MANAN FF AN UNKNOWN STORY [ IMPORTANT NOTE -PAGE 44] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
sorry sorry sorry ..
lil sis ...for being so late ...
was really very busy ...
read both chapiesss in a go ...
must say nice chapiieess ...
cute cute fight ...
cont soon dear ...

lots of love
take care ..
akanksha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Interstng story
Phli hi mulakaat mein feight aur manik ko nandu beautifull lggi ahaaa...aapne fab5 ka intro diya...nandini ka bhi intro dedo...
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hello guys , presenting a new chappy of AN UNKNOWN STORY
Chapter 3

Manik : kaun si ladki yaar!! Tu kya bol raha hai mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha ..! ( said while avoiding eyes contact)

Cabir : Vahi ladki jo tujh par chilla rahi ...!

Manik was thinking what to say as it was first time someone especially a girl was shouting at him the MANIK MALHOTRA . And for his good fortune Mukti called them .

Cabir: Tujhe toh main baad me dekh lunga ...

Manik: Are yaar!! Chalna dekh Mukti hame kab se bula rahi hai...

Cabir: Han Han !! Chal...!!

Mukti: Tum dono kya vaha kusar pusar kar rahe the...!!

Cabir: Kya yaar Mukti...!! Jab dekho CID valon ki tarah sawal karna suru kar deti hai.. ( Mukti made a bad face). Voh studio se Manik ko call aaya tha toh ussi ke bare me baat kar rahe the...!! And winked at Manik.

Manik: waise Dhruv aur Aliya kaha hai kahi dekahi nahi derahe hai ...!

Cabir: Are samjha karna honge kahi corner me aakir they are couple yaar. ..!And started laughing.

Mukti: See they are here ..

Aliya : So guys shopping hogai hamari toh ho gai. ..

Cabir: Han Han !! Dikh raha hai ki teri shopping hogai...and again brusted into laughter ..
Manik: Stop it Cabir !!! Kyu tang kar raha inhe . Ha Aliya we are also done. Let's move .

Cabir: Ya ya let's move , mujhe toh bahut joro ki bukh lagi hai ... ( all chuckled at him)
They move towards the food court .
Nandini and Saniya were also moving towards the food court when Nandini 's stuck in something and she was going to fall but someone holds her from waist . Nandini has closed her eyes in anticipation . Manik was lost in her but came back in senses when Nandini slowly open her eyes and shouted tum. ..!!! Leaving all the people behind them baffled . ( Aab tak toh ap sabko samajh me aahi gaya hoga ki he is non other than the Manik)
Nandini straight herself and said: Tum..!!!! How dare you to hold me ha ... hooo kahi tum mujhe follow toh nahi kar rahe . She was continuously blabbering when Manik cut her .
Manik: First of all tumhe mujhe sorry bolna chahiye and why would I follow ? I am not that mad okk ki main tum jaisi pagal ko follow karunga ...

Nandini: Hooow !! Matlab tumne mujhe pagal bola !! Matlab how dare you ? Han. ? Nandini was cut off by Saniya

Saniya: Nundu yaar calm down !! Tu Kyu lad rahi iske sath . Usne toh bas Tujhe gir ne se bachaya tha aur tu ulta ussi par chila rahi hai. Manik sorry yaar yeh voh thore gusse me thi pata nahi kis ladke tarakar aai hai tab se bahut gusse main hai...

Now Nandini was fully confused . That how do she know his name and him.

To be continued. ...



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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Amazing update
Nicely written
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
So another encounter and fight of manan..well written..cabir getting curious about the girl...looking forward for the next chapter..please continue soon and thanks for the pm :)
Edited by Kuushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Realy Nyc update !! So another MaNan faceoff..hehe... Saniya knows Manik ha..wat wud happen next.. waiting to read further..thanks 4 d pm !! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc update ...
manan faceoff lol ...

cont soon ..

love
akanksha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
awesome update...
full of leg pullings by cabir...
can't wait to read more...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
I completed all 3 chapters together..
Nice story line..
May b nandini sis know manik before..waiting for update..
And one suggestion add banners and some pics..it will create curiosity to read story n Give long update..
Please pm me in next update..
I loved Ur story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice story
Dear
Very interesting
Waiting for next parts
Continue soon
And thanks for pm
Love
Diya😛

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