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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved it so much...
the bonding between the 4 of them is really good...
poor abhi has to spend the day shopping...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey chinnu
Happy navratri
Update was superb one
Oh manik and abhi are friends from long time... Its unexpected one
That dialogue about pyaar... Its dharmiyaan's hai na I love that dialogue very much
Abhi's reactions was masst... Navti are tremendous... Abhi beta you are so gone tomorrow
Manik saved from holding shopping bags... All thanks to Bangalore trip
I missed cabini in this update
I think now its the time to show up hero of your story Mr.RANBIR...he's only new entry na in next update
Continue soon I'll be waiting
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...
the bonding between the 4 of them is really good...
poor abhi has to spend the day shopping...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

thnk u sooo mych fr ur lovely comments...
i just love them...
u hve been one of my fav readers of my story..
ur support nd best wishes hve been soo encouraging...
thnks once again..
loads of luv..
neeraja
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey chinnu
Happy navratri
Update was superb one
Oh manik and abhi are friends from long time... Its unexpected one
That dialogue about pyaar... Its dharmiyaan's hai na I love that dialogue very much
Abhi's reactions was masst... Navti are tremendous... Abhi beta you are so gone tomorrow
Manik saved from holding shopping bags... All thanks to Bangalore trip
I missed cabini in this update
I think now its the time to show up hero of your story Mr.RANBIR...he's only new entry na in next update
Continue soon I'll be waiting
Take care stay blessed


thnk u sooo much fr ur lovely nd loong comments...
i just love them...
u hve been one of my fav readers of my story..
ur support nd best wishes hve been soo encouraging...
nd yes its time fr Ranbir's entry... crct guess...
thnks once again..
keep smiling..
tak care...
loads of luv..
urs..chinnu...
nd han.. aap ko aur aapkae purae parivar ko Navratri ki hardhik subhkamnayaen :)
Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Hello frnds.. frst of all aapko aur aapkae parivar ko Navratri ki hardhik subhkamnayein...

A good & bad news to all the Manan fans is waiting at the end...

Happy reading..


Chapter 7A :


A fresh day a fresh start a new beginning...

Manik's flight landed in Banglore nd their companies driver was waiting for him at the entrance.

He asked the driver to give him the car keys nd leave... nd he drove off.. inhaling the fresh air...in no time he reached his destined hotel...checked into his lavish suite room nd as soon as the butler left keeping his luggage... he texted Navya regarding his landing & freshened up...changed himself into his track nd vest nd crashed onto his bed.. in no time he drifted into deep sleep...


Murthy's Mansion :

Nandini was getting ready for her collage... yes she was a MBA student very good in her academics indeed... getting prepared to enter into her family business to support her chacha-chachi nd brother...

"nandu... aur kitna time lagai gi yaar.. jaldi karna... tujhae collage mai chod kar mujhae ek important meeting kae liyae jana hai...plz make it fast..." yelled cabir frm downstairs who was waiting for his lovely sister to come down frm the past 20 minutes... pacing here nd there in their living area.. he once again glanced at the stairs getting no reply frm her...

he decided to go nd check on her...as to wht was taking her soo much time to come down

da moment he turned to climb up the steps she stepped out of her room wearing a simple black jeans nd a blue sleeveless kurthi...her hairs loosly left...flowing with the air...nd disturbing her face every now nd then...

"sorry.. sorry ...im late... vo kya hai na... mai almost ready ho gayi thi...phir Aalya bhabi ka phn aaya..aur mainae time hi nahi dekha..." she spoke cuming towards her brother..

"chal...im already running late..baaki ki baten raastae mae kar latae hai..." cabir said grabbing the car keys frm the table...nd both left the house...


"kya keh rahi thi Aalya...itni subah subah kyun call kiya usnae...?" asked Cabir driving towards nandu's collage

"they r cuming today evening it seems...Aalya babhi ka fashion show khatam hogaya hai... they have already started...they r cuming by road..."said Nandini munching on her sandwitch which was already packed nd kept in da car by her brother as he was well aware of her habit of skipping breakfast...




"ohh... bahut din ho gayae..un sae mil kar..last time jab vo log aaiyae thae mai Banglore mai nahi tha... so this time im nt gonna miss them... isi bahanae aaj sham ko party hojayae..? what say ?" cabir asked her...

"hmm...vaisae bhi not a bad idea... it has been a long time that v altogether went out..." she replied

" to phir...ab kya... ill wrap up my work soon... by the time they cum...ill b back home.. sab milkae chalangae.." said cabir nd both hi-fied..


In the meantime they were reached the collage...







Cabir's POV :

I saw that my stupid sister not eating her breakfast. She quietly hid the box in her bag but I saw it.. if she had her plans I too had mine

"nandu..ek bar apna back seat check kar.." I said stopping the car a bit far away from her collage

She turned around and immediately made a grumpy face

"bhai..not again.."she said

"tho phir why didn't u complete ur breakfast?"I was in no mood to leave her

"when did u see..anyways..im not gonna drink it.."she said pointing towards the tumbler which was filled with her not so favourite milkshake

"if u r not completing it im not gonna drop u in ur collage.." I replied sternly

"bhai .. please na..plz aaj nai.."she protested

"no excuses nandu..have it or else we r going back home.." I replied not looking at her..yes if I look at her she and her cute face will not make me talk strict which I had to regarding her health

"plzzz..."she was not going to loose so soon.. neither was i

"usmai..tumhara favourite banana milkshake with butterscotch ice-cream hai.."I spoke finally using my trump card

"sach mai ice-cream hai..?"she asked excitedly

"haan.."I lied..

"ok..then ill have it.." she immediately took it and drank it in one go.. I know what was coming in next few seconds and I was ready.. while she was drinking it I opened the dashboard and picked out some tissues as she had a very very bad habbit

"bhai..u lied iss mai ice-cream nai hai.."she spoke angrily after completing it.. using the tissues in my hand I cleaned her mouth which she will not.. she was just like a 4 yr old.. crying for ice-creams her tantrums everything.. no1 would believe that shez an MBA student.. but afterall she was my little sister..she had every right to show her tantraums.. and I quite love and encourage them..and my mom doesn't...

She was waiting for my reply while I was busy cleaning her face

"ill do it myself" she forcefully grabbed tissues from my hand and continued.. throwing angry glares on me..

"im waiting for ur answer" she asked finding me lost..

"vo I told Anjali aunty to put ice-cream..shayad bhul gayi.." I said covering...

(Anjali aunty..nandu's nanny...very close to nandu and even nandu likes her very much..they share a good bond.. just like a member in their family )

"aap jhut bol rahae ho..anjali aunty meri koi cheez nahi bhulthi.. I know her.." she replied frowning

"haan..i think I forgot to tell her"I gave the lamest excuse

"bhai..im getting late..aur agar aap bhul gayae..tho aapki bhi meeting hai.. we should go.." she said looking outside her window.. I know she was angry.. at times i too had to behave strict as she was least bothered about herself.. but how could i... there was no point in further argument so I drove to her collage.. she left and I was waiting for sum1.. and there they were..they were about to salute me when I showed them my finger not to.. yes they were her secrete bodyguards in her collage..i was not spying on her.. but I had to look after her security issues.. I couldn't take any risk regarding that.. she was totally unaware of their presence..i signalled them to move inside and I too sat in my car and drove towards my destination where I had my meeting.. I reached there and saw her message " ALL THE BEST" I smiled and moved inside...


In the evening :

Aalya nd Dhruv reached both were hell tired all thanks to their road journey...which made their body sore..

"im hell tired..bas ek hot shower nd ill drop on bed.." said Aalya walking towards chachi nd nandu who were waiting for them in the longue...

"mai bhi..: seconded Dhruv

"hai chachi...hi nandu.." both said weekly...

"hello.." replied chachi nd nandu


Aftr an hour... cabir came back home early as promised nd straight away went to nandu's room to check on her if she was getting ready fr the party or not...

"tu ready hai na..?" he asked not even completely entering the room... she was in her balcony sitting in her swing nd enjoying the already set sun

" kya hua..? bhool gayi kya...humae aaj raat ko bahar jana than na...?" he asked her finding her soo lost in enjoying the beauty of the nature...

" vo bhai..Aalya bhabi was were tired tho va soo rahi hai.. but I spoke to Dhruv bhai..hez cuming.. aap dono jao.. mai ghar par hi rehathi hun.. phir kabhi chalangae.. sab log saath mai.." she said

"lekin nandu plan sab logon ka ek saath janae ka than na..?" he askd worriedly as his sister was nt accompanying him

"bhai aap log jao..mera man nahi hai.. bahut ajeeb sa feeling aa raha hai.."she said

"kya hua ... sab theek hai na... maa nae kuch bola tujhae.. bol na baccha..kya hua ? y r u sounding so low..?" cabir got worried seeing her dull reaction as she always liked partying vit her bro...


"kuch bhi to nahi...im fine...bas aaj man nahi hai.." she replied..

"pakka na..?" he askd to confirm once again

"haan haan pakka...everything is fine..." she assured her worried brother


"theek hai..mai jaakar Dhruv sae mil laeta hun..." saying this he left her room towards dhruv's room...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 7B :

At the Club :

"yaar kitnae din huae naa aaisae hum dono ko saath bahar aaiyae huae..." spoke cabir sipping his drink

"haan yaar,... I miss those days..." replied Dhruv nd continued " suna hai ki Iyers ko bhi nandu nae bhaga diya.." dhruv said nd chuckled..

" haan...iss baar tho Nandu nae aaisi acting ki.. ki vo bechara dusarae hi din wapas US bhag gaya.." replied cabir nd explained everything to Dhruv...

He too burst out laughing after listening to wht nandu did...

"yaar lekin on a serious note..nandu kyun shaadi nahi karna chathi..does she...?" extended Dhruv..



"aaisa kuch nahi hai...Ranbir ka bhoot jo sawaar hai madam ji kae dimag mai... kehathi hai shaadi karaegi tho sirf Ranbir naam kae ladakae sae...aur sirf naam hi nahi dikhnae mai bhi usko Ranbir jaisa hi chaiyae.." cabir explained... "pehalae bolthi thee ki sirf Ranbir sae shaadi karaegi..bahut mananae kae baad mani hai.. aur sirf aur sirf ek condition par ki vo shaadi karaegi tho sirf Ranbir naam kae ek ladakae sae...v had no other choice sivai uskae condition ko mannae kae... lekin uski specifications kae barabar ka Ranbir dundhna marae bas ki baath nahi.." said Cabir shaking his head helplessly..

" baas itni si baat... yaar ismae kya hai..mil jayaega na.. ismae itni badi baath kya hae yaar...mil jayaega.." said dhruv nd placed his hand on cabirs shoulder as assurance

" I wish yaar..vo Ranbir jaldi mil jayae...har subah uskae high volume Ranbir kae ganon sae chutkara mil jayaega.." said cabir nd both started laughing...

Meanwhile there was loud noise from the dance floor side.. ppl were shouting nd hooting some one's name which drew their attention...

They turned around and saw wht was happening... a waiter was passing nearby.. nd cabir called him

"area akhil..yae sab kya hai... kiskae liyae yae log sab itna chilla rahae hai...kiski party hai bhai...?" asked cabir knowing the staff their very well being their regular customer..

"sir... vo aaj ek nayi entry hai yahan...aaj ka pura bill vohi pay karangae..." said akhil...

"kya...pura bill...?? Kaun hai vo aadmi... naam kya hai sahib ka..?" askd cabir

"sir koi..Ranbir Malhotra hai.. sunnae mai aaya hai ki Delhi sae hai..." said akhil nd left frm there

"RANBIR...!!!!" exclaimed both cabir nd dhruv in unision and exchanged looks...

They were now desperate to meet that person so moved towards the dance floor nd there he was dancing with the girls there on the dance floor. Spotlight was on him...

He was looking sinfully handsome charming nd every girl was ogling at him shamelessly... but he was just not paying any heed to them but was just dancing happily moving his body according to the music...

And he after sumtime he moved out of the dance floor and was moving towards the bar counter nd sat on the chair there... cabir nd dhruv moved towards them

"nice dance bro..."said cabir sitting beside Ranbir

"thanks bro.." exclaimed Ranbir

"so u r Ranbir Malhotra ??" asked cabir curiously

"umm ... yeah..."he replied

"where do u stay..?" enquired cabir to get his full details

"umm...I don't stay here... just here for some business.." he replied...

And their conversion carried on for a gud 30 minutes... by the closing 3 of them became good friends.. cabir pulled out the maximum information which he found necessary.. ;)


" I think I should leave now.. its getting late.." said Ranbir getting up..

" come we'll drop u..." offered cabir nd seconded dhruv "haan buddy chal na.. v ll drop u.."

" nahi nahi ... its ok I can go by myself..." replied Ranbir

"apni halath dekhi hai.. u r not even able to stand properly.. how will u go man.. chal now... we r frnds right.. let me tak the pleasure of dropping u.." said cabir nd winked at him..

R : "ssly..cabir u r so funny man.. thek hai chalo.. but wht abt my car..?"

D : " yahan chod dae.. ab v ll meet regularly .. aur yeh club hamara bahut purana adda hai.. v no most of the ppl here.. gimme ur keys.."

He called akhil nd gave him Ranbir's car keys.. nd the trio left...

They dropped Ranbir in his farmhouse nd cabir nd dhruv left for their house...


Uff..lamba update nai..karna tha.. to compensate for the week..

So frnds.. Ranbir aa gaya... cabir got all the details necessary... ab kya hoga...what will be nandu's reaction ? fasten ur seat belts.. roller coaster ride is about to begin...

Good news yae hai ki exactly after 7 chapters from here there will be only and only Manan.. yaar wait for 7 more chapters..i need to introduce some more key characters in the story who will be turning the pages upside down in a particular situation.. so the bad news is u have to wait more.. and good news is they will be soon together..till then enjoy Ranbirs presence.. I wish u like him also ;)

Chalo I spoke lots.. now its ur time..u can tak to me directly on Instagram..my ID is. : neeraja_penneru

Do let me know ur reviews by posting lambaaa lambaa comments...till then.

Take care ... keep smiling

Love u loads

Neeraja

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Superb update
So the new entry is ranbir
Loved it
Please do continue soon
And accept my buddy request


Love you
Ekta
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This Story lyn is realllyyy awesome ...but other stuff itna dalte ho ki...
Plzzz yar add some Manan plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved it so much...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

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