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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Ranbir ki entry huyi...
No manan scenes...cabir kya kya krna padta hai na...ab toh tuje ranbir bhi mil gea chl lgja mission pr...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 8 :


"yaar pinch me once.." dhruv said as soon as they stepped inside the house

"shhh..dheerae bol dhruv koi sun laega..." cabir said

"kya erada hai taera...?" asked dhruv confused with cabirs behaviour

"hae bhagwan kitnae sawal kartha hai tu.. chal marae saath chal tu.." said cabir dragging dhruv with him to his room.. as soon as they entered the room cabir locked it nd turned to answer dhruvs questions

"kya kar raha hai.. mai aaisa nahi hun.. shaadi ho gayi hai meri..." spoke dhruv dramatically

Cabir rolled his eyes nd " shup up yaar..!"

" ok.. ok.. ab bol..plan kya hai..?" asked dhruv exicitedly

And cabir explained him the total plan which hi worked up in his mind while returning from the bar... Dhruv's eyes widened nd became normal timely listening to cabir's plans..

" yaar sab kuch theek hai.. r u sure about this..?" asked dhruv to confirm nd cabir nodded his hed in a yes..

" theek hai.. count me in.. ill help u...lets get him" dhruv said nd both hi-fied..

"MISSION RANBIR..." both said nd shook their hands nd dhruv returned to his room..


Next Morning :


As usual cabir dropped nandini in her collage nd dhruv accompanied them today...

As soon as she left bidding them bye.. they turned nd moved towards Ranabirs farmhouse... after a good 30 minutes they reached there as it was quite far away from the city...


" hello...anybody home..."shouted cabir finding no one visible nearby nd he was ringing the bell for the 5th time..


"kaun hai subah subah... kyu chilla rahae ho.?" Shouted Ranabir opening the door..

Nd after finding cabir nd dhruv he opened the door completely nd asked them to get in... the trio were sitting in the living area.. dhruv nd cabir sat on the sofa nd ranabir took the chair opposite them.. he was yarning nd rubbing his eyes..

"tum dono..yahan ..itni subah subah..is everything alright ?" asked Ranabir worriedly seeing them early in the morning...

"Mr.Malhotra.. shayad aapko raat ki abhi tak utri nahi.. its 10 AM buddy..." replied dhruv pointing towards the clock in the living room

R : "ohh..freak..!! I slept for soo long.. pata hi nahi chala.."

"hmmm.. after effects of party.." said cabir nd winked looking at Ranbir..nd he smiled

"so kaisae aana hua..?" asked Ranbir trying to divert the topic from his side..

"area yae kaisa saval hai...? Ab hum doost hai na.. doost to ek dusarae kae ghar aatae jaatae rehatae hai.. kyun chalae jayae hum.." saying this cabir was about to get up

R : "mera matlab vo nahi tha.."

" tho phir kya tha..?" said cabir faking anger

"cabir.. u r such a dramaebaz.." said Ranbir hitting his shoulder..." chalo ab batao... kaisae yaad karna hua mujhae.." asked Ranbir raising his eyebrows


"kuch khaas nahi..as u said ystrday dat u don't know much of banglore nd u mostly stay at ur farmhouse whenever u cum here.. so we decided to show u all the famous places in and around this city... wht say... r u ok with it ?" completed cabir

"of course yaar.. I would love to.. infact mai kehatha hoon ki u ppl wait mai fresh hokae aata hun v wi pack sum stuff nd leav after breakfast.." said ranbir super excitedly

"agar tujhae ghumnae ka itna hi shok hai tho pehalae kyu nahi bataya... hum apna bag pack karkae sath mai lakae aatae.." Dhruv said nd hi-fi ed with Cabir

" yaar.. ab kya batau.. koi doost nahi hai marae yahan.. aur dooston kae bina asae akalae ghumnae mai thodi na maza aata hai.. iss liyae jabhi aata hun.. bas aaisae hi farmhouse mai akalae time spend kartha hun.. aadat si ho gayi hai.." replied Ranbir sadly

"kisnae bola doost nahi hai... hum hai na.. so lets not waste time .. tu jaldi fresh hokae aaja phir hum chaltae hai.." cabir said nd immediately Ranbir got up nd moved into his room fr getting ready..

"bichara.. kitna akela hai ..." said dhruv

"vo tho hai.. mainae teen dinon ka plan banaya hai.. v will try our level best to get his total information .. his habits any girlfriends.. etc etc nd all other stuff nd if everything is clear we vil tak him to Nandu.." concluded cabir nd they both discussed their plans so as where to go frst nd wht to c.. meanwhile Ranbir came down nd they started their siteseeing trip



In Delhi :

"yaar mukthi.. mai sootchi hunk i.. yae bhai na.. humaesha uss Ranbir kae barae mae batatae hai.. par usko kabhi Delhi invite nahi kiya.. sirf vo hi Banglore jaatae hai kaam kae liyae aur vo Ranbir kabhi Delhi nahi aata.. aaisa kyun ?" askd a worried Navya

"busy hotha hoga..iss mai itni badi baath kya hai yaar.. tub hi na..har cheez ko kuch zyada hi sochti hai.." replied mukthi

" nahi.. ek baar mainae pucha bhai sae ki vo Ranbir ko yahan kyu nahi bulathe but unhon nae meri baat taal yeh kehtae ki vo nahi aa saktha.. doesn't this sound weird.. agar bhai vahan baar baar jaa sakthae hai to vo yahan kyu nahi aata..?" said navya

"hmm.. mujhae yae bata,.. tu kyu uss Ranbir kae peechae padi hai...?" asked mukthi suspiciously

"nahi..mai kyu.. mera matlab hai ki .. aaisa kuch nahi hai.." stammered navya

Navya stammering during speaking was a very rare thing to watch.. sensing this mukthi was on her jasoos mode nd again asked when sumthng stuck her mind

" wait a minute..dont tell me that tu uskae naam pae mar rahi hai.. I mean to say ki..tu bina dekhae uskae naam sae hi usae pasand karnae lagi... hw could I forget that u silly head r a Ranbir fan..." said mukthi slapping her head

" yaar aaisa kuch nahi hai... but u no wht.. bhai kae mu sae kisi kae baarae mai itni acchae batae sunna.. I was feeling strange.. I mean bhai ko koi itni jaldi pasand nahi aata.. lekin vo jab bhi uss Ranbir ki baat karate hai na tho unkae face pa eek alag sa glow nazar aata hai.. jo once in a blu moon dekhnae ko miltha hai.. dats y I was curious to c whoz dat person who has impressed Manik Malhotra soo much.." replied Navya


Flashback:


"navya tujhae pata hai..Ranbir na kitna fun type ka ladka hai.. usko dekh kae laghta hi nahi ki vo itna bada business handle kartha hai.. full life hai uski life mai.. dil khol kae jeena tho koi ussae seekhae..." Manik was talking continuously to Navya on their breakfast table.. navya was a bit surprised by Maniks behaviour.. never did manik praise sum1 soo much.. she was silently listening to him nd was imagining the person according to his description..

"bhai.. vo dikhnae mai kaisa lagtha hai..?" enquired navya curiously..

"bilkul hero.." said Manik..

Navya didn't no whn but she was gradually being attracted to an unknown person mere by her brothers description...

Flashback ends

" Kahan kho gayi,..." mukthi asked shaking Navya who was busy drawing a rough figure of an imaginary Ranbir in her mind..

"kahi nahi... bas bhai ki yaad aa rahi thi.." she covered nd continued "chal na kahi bahar chaltae hai... mujhae ice-cream khanae ka bahut man kar raha hai"

Nd there she was successful in diverting mukthis interrogation nd the duo went out fr having ice-cream...



So frnds.. confused...hmm.. ? Navni falling fr same guy..or the brothers selecting same guy fr their beloved sisters... yes or no tho mai abhi nahi bata sakthi... agar bata diya tho suspense kaha raha...hehe... so stay tuned to get clarified regarding the suspense...yae Ranbir ka chakkar kya hai ??? yae sab tho time kae sath sath pata chal jayaega aapko...tension mat lo ji...mai thodi na manan ko alag karnae vali hun... just wait nd watch...
bola tha na..this is nt lke other nrml stories.. drop ur comments...let me know ur opinions regarding the update...
nd ha..one more thng..my xams r cuming.. still im updating nw chapters.. plzz..wish me luck..this xams r veryy important fr me...
keep smiling...
tak care...

Loads of luv...

Neeraja :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaieee I am first
Amazing
Awesome
Superb
Update
Enjoyed a lot
Confusion ke mare mera sur ghum raha hai ...
Thanks for the pm ...

Love you
Ekta
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey chinnu
Thank you so much for the pm
Wow amazing updates
Finally manik landed in Bangalore
Dhruliya came back... Oh nandu and her tantrums... Its kinda cute... Remembers my childhood with my bhaai...cabir's such a sweet brothers firstly packed breakfast for her... Then knowing she didn't have her sandwich he gave milkshake yuccky... Phir knowing about her stubbornness he lied ki its banana milkshake with ice cream... And as per his prediction she finished it in a go... Again caring side of him wiping her mouth to clean milk drops its kinda awww... Ab ye anjali aunty I think she's related to malhotras somehow... Am I right???...then bodyguards like seriously... Thank god my bhaai is over possessive and over protective but he didn't appointed one for me...I'm so lucky it skipped from bhaai's mind... But how can I forget ki I'm not that lucky also bodyguard nahi hai par driver toh hai na...
Hmmm...finally wait is over ranbir ki entry ho gaye... But I've a doubt here is he really ranbir only or... I'll ask you after some days according to prologue hame kuch aur hi lag rahe hai... I think you got what I'm saying...
Haha dhruv and cabir setting him for nandu... Interesting... Bye god agar what I am thinking it only happens na I'll be the most happiest for nandu...
Ranbiruv became friends wo bhi pehle mulaaqat mein hi haha it happens very rare
Bangalore site seeing... I'll wait for you to show what all you know about my city...
Navti was again superb... Hahaha mukku's CID mind... God ye larki law kyun nahi join kar lete
Yahaan bhi ice cream... Wahaan bhi ice cream... Idhar bhi ranbir ka jaap... Udhar bhi ranbir ka jaap... Yahaan Navya hai wahaan nandu hai... Kiske kismat ka taala kulega... Jaan ne k liye intezaar kariye chinnu ke update k liye ravivar se shanivar anytime India forum mein...

PS: waiting eagerly for Manan to happen not nanbir yewww naam bhi nahi milte donon ka...
Haha just kidding aap KO jaisa lage aap waise Karo... I'll always read and comment till I'm going to exist...
Now update whenever you're free... Do well in your exams...
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome...amazing update
Manik bhi bangalore mein hai...ye manik hi ranbir hoga navya ke according ranbir kabhi delhi nhi aayea pr manik hi hamesha mangalore jaata hai...i think manik ne nandu ko dekha hoga phle se hi...issliye cabir ko pta rha hoga nandu tkk jaane ke liye...lovd it...thnks for pm me...continue nxt prt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey chinnu
Thank you so much for the pm
Wow amazing updates
Finally manik landed in Bangalore
Dhruliya came back... Oh nandu and her tantrums... Its kinda cute... Remembers my childhood with my bhaai...cabir's such a sweet brothers firstly packed breakfast for her... Then knowing she didn't have her sandwich he gave milkshake yuccky... Phir knowing about her stubbornness he lied ki its banana milkshake with ice cream... And as per his prediction she finished it in a go... Again caring side of him wiping her mouth to clean milk drops its kinda awww... Ab ye anjali aunty I think she's related to malhotras somehow... Am I right???...then bodyguards like seriously... Thank god my bhaai is over possessive and over protective but he didn't appointed one for me...I'm so lucky it skipped from bhaai's mind... But how can I forget ki I'm not that lucky also bodyguard nahi hai par driver toh hai na...
Hmmm...finally wait is over ranbir ki entry ho gaye... But I've a doubt here is he really ranbir only or... I'll ask you after some days according to prologue hame kuch aur hi lag rahe hai... I think you got what I'm saying...
Haha dhruv and cabir setting him for nandu... Interesting... Bye god agar what I am thinking it only happens na I'll be the most happiest for nandu...
Ranbiruv became friends wo bhi pehle mulaaqat mein hi haha it happens very rare
Bangalore site seeing... I'll wait for you to show what all you know about my city...
Navti was again superb... Hahaha mukku's CID mind... God ye larki law kyun nahi join kar lete
Yahaan bhi ice cream... Wahaan bhi ice cream... Idhar bhi ranbir ka jaap... Udhar bhi ranbir ka jaap... Yahaan Navya hai wahaan nandu hai... Kiske kismat ka taala kulega... Jaan ne k liye intezaar kariye chinnu ke update k liye ravivar se shanivar anytime India forum mein...

PS: waiting eagerly for Manan to happen not nanbir yewww naam bhi nahi milte donon ka...
Haha just kidding aap KO jaisa lage aap waise Karo... I'll always read and comment till I'm going to exist...
Now update whenever you're free... Do well in your exams...
Take care stay blessed

ahem..ahem...u r near to it..but nt completely... u got haf.. but pichar aur bhi baaki hai..
thanks fr ur lambaaa comment...
i just luv it...
was almost dancing aftr reading ur comment...
thnks fr ur love nd support..sach mai..thnks frm da bottom of my heart...
lov u...
tak care...
keep smiling...
urs chinnu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Awesome...amazing update
Manik bhi bangalore mein hai...ye manik hi ranbir hoga navya ke according ranbir kabhi delhi nhi aayea pr manik hi hamesha mangalore jaata hai...i think manik ne nandu ko dekha hoga phle se hi...issliye cabir ko pta rha hoga nandu tkk jaane ke liye...lovd it...thnks for pm me...continue nxt prt soon

yar..u r near to it..but nt completely... thoda thoda guess kar liya aapnae...
thnks fr ur lovelyyy rply...
thnks fr ur love. nd support..
tak care...
keep smiling...
loads of luv...
neeju :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Yaieee I am first

Amazing
Awesome
Superb
Update
Enjoyed a lot
Confusion ke mare mera sur ghum raha hai ...
Thanks for the pm ...

Love you
Ekta

heyy ... u r da frst one..thnks alot...
hehe😆...confusion tho aur badhnae vala hai...im warning u before itself..😉😆...
anyways...thnks fr ur love and support... thnks a ton...
tak care...
keep smiling...
neeju :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
u knw what ur story eaves me hell confused
kuch smjh ni ara are baba ho kya raha h🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the pm sweetheart...read ur story...its reallly very nice...lovely concept...loved the bonding of brothers-sisters...really nice...but ranbir character is really confusing...am just loving the ur story...keep up the good work till now i was just a mere silent reader of ur story...thanks for including me in ur pm list...from now on i will surely try to give my comments...update soon...love u and ur story...tc...with lots of love and hugs

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