MANAN FF AN UNKNOWN STORY [ IMPORTANT NOTE -PAGE 44] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
wow awsm..finally i got ur ff...
ekkss its lovely...
new concept..nandu dr...
looking forward ...
thn for the pm dear...
keep writing..
and do pm me when u update next...
love sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Nice update...
just edit ur first post of the thread...u'll be able to change the heading!
Edited by Alisha_Seth - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Great start..Jst loved it..I guess d girl is Nandu..hehe..do continue soonish.. thanks 4 d pm !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update soon
Grt 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2
Girl : Yaha I was saying sorry to you and you are shooting at me. By the way I can also say that ki you don't have eyes ha kudh toh dekh kar chal nahi sakte aur mujhe bolne chale ho ha
Manik: How dare you to talk me like this ? don't you who I am
Girl: Tum Jo koi bhi ho I don't care samjhe kadoos
Manik : you girl ! How dare you to call me a kadoos ?He was cut off by the sound coming from back for that girl
Other girl : Nandu ! Nandu! Kidhar chali gai yaar...! Jaldi aa...
Nandini :Hanhan aai Sanu ! Aur tum tumse toh mujhe bathi nahi karni MONSTER. ...!
Manik : Toh mujhe koun sa tumse baat karni hai..! One second what did you call me MONSTER...?
But tab tak Nandini ja chuki thi
Manik's self thought: How dare she matlab pheli baar kisne mujhe The Manik Malhotra Se aise bath ek bar mil jay I will not leave her but she was beautiful ! What! Manik tu yeh kya soch raha hai usne tujhe kya kuch nahi bola aur tu kya kya soch raha Uff. ...!
Saniya :kaha thi tu Nandu! mai tujhe kab se dundh rahi hu . Aab kuch bolegi bhi!
Nandini : Tu kuch bolne degi toh kuch bolugi na meri ma!
Voh main washroom gai thi aur wapas aate vatk ek kadoos monster Se takragai patanahi appne aapko kya samjtha hai. Main usse sorry bol rahi thi aur Voh mujhpar hi chila raha tha . Such a monster ! She was continuously blabbering about Manik.
Saniya: Yaar! Aise kya jadoo kar usne tujh par tu bas usi ke bare bole ja rahi hai ha and winked at her .
Nandini was shocked and took few seconds to register what she told her and said: Sanu! Tu bhi kuch bhi bolti hai. And avoid the topic said ," leave all this and let's move to food court . I am really very hungry . Please na Sanu ! And dragged her to the food court.
Here Manik was busy in his own thought when Cabir was continuously calling him . Caves saw that he was busy somewhere so came to him and said loudly in his ear :Manik!!!
Manik : a a a! What was that Cabir ! What were you doing ha! And hits him in his stomach . Cabir faked a ouch ! What are you doing Manik I was calling from long time and you were hearing .He was cut on middle by Manik
Manik: so you shouted ! Right .
Cabir : You know me so well Bro ( said while smiling like idiot). Wise Manik who was that girl yaar !!

To be continued ...

So guys tell me how's it by commenting and liking.
Thanks those who commented for the previous chapter
If possible will give the next chapter soon .
Please do comments if you are not liking then do tell me ans any suggestions , criticism all are mostly welcome . Thank you
Tab tak lots of love,
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it...manik as always being lazy...
dhrulya seem like a cute couple...
i think this is gonna be manan's 1st meet...
can't wait to see how its turns out to be...
nandu always being a lioness doesn't get afraid of a monster...awesome...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
Edited by sharon.babu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Hmmm thikki meethi first meeting!!
Manil Malhotra finds her beautiful ooohooo..
let's see where it goes..
continue soon
Thanks for pm ^-^
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Interesting story..looking forward to read more chapters..please continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
sorry for late
superb story
checkrd the pm right now
plz give link of the chappy nxt time in pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So dat girl was Nandu nly..hehe..1st meeting itself startd wid a cute li'l fyt..haha..bt der is smthng between dem <3 ! ;) d small Manbir moment too was gud.. excited to knw wat wud hapen next..Continue soon.. Thank u 4 d pm ! Stay blessed !!! :)

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