#THREAD 1 Humsafar.. Editing started... note on pg 144 - Page 21

interesting .nice punishment. please continue. soon. please

its a damn good
while reading.my smile wasnot vanish even for a second
u r a jusr amazing writer
keep it up dear
stay blessed

Nw it will be fun manik nd devika... Hahahahahhahahaa...
Nw m sure nandini wil gt jealous nd it wil be fun reading...
Plz PM me I didn't got dis tym...
Plz update new part soon

Omggg super duper Wala update tha ... Wow nandu is gonna help manik in his work ...our cabira is great atleast for work he made manan talk with each other ... Awww nandu made rajma for manik so sweet ...but manik dnt let any stone unturned to tease nandu he didn't say a work for her cooking ... The truth and dare game was awesome ... Manik would be a greaT husband what a confession nandu awesome ... Manik's dare was hilarious he has to be Devika's bf for whole one day hahaha...uski shakal dekhne layak tha hahaha...superb update...bohot maza aya parne mein ... Plz update next part soon wana read ab kya hoga manik ka !!!! Plz plz plz ... Love u ...thanks for the pm ... Tc...with lots of love and hugs

Awesome update...
Nandu n her punishments lol!

Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Hahahaha devika manik ki gf wo bhi ek din ke liye manik toh use ek min nhi bardasht kr skta...nandu tum aur tumhari ajeeb punishmnts...lovd it...continue soon

awesome update...

loved it so much...

nandu is just too cute...her conversations with aiyappa are the best...

the way she took manik's name for the best husband was amazing...indeed he will make a wonderful husband...

excited to see manik and device be bf and gf...nandu's dare was the best...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

poor Manik...😆
beautifully penned...
thank you for the wonderful update...

just loved it cont soon plzzz