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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry i m late to comment...
Any ways grt upsate aa alqays...
Maniks plan to b thr for hr all d tym grt...
I m hoping he would b staying in neighborhood...
Waiting for s nexr update...
Continue soon...
N thanks fir pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey thx for the pm...
cute update...




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Posted: 9 years ago
Super update. May b manik @ d door...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I wana say in marathi...ekach no yar...Lai bhari,mastach..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome yaar long wala update thank you and yaaa update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wohhh what an amazing update


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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
u r amazing writer
ur point of view in love is just amazing no words
n i guess that is manik
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pahele toh, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE PM...( ik it's pain pming so many) if u wouldn't have pmed then i would have never realized that u had updated!! so TYSM and LYSM:*
Coming to the update...
the NAME of the chapter is true but not true, matlab... haan though this goa and the SUPER AMAZING train journey would have ended, but the most beautiful journey of these purest souls has just begin...
P.S. loved the chapter name<3😊
is train journey ke baad i'm dead sure ki manik will never let nandini go alone anywhere when they r travelling in a train😉 washroom mein bhi akele nahi jaane dega🤣
haha paheli baar MISS MURTHY ke pass has nothing to fight on!!😆
even after the last night train incident of just falling, she still stopped at the book stall and was engrossed in them, coz down deep in the heart she knew that till the time she has Mr. STRANGER beside her nothing wrong can happen to her... NOTHING
manik and his sarcasm🤪
nandini nandini nandini... uski galti ho kar bhi she called him bhudhu🤣 haha epic kavyaaa😳
ab miss emraan hashmi ko hug ke saath samjana chahiye tha, haha i thought miss hashmi is just in need of kisses for ab hugs too:p
abhi bhi MR. STRANGER STRANGE hai... seriously nandini, agar nandini knew him since she took her first breath.. tabhi mr. manik malhotra, miss nandini murthy ke liye MR.STRANGER hi hota!!😃
and thank youu for giving both of their pov's for the same incident.. it had created a greater impact.. and indeed u wrote it beautifully.. both of them😳
she felt like paradise in his arms, awww... haha and nandini craved for him.. indeed she has become used of being around him all the time😊
i LOVED THAT MOON WALA LINE... May be I was one big idiot Who wants the Moon but yet keep distance from him..As it's still scared that one day the moon will disappear...
true, he is her star and not moon.. becoz there r days when moon is not seen, but star? they keep shinning for us humesha, and manik will shine for her HUMESHA too⭐️
yes, she was inside se week that's y she couldn't let him go... but her weak side is only & only reserved for manik! for others she is a strong nandini which manik himself created and gave her a new meaning to life...
aww, initially even she liked the way they slept😳
but morning mein completely changed😆 seriously how does he always manage to loose her, her sanity😆😆
he being he took all happily took all the beating happily, seriously awww❤️
her answer may be supid coz v all knew the answer but yes his answer made i worth it...
HIS LIFE BELONGED TO HER...☺️
haha kissie wala BITE i so wished she would have given him one😳
But only Manik Strange Malhotra can change your angry face one into a laughing one..and a blushing one into annoyed one...!! true so trueee...👏
his stranger was the strangest...😃
actually from where do u, MISS KAVYA you find these kind of songs from? i mean hats off for this👏
mukti seriously wouldn't have minded throwing him off!!
PANI, hahahah kavya🤣
Hear says the typical Manik, LETS TALK, talk what? and whatever he said was so true, what u say was so true😛
and nandini thinking abt marriage abhi se, stranger effect😆
aww so sweet, muk's answer on friendship love it!
Yet again YOU gave a beautiful meaning to love❤️
finally she smiled and all thans to her strangers, sahi kaha cabir ne😉
kavya seriously from to u think of these songs from? amazing man...
he loves to annoy her and i ❤️ u
nandini jaan ne ki inti icha thi toh y didn't u ask?😃 haha ik waise the answer...
she took HIS HAND without any second thought,haan she was now scared from trains! but y only his hand, coz the trust is being slowly building up!
AND THIS WASN"T THE END OF HER MOST AMAZING JOURNEY, BUT THE BEGINNING OF THE MOST AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY😊
Aww bye ke saath flying kiss free😛
Our Journey has just begin My Love... yes indeed the journey has just begin manik's love😳
As he was here one..thing was clear that he is going no where for sure!!
yes he was here only for sure, and is not even going anywhere without her for sure now!
home sweet home is the besttt!! and then she drifted in her dream land or manik land😆
wth! cliffhanger haww not fair who is at the gate! manik?? but what excuse does he have this time for coming?? dieing to know...😕
loved this chapter to the coree to😃
love u
take care! sorry for being late:(



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Posted: 9 years ago
Srryyy late hogayi
But coming to update it was nice
The stranger things are awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...
cliffhanger... i thought manik is her neighbour...
lets c... manik 's quote of love .. its fantastic...
superb update... waiting for next part..

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