#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 112

yr this is just not fair...
y u always end ur story wid this big wala suspense...
I know manik hi hoga door pe but I want to know about his plan plz plz yr next part jaldi update krna otherwise hum soch soch k hi mar jayege...
now about d update ..
it was fantabulous, fantastic, fabulous n very funny n loving... 😳
The talk idea was Awsm n how he explained the word love is soo loving n pure bliss ...
the whole journey was fun ...
n manik being manik he never miss a chance to tease her whether it's by singing songs or saying quotes of love n I love that ...
n nandini being stubborn head when will she confess her love 😔
plz update next part soon ..
waiting n will keep on thinking whole night what will happen next yr u r so bad again a cliff hanger 😭
BTW Thanks for d pm n thanks for d long wala update .. 😛
love ur stories so much Gn

Super awesome... the last two updates were just wooow... the care and love manik has dor nandini is just limitless... the ever soo cool manik malhotra too got angry when he almost lost his love, his life... he was scared as hell but angry as she was being sooo careless about herself not once but twice... and his efforts... he is working sooo hard to win back her trust, her love... he is the bestest lover I've ever known... and uh did a MARVELLOUS job... HATS OFF GIRL... love uh sooo very much... muuuaaah...

It's awsm yaar
Ty for pm
N I m sure it must b manik

Congrats on your new thread... loved that last update... her different reaction, his thoughts , the flshback, the reason for his hiding and ofcourse the bolloywood style chapter ending was wonderful... but my favorite was the part about the caterpillar, just beautiful...looking forward to what happens next, great job here!

Wooow outstanding awesome blossom update dear nandu k stranger ko gussa aagaya. Awww nandu ko gussa nhi hug chahiye tha so sweet. Wooow love k lye manik k khayal kitna Acha hai. Hahahahaha kya song chose kra manik ne I loved it. Wooow phirse suspense. Hmmm so manik nandu k gher aaya hai?
Eagerly waiting for next update

awesome update...

Nice update...loved it...waiting for next.

Superb
Awesome
mindblowing update
Bechari mandu manik kese daant rha hai use...ek hug krdo manik wo tumhari baat manegi...
Manik ki baatein uske saath tym spend krna kitna acha hai na nandu...kahin manik philosophr toh nhi...itne deep thoughts to kisi philosphr ke hi ho skte hai...
I think wo manik hoga uske neighbour mein tabhi toh wo saath nhi gea sbke...apne love ko surprise dena hoga usne...lovd it
thnks for pm me
Continue soon

Lovely update

Awesome
Manik scolding her
Then Nandu's pov of the night incidence...
That was scary ...
Oh talk ... Nyc one
Manik's def of love...
It has blown me away...
Hehehehe the song...
Manik kya karne wala hai aage?
Manik rang the bell na...
Thnkz 4 the pm