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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey chinnu
baby thanks for the pm
I must say you're maintaining suspense very well. Hmmm... Lunch tak super recipe arrived I am enjoying it waiting for more new dishes
Wow you mentioned every famous place of my city... And yeah a very big waale thank you... Tight waale huggie...and kissieee for dedicating this to mee anjali aunty was cute haha ladla cabir's KO bacha liye missed navti in this update dhrubir are more than awesome and love nandu unconditionally cabir's surprise was awesome nandu is super happy
Nandu's excitement was awesome to meet her ranbir... Oh chinnu i remembered that drunk nandu in that glass seen...
Ranbir entry was nice...and wow how he is addressing her as my dear mysterious girl...my angel...he's taking it so possessively and with full rights... Baby I'm damn and 100%sure ki he is not ranbir he's definitely manik malhotra may be in your story there must be ranbir but the guy who's here as ranbir he's pakka our Mr majnu malhotra... Ranbirs entry is still to come...
Cold coffee with ice cream I must say you've a very good taste... Wow he's asking her to share this is kinda cute These feelings and that blush on nandu's face its reserved only for manik not for koi ranbir Cabir and dhruv are making excuses to leave these new birds... (I'll not mention love birds) to discover more about each other and spend some lonely time with each other Amazing update
Continue soon...can't wait more
Sorry didn't said you previous but yeah I'm saying it now I Love you tooo...like you do
Take care stay blessed


thnk u sooo much...
ummah...!!!
thnks a lot lot...
im speech less...
thnks fr ur love...
really... it means alot...
vil give u a surprise tmro...😉
tak care...
keep smiling...
luv u tonnes nd loads...
urs chinnu :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Ye ranbir manik hi hai...nandu kitni cute hai bilkul bachi hai...plz aap jldi se ye mystry unfold kro...
Nandu toh ranbir se milne keliye restless ho gyi...lovd it...thnks for pm me...continue soon

yaar... thnk u sooo much fr ur rplyyy...
mystery unfold nahi ..balki ten folds badhnae vali hai 😉😆
tab tak kae liyae.. apna dhyan rakhna...
hehe...
tak care...
loads of luv...
keep smiling... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

What-how-when-why ????? Ufff kya raha hain ??? Itna Sara confusion !!!!! Bohot maza araha hain na tujhe humari patience level test karne mein ?? Hmm ??? Mujhe toh Ranbir hi humara majnu manik lag raha hain par as u said hum Jo soch rahe hain wo hone nahi Wala aur so hum socheneke soch hi nahi sakte wo hoga wah wah then Ranbir manik hone ka chance toh bilkul hi nahi lag raha !!!!! Ranbir-nandu's meeting was awesome ...hahaha nandu toh lag raha tha glass wall se hi kiss karne wali hain !!! Omg agar nandu aur Ranbir ko Pehle nazar mein pyaar ho Gaya then humara manik ka kya hoga ???? Ufff confusion he confusion hain !!!!!! Plz jaldi jaldi update kar aur humara Sara confusion dur kar plz plz plz ...jaldi jaldi update chahiye ... Thanks for the pm ... Love u a lot baiby ...update super jaldi jaldi !! Tc... With lots of love and hugs

😆😆😆
thnks fr ur rplyy...
thnk u sooo much fr ur luv...
it really means a lot... :)
but im warning u.. mystery nd confusion sur bhi badhnae vali hai...😉😆...
tak care...
keep smiling...
loads nd tonnes of luv...
neeju :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
u knw what neeraja
ab maine sochna hi ni aage kya hoga
ranbir manik bth r malhotras manan chodo m hell confussed🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved it so much...
it was an awesome 1st meet...
loved the way manik/ranbir poked her nose on the window...it was too cute...
they are sharing a drink with each other...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
this chapter is being dedicated to Ekta@manan_eku.. dhilon90 & sharon.babu..who hve been a grt support frm da befinning.. thnks a lot...😊
here goes da update...


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Posted: 9 years ago
this chapter is being dedicated to Ekta@manan_eku.. dhilon90 & sharon.babu..who hve been a grt support frm da befinning.. thnks a lot...😊
here goes da update...





Chapter 10 :

Ranbir's pov :

"kyu...kya hua.. whats so urgent" nandini spoke nd got

up from the chair nd stood beside cabir

"kuch nahi..kuch papers hai.. they need to be signed by

me.. have to rush.. bahut imp papers hai.." cabir said

grabbed his keys nd signalled dhruv to get up..

"but dhruv bhai kyun.. aap jao na.. let him stay here..

agar aap log chalae jao gae tao mai ghar kaisae jaau.."

she again spoke innocently pouting.. I just felt lke kissing

the pout then and there itself but controlled myself

reminding my stupid mind that her brothers were

standing in front of us...

"offo .. Ranbir hai na.. vo tujhae ghar chod daega... kyu

Ranbir.. tujhae kuch problem hai..nandu k ghar chod

nae mai" cabir asked me

"it would be a pleasure to do.. cabir u don't worry ill drop

her home safe and sound.. ur sister is in safe hands " I

said nd stressed the last line.. I don't know y but I

wanted him to trust me regarding her..nd more was that

ki I wanted to leave them immediately as I wanted to

spent time alone which would not b possible until they

are around..

He winked at both of us and said "haan.. pata hai.. isi

liyae tho bol raha hun.. u both share and enjoy ur

coffee" and kissed her hair assuringly.

She again blushed.. god y does she blush so much at

every small thing.. within no time they left..nd we both

again sat together

None of us was talking but the silence was speaking

volumes..breaking the silence the waiter came with our

single cold coffee

"sir.. ur cold coffee.."he said and placed the coffee on

the table and placed an empty glass beside for us to

share it ...nd I signalled him to leave

We both touched the glass same time and our fingers

touched.. I could feel her shiver.. she immediately

withdrew her hands gestured me to pour it into the other

glass... I finally accomplished the task.. and pushed the

glass to her side

After sipping it I finally spoke breaking the akward

silence prevailing

"umm.. its good.. ur taste is really gud.. I never had a

cold coffee lke this one.." I said nd expected her to reply

but she just smiled in reply.. what to do.. shez not

uttering a single word nd her silence was something

very much unbearable bye me.. so to tease her.. I said

" are u dumb ?" saying this I winked at her..

U must have seen her expression.. she was looking

really funny.. eyes so widened that they would fall of the

sockets very soon.. nd her mouth in perfect O

I was having a tough time controlling my laugh seeing

her like that

Nd finally my plan was successful and she spoke

"do I look like dumb..?? I spoke to bhai earlier didn't u

hear.. or let me guess r u deaf ??" she retorted angrily

making a cute angry pout and continued drinking her

coffee..

" I didn't mean that.. I can perfectly hear.. whn I asked

u.. u didn't rply so I thought u couldn't.." nd didn't extend

further as of now I understood that she gets angry very

easily

"nai.. aaisi koi baat nahi hai..its just that ki I was.. I

was.." she was stammering...nd she started revolving

the straw in her glass making rounds in it..

"its ok.. I understand u might b nervous right..?" I asked

sum nonsense just to get the right answer from her..

"nahi.. aaisa kuch nahi hai.." she again said a one liner

nd got busy with her coffee

"toh.. tell me about urself.. I mean we are now friends

right..? nd friens ko ek dusarae kae baarae mae janna

chahiyae.." I asked wishing her to speak up something

"mmm... im doing my MBA.. I like music.." she started

telling about herself.. her collage her friends her family..

I didn't listen much but was just looking at her

expressions which were priceless..her eyes sumtimes

big sometimes small.. nd getting no reply from me she

looked at me.. nd I was caught staring...

"tum sun bhi rahae hoy a nahi..?" she asked finding me

lost.

"aa..haan..im listening na.. continue.." I said covering up

"mainae tumsae kuch pucha tha.. uska jawab do..?" she

asked a bit annoyed this time

"kya pucha..tumnae..?" I asked completely clueless

about wht she has asked..

"to tumnae nahi suna.." she caught me..

"vo..vo.." I started stammering nd she was serious for a

moment nd burst out laughing.. she was laughing her

heart out..nd I was completely enjoying her laugh..which

seemed like the most melodious music to my ears

"u must have seen ur face" she spoke pointing her finger

towards my face controlling her laugh but again laughed

nd composed herself after sometime..

"u look beautiful while laughing.. always keep smiling " I

said and again she blushed..

"yaar,.. y do u blush soo much ?"I asked out of curiosity

She started looking her and there.. suddenly took her

glass threw away the strar nd gulped the coffee in one

go.. the lather was stuck above her lips which she didn't

bother to clean after keeping the glass down

"I think humae ghar chalna chaiyae.." she said diverting

the topic I previously asked her.. I leaned closer to her

she was stunned .. but I kept moving closer nd closer.. I

could feel her breath going uneven.. I was enjoying the

effect I had on her.. I slowly lifted my hand nd cupped

her cheek she closed her eyes tightly...

I caressed her cheek with my thumb nd put my other

hand on her other cheek.. she was now completely out

of her senses her breathing was going wilder with each

passing second.. I was trying my best not to laugh

seeing her totally red..

"ran..ran...rannbirrr,..." She managed to speak

I just hummed

"vo.. vo..." she was stammering very badly

"vo vo kya nanduuu?? Aagae bolo na ?" I asked nd

her eyes were open wide I winked at her she looked

away shyly and again closed her eyes...

I placed both of my thumbs on her lips and cleaned the

coffee lather stuck above her lips.. she shivered at my

very touch...

"hogaya.." I said cleaning it and sat back in my chair

normally as if nothing happened.. she was totally flushed

The waiter came with a box and gave it to her

"yae kya hai..?" she asked immediately as the waiter out

the box in front of her

"aapkae bhai nae bola tha aapko danae ko.." saying this

he turned to leave

She opened the box and there were chocolate muffins..

"aww... bhai ko yaad hai.. that I love these.."she said

looking at them nd immediately took her phone nd dailed

Cabirs number

"bhai...u remember that I liked these when we visited

here last time..?" she asked as soon as cabir received

her call

"how could I forget ?" was cabirs reply

"oh.. bhai .. I love u soo soo much.."she exclaimed

"even ur bhai loves u baby doll.. chalo c u at home im

driving.."he said

"ok.. byee.. c u at home.." she said and ended the call.

I was looking at her.. the was she was talking to cabir

reminded me of someone.. but I pushed away my

thoughts and asked her

"tho..u love ur brother very much ha..?"

"haan.. I love him more than anything.. he is the first

person in my life.. no one to me is more than him...bhai

is my everything..he takes care of every single and the

smallest thing of mine.. I just love him very very much"

she said and I saw tears welling up her eyes.. ohh such

a pure soul she was..

"yeah.. I do understand.." I replied and continued "so

ghar chalein ?" I asked diverting the topic nd she

nodded cutely.

We paid and left from there.

On the way to her house she was again silent..to break

the silence I took the lead and spoke

"nandu.."I took a pause nd continued " ha.. can I call u

lke that.. I mean we r now friends right.." I was looking at

her curiously waiting her reply nd she nodded her head

as a yes smilingly.

"so nanduu.. umm.. r u free tomorrow ?"

"what..!! I mean collage jana hai.." she said

"of course collage tho jana hai.. after collage ?" I asked

"yeah.. what would I do after collage im free.."

"tho.. kal kahin bahar chalein ?" I asked.. desperately

waiting her to say yes..

"vo.. bhai ko kya bolu..?"

"bol do na ki we r going out together.." I said casually

"umm.. chachi ko..?" she again asked

"kuch bhi bol do.. yaar whats a big deal?"

"tumhae pata hai chachi kitinii questions puchithi hai ?"

she said cutely looking at me..

"tho seedhae seedhae bol do ki apnae frnd kae saath

bahar ja rahi ho.. common nandu whats a big deal in it..

say yes na..?" I asked looking at her

"hmm.. ill.. ill see.."

"so ill come and pick u up at 4.. what say ?" I asked her

"ok..mai ready ho jaungi.. but jana kahan hai..?" again a

question.. God soo many questions... ladki hai ya

question bank..

"movie dekhnae chaltae hai.." I said.. nd she just nodded

With that we reached her house.. she got ready to leave

"area number tho dekae jao.. hw will I call u ?" I asked

as my brain worked fast at the right time

Nd she gave me her number waved me bye and left

from there.. I looked at my watch and my countdown

started to meet her tomorrow...

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"bhai aap kab aarahae ho ??" navya asked immediately after

Manik answered the call

"navya.. calm down..ill b back soon.. pata nahi yeh Ranabir

kahan gayab ho gaya.. warna I would have been back by now"

manik explained calmly..

"lekin bahi.. that's not fair.. u said na ull b back.." navya nagged

like a child

"haan baba.. mainae bola tha.. but kya karu.. thoda kaam

pending hai.. I cant come leaving the work in middle lke dat

right..?" said manik trying to convience her

But ..but.. navya was navya..

"main na aap sae bahut bahut narraz hun.. im not gonna talk to

u until u come back.. aap hi decide karlo.. mai yaa kaam..

bye.." saying this she without giving him a chance to speak cut

the call.

"hello..hello..navya listen..meri baat tho suna...hello.. cut kar

diya...this girl na.. she ll some day make me mad" thought

manik and he knew talking to navya this time would be waste

as she ll definitely not listen to him... suddenly an idea stuck in

his mind.. he took his phone and dialled the number of that

person

"haan.. tum jo bhi hi karo.. jaisae bhi karo I don't care.. kal thak

saari arrangements ho jani chaiyae.. it should reach home

along with the sun...I don't know tum kya karogae.. I want it

that's it.. even if u have to pay twice amount pay it.. but I want it

at any cost.. u get that..!!" manik spoke to the other person in

his bossy manner.. and cut the call..

"ab dekhtha hun.. kaisae nahi baath karthi hai mujhsae.."

thought manik smilingly nd rested on the couch watching tv..

" iss Ranbir ka kuch karna padaega.. i cant upset Navya everytime" thought manik "but..." and again got lost in his thoughts

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So frnds.. ha gaya.. nandu aur ranabir finally mil gayae

aur phir milangae..guess what would be navyas gift dat

manik has planned... want to read more.. tho jaldi jaldi

comment karo.. drop ur comments nd hit likes...

More mystery to unfold behind ranabir.. whom was he

thinking about while talking to nandu.. kaun hai vo ??

Jannae kae liyae .. stay tuned to Barfi...

Till then .. keep smiling..

Love u loads...

Neeraja
Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read last 2 chapters now
It's awesome
You really make desperate for the update

Oh ha I have a guess I think ranbir hi manik hai
And he was thinking about navya only while talking to nandu

Well it's just a guess I don't know it's true or not ...

Continue soon

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Ranbir ko nandu pasand hai...ab toh aise lgg rha hai manik hi manik hai aur ranbir hi ranbir pr kabhi kabhi ranbir ki baaton se lgta hai wo hi manik hai...golmaal hai sb golmaal hai...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
my biggest ques
ranbur n manik ka kya connection h
n y havent navya seen ranbir yet

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