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manan_eku

@manan_eku

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: neeju_chinnu
sorry frnds i nd kajal hve been trying to upload da frst chapter since afternoon...
but it is saying dat the content is invalid...
v r looking fr solutions...
nd will update as early as possible...
sorry fr keeping u waiting...

kaan pakad kae sorry..

im really feeling guilty fr nt able to do wht i said ill do...

sorry once again..

vill upload as early as possible..

i think i am new here but your story is very nice its ok dont be sorry

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neeraja

@neeju_chinnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

as it is Ranabirs b'day today nd major part of my story revolves around him..

i assure u ppl.. by evng ill get chapter 1 updated...

i cried da whole nite ystrday fr failing in uploading da part as said to u all..

this story has a very spl place in my heart.. i cant let it down...

ull get the update by todays evng...

as i hve an xam to attend im delaying it till evng or else till nw i would hve got it done..

nd spl thnks to crazyadmirer fr ur lovely poster ill definately use it in my story...

no more silly talks ill b bak vit da chap 1...

luv u loads

neeraja.. :)

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Kajal

@angel2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

HEY!

firstly sorry ..as am again having high fever right now..not able to reply all of you..so am here..just to tell you people neeju is doing loads to put up the chapter..please appreciate her and support her..she is a pure soul..she is so upset from yesterday..that chapter is not able to be posted..please support her..

love you all

kajal😊

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neeraja

@neeju_chinnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

A very big thanks to all of u fr expressing ur views

regarding da opening confusing prologue... ull get to

know everything as the story proceeds...

I would lke to say spl thanks to kajal for taking the pain

of posting the story on my behalf despite being sick...I

would wish her a speed recovery.. may God bless u...

so here goes the chapter one... happy reading...

Chapter 1 A:

The cool wind coming from the windows...penetrating

sun rays.. were disturbing her peaceful slumber...a girl

of 22 yrs was sleeping on her king sized round bed..she

took da pillow beside her to cover her face frm being

kissed frm da mrng sunrays cuming into her room... she

stirred to the other side on hearing her favourite song

being played bcoz of ringing of her phn due to her

alarm...

there it was da song started nd a wide smile crept on her

face listening to it..

(Any guess wht da song might b..chalo ill tell u.. its da

Battameez dil of YJHD... wht else could it b afterall she

being a craziest fan of Ranabir started her day with da

most energetic song...)

She slowly opened her eyes to have a look at her

wallpaper where a pic of her prince charming her

Ranabir's pic was there...she kissed her phn screen with

her pink pouty lips..nd her smile grew wider vit each

passing moment... she moved her hands on the bed

searching for something...

there it was on the side table of her bed..a remote of her

music system..she pressed da play button nd raised its

volume to maximum...nd da playlist of her Ranabir's

songs started...

"NANDUUU...!!!!!!!! " screamed da ppl in her house

hearing such a loud music early in the morning... nd

then came into her room her strict yet lovely chachi

"nandu...!! pagal hai kya subah subah inti loud volume

mai ganae shuru kar diyae tunae... kya samajh rakha

hai...ghar hai yaa disco..!!"

She slooowly moved out of her bed and opening her

big puffy doey eyes completly.. she went nd hugged her

chachi...

"gud mrng chachi...!!" she said in her extra sweet

babyish sugary voice..which could melt da hardest rocks

present... so was her chachi...

"tujhsae hi koi seekhae ki kasae kisiko maska marthae

hai.." said her chachi... she chuckled on her

complimenting taunt nd kissed her cheek nd said..

" kya karu chachi.. Ranabir hai hi aaisa... kaisae resist

karu khud ko..." saying this she moved to her wall where

a big poster of Ranabir was stuck.. she slowly kissed da

pic on his cheek ;)... nd continued

" chachi.. ek baat batao..koi itna hot cute nd drop dead

handsome kaisae dikh saktha hai.. "

"phir shuru ho gayi tu... marae paas in sab cheezoon

kae liyae time nahi hai... office mai bahuat important

meeting hai ... mai aur tarae chacha jaa rahae hai...

cabir jogging kae liyae gaya hai...aata hi hoga... tu fresh

hoja.. aur dono saath mai breakfast kar laena... theek

hai.." saying this she pecked her forehead nd was about

to leave nd suddenly turned back nd continued...

"agar mujhae pata chala ki tum nae phir aaj apna

breakfast skip kiya tho.. aaj zaroor punishement

milaegi...!!" saying this she left leaving behind a smiling

Nandini.. on her chachi's luv fr her.. though she scolded

her.. it was aal her luv that she used to show on her...

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neeraja

@neeju_chinnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Chapter 1 B:

Same time on the other part of this country a girl of

around 21 years was standing on the top of a hill

watching the rising sun...locked in sumones

arms...looking at the sun and da face of the person who

locked her in His arms tightly...both were looking into

each others eyes lovingly.. " I LOVE U NAVYA.." said da

person looking at Her..

"I LOVE U TOO RANABIR.." said da girl.. they were

about to kiss...whn...

"NAVYAA...!!!" screamed a girl of around her same age

which once again disturbed her sleep nd she couldnt

kiss Him...

" Navya... kya ho gaya hai tujhae... kisae I LOVE U bol

raahi hai... collage nahi jana kya.. hum aaj bhi late hoo

jayangae... sab teri vaja sae... tujhae pata hai na.. agar

aaj late ho gayae to kya hoga..." the other girl was

blabbering but the person to whom she was speaking

was totally lost still in her dream... the girl lifted her

head nd shook the person to whom she was talking...

" Navya kuch sunai dae raha hai ki nahi... kitni daer sae

mai booli jaa rahi hun..tujhae tho kai farak hi nahi pad

raha.. chal ab uth...jaa fresh hoja mai neechae breakfast

table pae tera wait karti hun.. theek hai... chal uth na...

plz meri maa aaj late nahi hona hai mujhae... mai thodi

na Manik Malhotra ki beneh hu ki mujhae va sadu

teacher baksh dae.. chal ab uth... mai jaa rahi hun..."

saying this she pushed da ohter girl to da washroom

door nd went down to the table..

" hi bhai..gud morning.." she said enthusistiacially as

soon as she reached the table

A guy of almost 24 was sitting there waiting fr his lovely

sister to cum as he considered her to b his luckiest

charm..nd he had an important meeting today...

" gud morning baccha... kya hai aaj badi khush lag rahi

ho tum... kisi ko marnae ka plan banaya hai kya tum

dono nae..." he said nd winked at her...

"bhai...!! aap bhi na...aaisa kuch nahi hai... itna accha

sapna tha iss Mukthi ki waja sae kharab ho jaya..." she

said vit a frown on her face...he chuckled nd she glared

at him..

" ok..ok...shant ho ja meri jaan... clg jana hai naa... iss

liyae mukthi nae tujhae utahaya tha... mainae hi bola tha

usae.. uski koi galthi nahi hai... aaj lab hai na tum dono

ka..." he asked looking at the duo.. who were busy vit

their respective stuff...

" haan bhai... vo tho hai... pata nahi aaj kya hoga...aur to

aur vo khadus professor..usae tho mai bilkul bhi pasand

nahi...saraa gussa aaj hi dhikha yae ga..." said a worried

Mukthi

"kuch nahi hoga...chill...!! agar aaj usnae tujhae

paraeshan karnae ki koshish ki na.. to mai aaj uska moo

tood dungi.." saying this Navya winked at Mukthi nd

started eating her sandwitch...as if it was a very casual

thng which she spoke

"meri jungli billi... kuch tho daya kar dae uss professor

pae.. bechara..biwi bacchae vala hai..." said Manik... nd

both Manik nd Mukthi hi-fied each other whereas Navya

was staring at her brother...

"ok..ok..thik hai..sham ko dhek laena mujhae..ab tum log

jao clg kae liyae der ho raha hai...aal the best both of u

darlings..." saying this he hugged them who got up to

leave..and called the driver to drop them off... they both

bid him bye nd left fr their collage...

"baby doll...im home...jaldi neechae aaja...mujhae bohat

bhook lagi hai...mai bhi fresh hokar aa jata hun..."

shouter Cabir as soon as he entered the house..

"aai bhai..."came rply frm Nandini..

Both were sitting on the table taking random things whn

suddenly...

" Nandu.." Cabir started nt knowing where to start nd hw

to say it to her... sensing this tension on her ever smiling

nd loving brothers face she immediately got up frm her

chair nd went towards him placed her hand on his

shoulder nd continued

"kya hua bhai... aap aaisae kyun baat kar rahae

ho...kya hua ?"

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so frnds after a lot of difficulties im here with chapter 1as promised

Hmmm...so frnds here is the chapter 1... two sisters

spoilt by their brothers luv...nd two extremly loving nd

caring brothers... chalo lets c how their lifes make them

meet each other... wht vil b the reaction whn they vil

meet each other...

keep smiling
tak care
c u soon with chapter 2
drop ur comments nd let me know ur reviews...

loads of love
Neeraja...

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neeraja

@neeju_chinnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

a veryyy happy b'day to Ranbir
chapter 1 has been updated
as a gift to his all crazy fans (including me 😉😆 )

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Awesome update
Wowww Navya aur nandu donno ranbir ki fan hai donno ko bhayioo ke jyada laad pyaar ne bigaad rkha hai
Nicely written
Lovd it
Continue soon
Gbu n Take care

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stars_fireflies

@stars_fireflies

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Wow ... Nice chapter both navni r soo cute nd spoiled by their respective bro... I always adore cabini as bro sis .. Nd here I gt them as cousins... Lovelyyy

Penned down nicely