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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
awsm...
thnx for the pm dear
update it soon...
hope to see manan become frnds soon
awsm update...
love sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Amazing story...
Read all in a go...
Cont soon..
Pm me when u update nxt...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Chapter 4
Nandini was really very much confused
Nandini: One second !! Do you know him Sanu? And why are you saying sorry to him ?? He is at fault not me .

Saniya: Nandu , I know him and he is Manik Malhotra, the singer . They are Fab 5 ( pointing towards them )
As we all are singers , so we know each other . And he saved you from falling and he is not at fault . And why are you saying that he is following you , kahi tu Manik se toh ladhkar nahi aai ha. ..!( Nandini nodded)

Manik: Saniya how do you know her ...?

Saniya : She is my sister, Dr.Nandini Murthy .

Manik: She is your sister , like seriously lagti toh nahi hai (and started laughing )

Nandini: Hey you why are you laughing Han and what do you mean ki lagti nahi hai , han ...
Tum kahna kya chateh ho ha ...!!!

Cabir: Hold on guys !! Koi hame bhi batayega ki yeh hokya raha hai...!

Then Saniya told them the whole matter and all burst into laughter . All controlled their laughter as Manik was showing them eyes

Nandini: Sanu let's go mom will be waiting for us ...

Cabir: Nandini wait na let's eat something , fir Chale jana .

Saniya: Ha Nandu aur abhi toh tujhe bahut joro ki bhook lagi thi. Air maa se maine bat karli hai.

Bahut der ke samjhane ke baad Nandu man gai.

Nandini: okk !! Guys I will come.

All moves towards food court.

Mukti: So Nandini tell something about yourself...!!

Nandini: Well as you all know I am a doctor. I run my own hospital , Murthy Hospital...!!

Cabir : Are hum itna toh janteh hai, kyuki akir tumhari behan hamesha tumhare bare main baat karti rahti hai...! ( all smiled except Manik)

Aliya : As we are now friends so Nandini we want you to tell about yourself matlab apne bare main tum kya pasand kar ti ho kya nahi , about your hobbies , etc

Nandini: Oh! ! Like that . Well my hobby , my everything is my work .

Mukti : Looks like , you love your work very much ...!!

Saniya: Yes guys , she is like this only ...!
After lots of talking session , all decided to leave .
( among all of them Manik was silently listening Nandini and Cabir was noticing him)

Nandini: Guys ! I think we should leave now as I have some work also.

Saniya : Okk ! Nandu as you wish ...!

After that they bade good bye to them .
Nandini and Saniya left.
After they left fab 5 also left.
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Sorry guys for the delay , and thanks for the response .
Please guys do drop your views
Please tell me if you are liking or not ...
Any suggestions are welcome
One you of you asked me for adding pics but I really don't know how to do that.
Please tell me if you are getting bore then I should stop
And once again thanks to who commented
Will not be available some 7-8 days as my exams are starting from tomorrow.
Please buddy me for pm
Lots of love,
Ekta

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
cont..waiting fr the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Nice story...
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting...!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Loved d interaction between FAB5 & Nandini..Ur doing realy well..Keep up d gud work..& all d best 4 ur exams !! :)
Stay Blessed !!
#OkThanksBye !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi ekta..
Nice update..thanks for pm me..even I don't know how to add pics otherwise I could have do help in this...
All the best for Ur exams...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
awesome update...
glad manik is noticing nandu...
loved it can't wait for manan to actually start to get to know each other...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
So guys I am back
As my exams are finished
Chapter 5


All moved toward home .

Cabir: Manik! Ruk mujhe aaj tere ghar jana hai ...!


Manik: kyu tujhe aunty ne ghar se nikal diya kya...!!


Cabir: Chup kar ...
Mom kuch kam se bahar gai hai ...
Issiliye socha ki tere sath chalu ghar me akele bore ho jauga ...
Tere sath reh kar tohdi kam ki baateh karlunga but chor tu nahi chata toh main nahi jata ...!!


Manik: ohh aise baat hai. ... main toh bas majak kar raha tha chal aab. ...!


Cabir: nahi nahi ! tu nahi chata toh main nahi jata..
Main tujhpar bohj nahi banna chata ...


Manik: aapni yeh nutanki band kar jaldi chal ...


With that both moved to Manik's house

Other Side ...
Murthy Mansion
Saniya: Nandu! ! Vaise they nice right
I know them from long time


Nandini: Ya !! They were but except that monster ...


Saniya: Kya Nandu tu abhi bhi tu usi baat par aatki hui hai .. ...


Nandini : Han Han tu toh bas us monster ki side lerahi hai ...!! Aur tune baha par usse sorry bola ki jaise meri galti ho...!!!


Saniya: Nandu !! Sabse pheli aur important baat ki usne tujhe girne se bachaya aur tu ussi par bharak rahi thi...
Tujhe toh us se thanks bolna chahiye tha agar ussne tujhe nahi pakra hota tu kudke hospital ke bed par hoti ...
Aur rahi voh takrane vali baat toh usme teri bhi galti thi aur uski bhi , say sorry to him and sort out kyu ki sorry bolne se Koi chota nahi ho jata


Nandini thought ," sanu sahi kah rahi hai usne toh bas meri help aur maine patanahi us usse kya kya kah diya ...

Saniya: Nandu kaha koh gai ...
Chal ma niche bula rahi hai...

Both went downstairs


Malhotra Mansion

Cabir : Vaise voh Saniya ki bahen Nandini was nice na ...
She was talking so sweetly na...


Manik: han but with you all . Bus Mujhse hi gusse me baat kar rahi thi ...!!!!


Cabir: are yaar !! Tu hi phone me busy tha aur usse takragaya !! Tujhe bhi toh dekhkar chalna chaiye tha ...!! Aur uski bhi galti thi magar usne sorry bola but nahi tujhe toh bus apne ego ke age kuch nahi dikta issiliye usne gusse me aakar tujhpar chilaya aur slipping time voh phele se hi voh bahut gusse me thi isliye usne vaisa kaha aur kabhi kabhi hume dusro se mafi maag leni chaiye...!!!! Mafi magne se koi chota ya bada nahi hota samjha


Manik was in deep thought ...
Then cabir shooked him

Cabir : are kaha khogaya Chal dinner karte hai

Manik just "hmm"ed and both leave for dining table.


After having dinner Cabir left for his home as he has some important work.

Manik was in his room and thinking about the whole how he meet Nandini and how fight ...
He was reminding cabin's word and thought that sayad he was wrong , after lots of fight between heart and mind his heart won and he decided to apologise to Nandini and fall asleep ...


Murthy mansion

Nandini was in her room and same was going her ...
And she decided to apologise him and thought call him but she didn't have his no. and she even didn't wanted to call him so late so she thought to call him tomorrow .



So guys tell me how's it
If you liked or not
Please guys do comments as your comments give me energy to write
I am really very new to this all , so they are mistakes or your want something in it fell free to say okk
Thanks those who commented on the previous chapters
Those who are liking it comment also
I just want to know if you are liking or not
If possible will update tonight
I will not promise

So now start your work of dropping your views
Tab Tak
Lots of love ,
Ekta
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
I hope u wrote ur exams well..nice update..waiting for longgg update

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