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mampi1903

@mampi1903

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1091

Today's update is really awesome. Manik & Nandu's inner thoughts r beautifully described. Finally, Train Journey is over. Waiting eagerly for Manik's next move to woo Nandu. Post soon & don't forget to pm me dear...

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lovlytuli

@lovlytuli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1092

awesome update...

nandini's p.o.v is amazing...

i think manik is in the door...isn't it??

eagerly waiting fr next part...cont soon...

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Naj91

@Naj91

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1093

So lovely update Kavya...loved it.
It was very sweet and cute...
Manik got angry with Nandini
It was totally justified as he was scared
U described past train event in Nandin' s p.o.v and it was beautiful
Loved Manik's angry yet so caring nature
So they simply talked...nice thought
Manik's p.o.v on love was amazing
I loved the lines so much..."because the weak me hiding behind that strong one..couldn't take all it toghther being with him..than walking away...and than wanting him needing him...and than finding him in my worst..."...these were awesome.
Their journey ended
Lets see what happens next

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aniali

@aniali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1094

Hey... awsome update.. now that mukti and navya is also kindof okey with manik.. i think everything will be sortedbtwn the soon.. it seems like the story is comng to an end🥱... i wont mind if you continue okk..hehe.. 😛.. its totally upto you...

And yahh.. sorry for commnting late... i ve already read the story before your pm. but in a rush as em really stuck with studies and record completion n oll.. so soryy.. next time i would make sure to cmnt early 😳

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Ambyrocks

@Ambyrocks

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1095

Amazing one.your every word expressed very beautifully.thank u for pm and keep doing👍🏼

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richa2192

@richa2192

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1096

Awesome update again.. d story is shaping up really nice.. thanks fr d PM

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hiddenblossom

@hiddenblossom

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1097

Another great dramatic update..

I lyk d idea..

Lets talk abt ourselves..

Nycely pen down..

Nd den..

Ofcourse.. N@ndini's part of pov..

Love + fear + happiness + sadness ...

Nd den..

Mumbai meri jaan..

I thnk manik will b his neighbour.. ;)

Tnx for d pm..

Nd dnt kill us wid curosity so plz update soonnn... :p

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HTA111

@HTA111

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1098

Wow superb amazing update

Manik heart just stopped beating whenever he can't see her or think she is in danger and he wants to be with her but she is trying hard to ignore him and avoid and she too dint want too but she had too as she wants to be convinced that he wont leave her

Continue soon