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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
awesome update...
loved it so much...
hope FAB5 agree...hope to see the apology scene in the next update...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Again small update..please give long update...nice one finally manan want yo apologised each other

Thank you
As I am in school with extra classes I don't have much time
But will surely try to give long update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
I rread dnt itself 1st of I wan 2 say thanks 4 making me read the best stroy It actually gave me peace n next tym pka manan ha n I have sent u buddy req so pls snd me pm 2...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Manishadevnani

I rread dnt itself 1st of I wan 2 say thanks 4 making me read the best stroy It actually gave me peace n next tym pka manan ha n I have sent u buddy req so pls snd me pm 2...

Update soon...

Thank you so much dear
I will surely pm you next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Hey guys! What up??
Enjoy the brand new chapter


Chapter 7


Manik assured them with eyes

Again all were talking on random topics when Nandini said

Nandini : Manik ,Can I use the washroom please?

Manik: sure ! Come...

Nandini: Sanu , just coming...!!

Saniya: It's okk , chal main bhi chalti hu ...

Nandini: No Sanu no need of this
You guys carry on , I will just be back...

Saniya: okk as you wish !!!

Mukti : Manik , show her the way na. ...

Manik : okk! ! Come

Manik was before her
None was saying anything
Soon they reached Manik room

Manik: you go ! I am waiting outside ...

Nandini just nodded

After some time Nandini came out

Both same said at the same time: Sorry!!!
Just then they looked at each other and again their eyes locked ...
Nandini just move her eyes from him and said:Why are you sorry , it was all my mistake ...
You saved me from falling and I was shouting at you ...

Manik: No I should be sorry I only was busy in phone and bumped into you and in the place of saying sorry i was shouting at you ...

Nandini :we both are at fault na. ...
So baat barabar ..
So friends ..
And forwarded her hand
Manik shakes hand with her and
Manik : friends ...
And both smile at each other
Both were lost in each other when Nandini's phone started ringing
Both leave each other hand
Nandini picked the phone , it was a call from hospital

From the other side : Mam jaldi ajaiye ekk emergency case hai ...
Kisi bachi ka accident hogaya hai ...
She just ran from the and took car keys from Saniya and told her that there was an emergency Un hospital
Saniya : aree but nandu
But she leaves
Manik:what happened Saniya why she left like this

Saniya : Voh there is an emergency in hospital so she has to leave
But she don't know driving
And she is going from car
And was leaving behind her but Manik stopped her

Manik:wait I will see

And leave . Fortunately or unfortunately Nandini was in parking only

Manik: Nandini wait where are going
Nandini: Hospital main emergency case hai so I have to leave

Manik: okk !! But tumhe car chalna ache se ata nahi hai phir kaise jaogi

Nandini :jaise bhi jaogi magar jaougi

Manik: okk !! Tum mere sath chalo main tum pahucha deta okk! ! And ab no arguments
Ab bas chalo ...
Nandini : okk
They reached hospital in no time
Nandini fastly enter her cabin and takes her important stuffs
Then she call her PA and takes detail about that child
And said that they need to operate her immediately and asked to shift her in operation theatre

Saniya : Manik Nandini tik hai na , Voh kudh se gadhi chala kar gai...

Manik: No Saniya she is alright. ...
Voh mere sath aai mere car main ...
Sayad patience ki halat bahut serious hai isliye bahut jaldi me thi...

Saniya: Voh aise hi hai she don't care herself
Bus dusro keliye paresan rahti hai ...Hamesha...

Manik: don't worry I am here ...
OK bye...


Manik saw that nandu that she was taking someone in stretcher to the operation theater ...
That was some little girl
Manik saw that child face and was shocked ...,.
Manik shouted from behind Naira! !!!!!!
Nandini stopped hearing the sound ...
Nandini:what happen manik!!!

Manik ran toward nandu and hold that child's hand
And said ," Naira" ...

Manik: what happen to her Han
Isse kaha lejarahe ho tell me...

Nandini: Manik is bachi ka accident ho gaya hai we have to operate her but you know her????

Manik:Naira , beta please open your eyes ...
And said looking at Nandini: iske sath do aur log where are they???

A nurse said : Unka bi accident hogaya hai and unki bhi halat bahut karab hai ...
Tears where rolling from manik's eyes
Nandini : what happen manik???
Do you know her ????

Manik : bhaiya !! bhabhi! ! ( merely whispered )

Nandini: is bachi ko lejao...
Manik was not leaving her hand
After lots of convincing , he left her hand

Nandini made him sit , he was not saying anything...
Only tears were flowing from his eyes...
Nandini: manik please say something ...

Manik: they are my bhaiya bhabhi and she is their daughter ...

Nandini: Manik sambhalo apne apko , they will be fine ...

Nandini called Saniya and told her the whole matter
Saniya was shocked but she then told everything to FAB 5 , they were also crying ...

All reached hospital in no time and moved toward manik , FAB 4 saw manik and all of them hugged him ...

Nandini:Sanu , I have to go , tu yaha par sobko sambal
...

Nandini went to o.t...
After long 4 hours all three operation was completed...
Nandini after checking three of them came ...

Manik : Nandini how are they ??
They are fine na ...
I want to meet them please ...

Nandini :they are fine now but abhi hosh main nahi aaye hai , thori derr bad tum unse mil saktey ho...
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Hey guys so how's it ?
Finally wrote it correctly after 3 times
I have high fever issiliye I don't maine kya kya likh diya
Agar acha nahi tha toh maf kardena
Hosakta hai next update late to phale se sorry
Thanks who commented on previous chappy
Please guys do comments
They really encourage me ...
If you are not liking , then let me know
Any suggestions are most welcome
And after reading like it also okkk
For pm buddy me


Lots of love
Ekta
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Nice update bt also a shing one
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Thnk god they r fine...
Glad ki nandu manik k liye kuch kr paayi I hope now their frnds ll grow stronger m stronger m wld make them feel the most purest emotion LOVE...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Check editing mistakes two times u pasted same lines ..
Nice update..naira.. I hope so she will b fine
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Check editing mistakes two times u pasted same lines ..

Nice update..naira.. I hope so she will b fine

Thanks
So sorry I am not well and jaldi jaldi main I pasted that lines two times
Will surely there will be no mistake next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Tysm 4 d pm & d update..So finaly dey apologised to each other & became frnz :) Overall d chapter was realy gud..& i guess even d length was a bit longer dan ur previous updates .. Keep up d gud work.. Thank u so much 4 d pm & d update ! Tk cr,Stay Blessed !! #OkThanksBye !! :)

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