's asking nandu for joining him in pub...like seriously... He's so chipku...huhh...Gosh!! What cast he has spelled ki nandu's MOM agreed with Aarya... This was unexpected... Hmm...Nandu in pub... Navya invited fab5 too... Hahaha...Poor guy Manik is having tough time to resist her...Holy crap!! Soha reached in your story too?? Haay ree... Wow nandu's so possessive about her guy... Hahaha...Manik's playing around to just make her jealous... Poor being drank Alcholhol thinking its water... Haha...that dhamkee was too good...poore talli...Wow...Manik dropped her to home... Hehehe... Drunk nandu is always treat to witness...Aww!!she's sweet heart... She's behaving like kiddoo...Manik is going to have tough time...;))
Anki...thank you soo soo much for this song... Its my personal favorite...Shhh..shh..shh..shh..
The song selection and manik's will power to control his hidden desires uff...finally she slept... Aww!! Manan are sleeping in each other arms under single roof...Its just wow...

CHAP-17

WOW!! this was very blissful morning for both... Nandu is letting her heart out rather than that brain... She's admiring him...his features... Their positions... Its just awesome... I wonder what if she didn't remembered anything about last night... Hahaha...it will be fun...Cavya's full support to Manan...Navya easily helped Manik to sneak out without Raichand's presence... Hmm...Fab4 they were simply awesome... This is too much...like seriously... Creating this type of scenes it's really not easy in acting only they take TAKES...but Aarya he did great job without rehearsing... Hahaha... Anki i was roffling by virtually imagining these things... Aiyiooo...poor Aarya trapped... Mission Aarya runaway accomplished...Cabir's threat were too good...Miss Madhubaala and her expression were icing on the cake...hahaha.
Nandu is free to express herself... Manik is on cloud 9 thinking about last night and this runaway thing...he owe one for fab4 and Navya... This was soo good...i enjoyed this update like anything... Thank you

CHAP-18

Nandu and navya's bond was too good...Abhi's entry was very great... His and fab4 bond also commendable... Specially with Manik...they share a very good rapport... So Manik came Delhi for shooting purpose too...with Soha..its quite undigested... Anyways I know you won't spoil the story line so I've full faith in you... You can bring whomsoever you want to stories progress...Yeah Raichand's introduction was very good...Rishab's too...(I've a catch here is he only phoned nandu on that day when she came to India??)
Anyways... Oh noo...we almost forget that nandu is on client project in India and she has to return London... Mom became emotional.. Hope nandu transfer here soon...
Finally proposal canceled officially...
Nandu accepting her feeling in front of Navya was so good... Wow Manik and fab4 are excited to make nandu confess her feeling... Cabir is back with his leg pulling... Yayy... Even i guessed BOSCO must be his choreographer...
Lotus temple was amazing... Nandu is jealous and boiling in anger by listening fan girls... Hahaha...Soha you're gone today... Gosh!! If that director won't interfered than it would've dhamaakha... Haha...leave it for me...I'll image those things on my own... HOTE HOTE.. PYAAR HOTA HAI...Anki thanks for one more beautiful song...i just loved it...Manik's way of conveying those lines directly to nandu's heart was just bliss...i really loved those guestures... His fear of her answers... Her actions... It was just tremendous... Then TUJ KO JO PAAYA was again top song...her answers for his questions in the cutest guesture of embracing him and cocooning herself more in his arms was fabulous...magical...and what not...Manik finally got his answer... His love...he's beyond happy... All are happy... Finally waiting bear the most precious fruit for all...updates was way more than amazing...
Continue soonish
Take care stay blessed

Anki you penned every single thing so beautiful its more like visualizing rather than reading...
Thanks for making me the part in this beautiful journey by Pm-ing me...
Lots of love to you my soulie...sorry for quoting this late, you know the reason behind this... Thanks for understanding me this much..
Feel blessed to have you as my dearest friend

Originally posted by: nandininiti

omg nandini reaction was so good.
u are one of the best writer
loved it
plz plz plz update soon
and love u bappa

Originally posted by: zarak004

Just came across ur ff n read all parts

In a go... uve penned it beautifully...

Every scene is just perfect n beautiful...

Thank u so much for d writing...

Keep writing more. ..

Eagerly waiting for d next chap...

Pls pm me d next...

Thanks n stay blessed

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi

Hi Sneha,

I am completely speechless, how can you be so
sweet...you have really touched my heart and honestly, it has got tears in my
eyes... Well, it is true i was worried for you and happy to know now you are
better...Trust me Sagar said nothing wrong, he actually conveyed your message
to me...so pleasedon't say sorry. I just pray that even your
weakness goes away and you become fit...

Thank you for all the beautiful words and the time
you took out for me, and penning down your views...I am deeply honoured and privileged
to have you as a friend...😊

Let me reply to you chapter by chapter ok... 😊

<b>Chapter 16 : she indeed is a 'drama queen' 😆...Aryaman
and Manik, both were unaware about this facet of Nandini...HHmmm Aryaman
was not weird but ya he was smart enough to recognize that Nandini was faking
everything...So, he just wanted to know the truth...But, 'sach janana ussi pe
bhari padh gaya...' he had no choice but had to back out...😆

Nandini was miffed with Manik and his proximity
with Soha and it led her being possessive...

Ok, firstly I could have named that girls character anything, but
then I thought it's easier to use you the screen names as it gets comfortable
for readers too...I must confess i have a problem remembering names of
people, so I did made a mistake in the character sketch of Nandini by
saying her brother's name is Virat and later on an active reader corrected me
and pointed it out...So, keeping the name Soha was much easier...

Will she come in between or not...it's out of
question Sneha...my story is not a Daily Soap 😛... chill out on that part.

I know that song is your favourite too😉 and so is
mine...Manik has to control his urges, no choice for him...I am glad you
liked the time they had spent together.

Chapter 17: It indeed was a blissful morning for
both...Well, if she hadn't remembered what had happened last night, it would
have been altogether a different scene...Hhhmmm let me think...the first
thing that comes to mind is the scene from DDLJ...I guess Manik aisa kuch
karne ki try karta...😆...but can't...ek drink se no one forgets
everything...However, finally things are moving in favour of Manik...so being
on cloud 9 toh he deserves right...😊

Chapter 18 : Well, I always believed that keeping
things simple and saying them on the right time to the right person is
extremely important...That's what Manik did...and indirectly confessed what
he feels, but in his own style...after all voh BAPPA ka royally spoilt brat
hai😎...I knew you would guess that the choreographer is Bosco...😉

<font size="2">But an another point is BAPPA is keeping busy these days, you know na the terrorism issues prevailing in Europe (recent Paris attack) so he had to go and monitor that first...but in his breaks he doesn't miss out to watch his favourite daughter Nandini and royally spoilt brat Manik, while sipping his Green Tea... (green tea was something i remembered from one of our conversations😆)</font>

Hhhmmm you mentioned about the phone call...
(I've a catch here is he only phoned nandu on that day when she came to
India??)

Well, Sneha it's not rue...that person was a
DOP... a member of Production team and has no connections with Nandini...it
was a pure coincidence that his sisters name was Nandini too...and thanks to
him...he indirectly made Manik remember Nandini even more😊...So, RIshabh has got
nothing to do with it.

I am glad you liked both the songs and liked how I
penned the scenes too...I am deeply honoured by your words...Honestly, I never
like my own chapters much coz I feel I am not good at this genre...but, when I read
chapter 18(A) after I posted it then even I found it cute, simple yet
expressing their emotions in a subtle manner...So, I guess it should be fine
right...

It's a new beginning...Manik truly deserves this
and so does Nandini...

Thank you Sneha, thank you for everything...even our
journey has progressed ahead by just being strangers who connected on a story,
then chatted a bit and slowly became good friends...So, thank you for giving
that chance and support...😊

You are extremely important to me too...Please,
always keep smiling, get fit and continue to be the sweet and honest person you
are...I have to understand you and your situation always...i am by your side...😊

Lots of Love and best wishes...

Take care

Madam aapne hame itne rulaaye naa byee god aap jitne sweet Hame samajte hai ham unke half bhi nahi hai...its just that aap sweet ho so aapko sab log sweet hii nazar aate hai... Ham sach mein aapke ye taarif k khaabil nahi hai... I know aapko hame jhelnaa kitne mushkil hai ye hamaare POV par ke aapko rona aaye toh sochiye ke ham kitne bad writer hai...hahaha.. Aur aap hai ki praising kiye jaa rahe ho...
And one more thing... I'm super duper angry with u... Aap kitne formal ho jaate ho har baar wahi sorry... Thank you... Please... Etcs... Huhh.
Aur haan agar aapko sanju k baaton se bhoora lage toh...plss don't feel bad...actually abi tak sirf wohi hamaare soulie teh par ab aap bhi ho gaye ho na so she's little jealous.. Sholly...

di ...😃

Originally posted by: ps_angel

di ...😃

m done wid my exam

waiting fr ua update😉

jldi jldi daal dena <3 <3

Originally posted by: ankitathanvi

Hi Lil Angel,

Well i am glad you are done with your today's exam...i hope it was good 😊

Well, sorry i won't be able to update till i reach home...it's 4:13 p.m. here...and i would reach home around 7:30 p.m.

I guess you would be sleeping by then...But, will surely update ok...as promised...

when is your next exam???

Take care...

Originally posted by: ps_angel

yaa di

it ws jss good

well all i cn say is tat m done wd it😛

n plzz srry naa bola kro :/

il wait

kl kr denaa update

take rest too :) :

n next exam is on friday

ARITIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE...🤪

hehhe

n i hv gt a chotu sa srprze fr u :P

to kl aap free ho jana

fir il tell u 😃

oka

bbye take care :*

loads of love <3