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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: srija-n

ok wo platform pe aa jayee usse pahele may ist chapter ki tarif to krlu !!! 😆
Nice part ... ranbir's fan !! Me too !! 😳
Manik ke ladli navya and kavir ke ladli nandu ..!!! Sooo swt !!!
Raj and nayo kaha gayee !!!!
nandu's family intro .. very nice ...
And ea ranbir or manik molhotra ka confusion plz jaldi clear krdo !!!
Waiting fr d next part cntinue soon... 😊


ty sooo much fr ur lovely feed back..😊

yaar agar confusion itni jaldi clear ho jayae to maza kaha aayaega...😉😆
ther's a lot more to cum...
PICTURE ABHI BAAKI HAI MARAE DOOST..;) :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

so hello friends im back with the update..

happy reading.. J

Chapter 2 :

"So tera kya kehana hai..." Cabir said as soon as he finished telling her dat today their very close family friends nd business associated Iyers were cuming to their house for dinner as well as vit a marriage proposal fr Nandini...

She stayed calm fr few minutes took few long breaths to control her anger which reached the peak on hearing that sum stupid was cuming to c her... if it was nt Cabir telling this to her till now she wolud have broken all the plates kept in front of her on the table...

"bhai.." so spoke very slowly composing her to da maximum extent possible... " u no my answer right... mujhae nahi chaiyae koi NRI... bevakuf kahinka...! kya samajh rakha hai mujhae...ki vo apne summer camp kae liyae India aayae ga aur mujhae apnae saath luggae mai achraar ki tharh pack karkae lae jayae ga...mai kaisae dikhai dae rahi hun haan?.. aap logon pae bhoj hun kya..?mera picha chudana chahatae ho kya...itna paraeshan karti hun mai aap logon ko..?" she spoke vit tears brimming in her eyes...

she was nt a emotional person but the thought of marriage nd leaving her family nd of course her most lovable person her brother always brought tears into her eyes...

Listening this Cabir was also getting emotional.. but right nw his main goal was to stop her tears frm falling down frm her eyes... he cursed himself fr bringing this topic infront of her even aftr knowing wht her anser would b..

he spoke

"hmm...to game on...phir sae bhagae datae hai usko... vo aayaega khaaega aur phir bhag jayaega... tho phir kya plan hai...chalo lets thnk abt it..ki us becharae NRI ko kaisae bhagana hai...i no its an easy task fr u.. but mujhae bhi bata dae yaar..ill try nd help u.." he said nd winked at her..

his plan worked nd she started laughing on her brothers comments... aftr a few good minutes she spoke "bhai let me handle this myself..Iyers hamarae bohat close family frnds hai aur business associates bhi.. i dnt want ki merae waja sae chacha-chachi ko koi prblm face karna padae.. aur rahi baat bicharae Mr.Iyer ki.. tho leave him to me ill handle him in my style.." nd winked at him vit a devilish smirk on her face..

"mujhae lagatha hai aaj raat vo hamarae ghar sae seedha airport chala jaeyaega...i pity him... pata nahi kya honae vala hai uskae saath shayad usnae apnae sapnae mai bhi nahi socha hoga ki da ever most bubbly Nandini murthy itni violent bhi ho sakthi hogi.." nd both burst out into laughter...

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Meanwhile in Malhotra Heights

Manik was in sitting in his lavish cabin thinking sumthng.. his deep thoughts were disturbed by a knock on his door

" sir..can i come in" it was his secretary Aaryaman..

"yeah..cum in Aaryaman..nd yaar chuck this sir nd all call me Manik ...hw many times did i tell u..."

"sir...umm..i mean Manik vo..tumharae vo Banglore valae client hai na..Mr.Malhotra..unka aaj subhae call aaya tha.. they wanted u to come nd visit their factory once to verify their product so that we can proceed further... so shall i book ur tickets fr todays evening...what say ?"

He thought for a while nd said

" no not today.. Navya will freak out if she comes to know that ill be leaving today evening..ill take her for dinner tonight nd then ill tell her.. varna tumhae aur mujhae dono ko maar daalaegi.." saying this he winked at Aaryaman nd he left his cabin laughing to book his tickets for banglore da next day...

In the evening :

Manik was still in his office nd was about to wrap up his work when he got a call frm Navya

" bhai..!!" she shouted on the top of her voice... he fr a second palmed his ears nd replied

" navya calm down..kyun chilla rahi ho..."

"like ssly bhai mai chilla rahi hun...aur aap nae jo kiya uska kya..." she replied still shouting

"lekin baby ...mainae kya kiya ??" now his voice was softened a bit nd he was worried as wht made Navya soo angry...it was nt that she needed a reason to b angry... but still he was worried as what might may have happened dat she is soo mad at him...

" aapnae kya kiya...aap phir sae Banglore jaa rahae hai.. kya mai jaan sakthi hun.. kyun...? aap phir sae vahan jaa rahae ho,...this is for the 5th time in the span of 2 months dat u r going Banglore... soo often..! " she spoke furiously

"aarae baba...calm down...u no na Mr.Ranabir Malhotra hamarae kitnae badae client hai...to agar business expansion karna hai to jana padaega na.. v cant call him here na..." he spoke calmly

" jaana zaarori hai kya ?" she asked controlling her tears as well as anger as she knew if it was nt important her brother wouldnt think of leaving her even fr a single day alone in Delhi...

"haan baba..jaana hai..but i promise ill b bak aftr a week.. pakka promise..so i hve a surprise fr u get ready..lets go out fr dinner..mai bhi ghar aa raha hun..aur haan Mukthi ko bhi bulana...its been a long time we three went out fr dinner together.."said Manik

Na : "theek hai bhai..ill get ready aur aap bhi jaldi aa jana.. mujhae aapko bhaut important baat batana hai.."

M : "agar tum phn rakhogi nahi tho mai aisae aaunga.."

Na :"ohh..god.. mai bhi na...theek hai byee ... c u soon... im waiting...cum fast.."

Saying this she cut the call nd he grabbed his car keys nd drove off to his house...

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So cabir nd nandu are planning something.. nd on the other side manik nd navya have a surprise for each other whose surprise wil surprise other .. jannae kae liyae stay tuned to manan ss barfi ;)

drop ur comments... I wuld love to read them... wil b back soon vit da update

Lots of luv...

Neeraja...J

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update ..
To mr leyer .. be ready ...!!!
Kabni covo is so swt ...
Manik is going to bangalore .. nice
Cntinue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.super excited for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Awesome update
Toh hamari nandu ko ladka dekhne aa rha hai ya yoon khe ke bakra halaal hone aa rha hai...hahahahaha kya kregi nandu uske saath...
Manik aur navya ek dusre ke liye surprise mm intrestng
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
love it so much...
can't wait to find out what the surprise is on both sides...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

chapter 3 :

Murthy Mansion (in the evening) :

there was hustle bustle all over the house ... chacha chachi were checking for the last minute preparations regarding the food nd all other arrangements...

" nandu beta get ready fast.. vo log aatae hi hongae...jaldi jaldi kar beta... accha nahi lagta guests ko wait karwana..." said chachi seeing nandu totally careless attitude about the arriving guests..

"theek hai chachi...aaisae taiyar hoongi na ki sab log sirf mujhae hi dekhtae rehjayangae.. aur rahi baat us bevakuf NRI ki...vo tho aaj vo gaya..." she said nd winked at her chachi...

completly knowing her daughters intentions chachi who was about to leave the room came back to her again nd said

"nandu pichlae baar ki tarah iss bar koi shetani nahi chaiyae mujhae.. pata hai na... Iyers bahuat acchae log hai beta..aur un ka beta Rahul Iyer... hai mai mar jawa.. bilkul DDLJ ka Sharuk dikh tha hai... bahut acchi lagaegi tum dono ki jodi... iss liyae jaldi

taiyar hokae neechae aa ja.. vo log aatae hi hongae..." saying this chachi left...

"jo bhi ho...jaisa bhi ho...marae Ranabir ko iss duniya mai koi bhi beat nahi kar saktha.."

she spoke looking at Her Ranabirs poster...winked at him

"aaj to uss Rahul ki Band bajnae vaali hai..!"she smiles naughtily nd started getting ready...

meanwhile Iyers arrived...chacha chachi were welcoming them.. nd Cabir was taking to Rahul as they both knew each other very well being business associates...

every1 was sitting in the living area...nd Mrs.Iyer spoke " arae kitni der chupa rakhogi meri honae wali bahu ko Santoshi...jaldi bulao usko...mujhsae aur raha nahi jaa raha... bahut din hogayae usae dekh kar..."

chachi was about to get up to call Nandini..nd there she was... cuming down the stairs wearing a baby pink lehanga with silver embroidery accompanied vit a backless blouse...her hairs loosly left..nd lightly curled at the ends...da lehanga perfectly fitted her showing off her perfect figure... vit light makeup...nd very light jewellery..a single chain vit a heart pendant..nd a pair of dazzling diamond earings... she was indeed luking dropdead gorgeous...just lke a fairy cuming down the earth..to enlighten this dark world...

she slowly walked towards them wearing her ever beautiful smile...nd sat in between her chacha nd chachi...

"kitni soni lag rahi hai meri bacchi...meri hi nazar lag jayaegi issae..."saying this chachi touched the corner of her eye nd placed a black dot of kajal behind her ear...

"sach mai santoshi...mera beta to lakhon mai ek hoga jiski biwi itni khubsoorat hogi..." saying this Mrs.Iyer got up nd kissed nandini's forehead... everyone present there were smiling luking at her..

AT THE TABLE :

everyone were sitting there on the table having their light talks nd enjoying da crazy combination of Punjabi nd South Indian food...praising chachi's cooking skills... after their dinner..they all were sitting in the beautiful garden enjoying the cool night breezes and chachi got up to get desserts for ever1..

Nandini signalled Cabir fr the execution of their plan

he winked at her and " maa..!! i think Nandu aur Rahul ko ek dusarae sae baat karni chaiyae.. afterall unhi kae rishtae ki baatae chal raahi hai..."said Cabir

"haan haan ,... mai bhi yaehi bolnae vaali thi.." joined Mrs.Iyer...

"baccho tum log andar jakae... thodi der ek dusarae sae baatae karlo... ek dusarae ko jannae pechnnanae sae rishtae mai mazbuthi badathi hai.." said chachi nervously nt knowing the intensions of Cabir nd Nandini who were acting positively in front of guests for the first time...

Nandini nd Rahul left to Nandinis room for their TALK... ;)

IN NANDU'S ROOM :

as soon as they entered the room she very polietly asked him to sit on the couch present in her room... his eyes were wandering along the whole room.. he saw her pictures of her on the wall... sum were nly her's sum were vit her family...nd sum vit her frnds he thought... nd then hiseyes fell on the large poster of Ranabir Kapoor...nd his eyes widened in shock...seeing such a large picture.. nd the lipstick marks over that pic almost everywhere...

on the other wall were her guitar nd violin hung...she being a music lover there were lots nd lots of CD's of various albums nd other music stuff was arranged there...

she was standing near her large window staring the stars outside.. he slowly walked towards her nd

" lagtae hai tum Ranabir Kapoor ki bahut badi fan ho...i mean itna bada poster Ranabir ka.. its gud...i...i...i kind of... liked it..."said Rahul breaking the silence..

she turned around to tak to him..nd his eyes were widened in horror seeing her... her eyes were blood shot red...eyeliner nd kajal spread all over her eyes...nd she was breathing heavily...

"chalae jao yahan sae.." she spoke in a threatinig voice..

"kya...!!!!! " he exclaimed in shock + horror tone...

"mai nae kaha chalae jao yahan sae...sunai nahi deta kya...Nandini sirf meri hai..sirf meri.. agar uskae paas bhi aanae ki koshish ki na tho mai tumhae maaar daalunga..." again she spoke in the same horrifing voice...

"kaun ho tum..??" he again asked nt able to figure out wht was happening nd why was she speaking in such a dangerous voice aal of a sudden who was perfectly alright few minutes back...

"mae...kaun hun mai...mae Nandini ka lover hun...hum dono ek dusrae sar bahut pyaar kartae thae..aur ek din achanak sae meri accident ho gayi...aur mai mar gaya...par mai apni nandu ko akalae nahi chod saka iss liyae humesha uskae aaspaas hi ghumtha rahaeta hun..usko protect karnae kae liyae... nandu bhi is baat ko nahi janthi..agar tunae is kae barae mai kisiko bhi batayi tho mai tujhae jaan sae maar dalunga...khabardaar jo nandu ya uskae ghar valon ko is baarae mai kuch bhi bataya tho..vohi tumhara iss duniya mai akhri din hoga...!! " saying this Nandu fainted...

too much horrified with the recent encounter..Rahul immediately rushed downwards shouting lke a maniac... everyone got worried seeing him lke dat... nd chacha chachi asked in unision

"kya hua beta..? aaisae kyun chilla rahae ho...?"

" vo...vo...aunty...uncle..." he was stammering nd swetting very badly...

" vo vo kya kar rah hai... kya hua beta bolo na.. kya hua upar... nandu kaha hai...?" asked Mrs.Iyer worried by her sons behaviour hearing the name of Nandini itself bought jitteres all over his body..

" vo baehosh ho gayi..." he finally gathered courage to group up some words nd speak out... hearing this chacha chachi nd cabir immediately rushed upwards... meanwhile Mr.Iyer called the doctor...

"papa... i think hamae chalana chahyae..yae unkae family ka matter hai.. they vil solve it.. mujhae bahut important kaam yaad aagaya hai... i thnk v should leave now.." Rahul spoke

Mr&Mrs Iyer got confused with his sudden change in behaviour nd agreed to leave.. they left aftr informing Mr&Mrs Dhawan...

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leaving on cliff hanger right...hehe pata hai mujhae bhi... aur yeh nandu ka lover kaun hai.. aur vo achanak bhoot kahan sae aa gaya...wht is da story between them...

jannae kae liyae stayed tuned to Barfi..!! ;)

keep smiling... drop ur comments expressing ur opinions...

lots of luv...

Neeraja... J

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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Read both d parts nw...
omg dey were so awesome...
loved it to d core...
I love d bond between nanbir...super cute dey r...
aww navya is really manik's baby...
omg 3 chapter was hilarious...
god I couldn't stop laughing all d while reading d chapter...
I so loved d update...
it was awesome...
hahaha omg dat t
rahul was so scared...hehe...
I think it is nandu's drama...
New entry can't wait for d nxt update...
plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: manan_0711

Read both d parts nw...

omg dey were so awesome...
loved it to d core...
I love d bond between nanbir...super cute dey r...
aww navya is really manik's baby...
omg 3 chapter was hilarious...
god I couldn't stop laughing all d while reading d chapter...
I so loved d update...
it was awesome...
hahaha omg dat t
rahul was so scared...hehe...
I think it is nandu's drama...
New entry can't wait for d nxt update...
plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...


tysm fr ur rply...:)) 😛
actually more fun is yet to com...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry for updating heading..so late..

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