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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: angel2015

sorry for updating heading so late..extremely sorry..but please read ..sorry neeju..

kajal di... dnt say sry na...
i know..u r busy...
u write nd manage 4 ff's at a time.. whereas im nt even able to manage one...
plz.. fr god's sake dnt say sry na...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazing update
Kya pln tha iyer ko bhagaane ka...cabir shi khya hai nandu tum toh amazing writr ho...
Bechare iyer ki toh neend udd gyi hogi nandu tum chain se so jayo...
Plz jldi jldi manan meet krwayo...lovd it
Continue soon


thnks fr ur compliment😊...
but even im helpless...
main catch in da story lies in manan nd most interesting characters vil b of manik nd ranbir malhotra...
yaar..even i want manan but kya karu... story kae liyae unhae thodae time kae liyae door rakhna padaega...
i assure u dat wait vil definately b worthy...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6 :


" kya ..?? mainae kuch galat bola kya..??" asked Manki as soon as Abhi came to normal...

"tumhae kaisae pata humarae barae mai.. I mean marae aur Abhi kae barae mae..."asked a confused Mukthi...


"yaar...Manik kuch der aur ruk jata ... in donon kae faces dhekae...kaisae ho gaya the..." said Abhi laughing...nd Manik joined him...

Both the girls were totally confused

Manik nd Abhi hi-fied each other...

Now Navya got what was happening...

"to iss ka matlab...bhai aap ko sab kuch pata tha...?" asked Navya...

"of course..mujhae sab kuch pehalae sae hi pata tha..." said Manik nd continued "tum dono sae pehalae hi pata tha mujhae"

Now mukthi nd navya were confused as well as angry..

"yaar...manik... mujhae marvaiga aaj tu..."said Abhi sensing the girls anger which with each passing second was reaching its peak...

"can any1 plz tell me kya ho raha hai..?" asked Navya...

Now it was Maniks turn to speak...

"Navya tumhae yaad hai..hum Thakkar uncle kae success party mai gayae thae..?" for which she nodded a yes

"tab humarae saath Mukthi bhi aai thee...?"

Again both the girls nodded in agreement...

"tab us din tum dono ko party boring lag rahi thin d u both went away... then Abhi came...I knew him frm long back... so we both were talking some random things.. nd suddenly he asked me about Mukthi..i said u both are frnds... nd that very moment itself he told me about his feelings towards Mukthi... at frst I was so shocked..i asked him if he was sure... then his answer left mee speechless.. nd I helped him..."

"kya kaha usnae..?"asked Mukthi this time eagerly.. coz impressing Manik Malhotra was not soo easy task...

Abhi nd Manik looked at each other

"pyaar soch samajh kae nahi ki jaati..pyaar tho bas ho jata hai...kyu ki dil kae paas dimak nahi hota..aur jo dimak sae kiya jata..vo pyar nahi kehalatha.." finished Abhi... nly to find tears in Mukthis eyes... they were nt tears of sorrow but of joy..as she felt out of the world listening Abhi's words...

She immediately got up ng hugged Abhi tightly.. he too reciprocated the hug equally...


Manik cleared his throat to grab their attention nd he was successful in doing so.. they broke the hug and sat in their respective seats...

"par..tum hamarae clg mai..kaisae...?" asked Navya as she was totally confused with all this...

"haan...matlab...u joined in da middle of the year... vo bhi sirf marae liyae... but how was that possible...?" Mukthi asked equally confused

Manik nd Abhi looked at each other nd Manik smiled sheepishly.. nd replied

"nothing is impossible for Manik Malhotra.. if the case is the happiness of his sisters.. i spoke to ur principal.. he didn't join as a student.. but was just given permission to enter ur class" said Manik nd winked at them..

Both the girls opened their mouths in a perfect O...

Navya asked " so yae sab kuch pre planned tha..?" taking the butter knife in one nd fork in other hand...

So did Mukthi.. both the girls switched their angry modes on nw...they were pointing the knives nd forks in their hands towards the ppl sitting in front of them..

Manik nd Abhi gulped their saliva as they exactly knew wht these girls do whn they are angry..but now they were super angry knowing that so much planning took place behind their back...

Both da boys were looking at each other finding reasons to escape..but seeing their bellowed girls faces they had no other choice other than facing their scoldings... ;)

"I think I asked u sumthng" said Navya.. seeing their look-look talks...

"Navya let me explain.." started Abhi as all this was bcoz of him nd Manik just helped him..nd was not at fault...

"I guess ur explaination is worth listening..warna u know the consequences I guess .." spoke Mukthi...

"aa..vo..vo..actually..mainae hi Manik ko mana kiya tha tum logon ko batanae sae...iss mai uski koi galthi nahi hai.. job hi kiya sirf mainae kiya... I didn't want to come close to u as a business associate..but as a friend...dats y I vit the help of Manik joined ur collage...nd tried to convience Mukthi in my style...nd c my plan worked nd now v r together..dats all wht matters... ab kyun purani baate chedae..bolo...? now everything is sorted na...ab chod bhi do yae gussa sab kuch...im feeling dam hungry...pehlae mai kuch order kartha hun..varna bhuk kae marae mar jagunga.."said Abhi to lighten da atmosphere but little did he know dat he added fuel to the already ignited fire..

Mukthi stomped Abhi's foot under the table nd

"ouch..!! mukthi ...wht da hell was dat yaar..." winced Abhi


"exactly..Mr.Abhimanyu..wht da hell was dat... meri aur Navya tension kae maare saas ruk gayi thi... tum dono ko andaza bhi nahi hai..wht we went through to tell bhai about us..aur tumae to koi farak hi nahi padatha... bhuk lag rahi hai jhanab ko...lke ssly...both of u.. aur bhai aap bhi..iss duffer kae saath milae huae thae...??" mukthi said


"area agar tumhari doost tumhae help kar sakthi hai.. to mai apnae doost ka saath kyu na doon..?" said manik nd hi-fied with abhi...

"ok...so ur frnd helped u..nd I helped mine.. count is balanced... now lets chuck all this...nd celebrate on ur official announcement of ur relationship.." continued Manik..

Both girls made a poker face.. having no other choice Manik nd Abhi held their ears nd said "sorryyy" together.. girls laughed but immediately hid their smiles nd an evil thought came into their mind immediately..

"theek hai..but only on one condition.." said Navya and Manik readily gave in and Abhi was hell worried as he was sure they are surely upto sumthng highly mischievous so he was waiting fr their conditions list..

" kal hum log sab milkae shopping kae liyae jayangae..", they said in unision and Abhis face turned pale.. he was very much aware of Mukthi nd Navya's punishment shopping as Manik told him about it once...

"nahi...!!" Abhi almost yelled...

"haan..." came reply frm them

"mai tho Banglore jaa raha hun... tum log aapas mai iss mamlae ko sambhal lo... iss baar kae liyae mujhae bhaksh do..." came Manik's reply...

"as only Abhi was responsible fr everything...he vil alone bear the punishment...aap rehnae do bhai..." said Mukthi trying her best not to laugh seeing Abhi's face...

Manik sighed in relief that he sum how escaped...

" so Mr.Abhimanyu Thakkar... be ready by 9... at my place... v will go together" declared Navya..

Having no scope of argument after a glare frm Mukthi nd declaration by navya..Abhi remained silent helplessly..

Meanwhile the waiter came with the ordered food nd Abhi asked to bring him fried rice as he was in no mood of eating thinking about tomorrow...

They finished off their dinner nd moved to their respective houses..manik nd navya decided to go together as Mukthi demanded Abhi to drop her back...

As soon as manik nd navya reached home

"mai kal subah ki flight sae jaa raha hun.. ill b back in a week... ill ask mukthi to shift here to accompany u in my absence..is that ok with u..?" manik asked navya...

Hearing that her brother is going to leave tmro mrng navya's face fell... she just simply nodded nd went to her room...

It was their routine... whenever manik had to leave delhi this was navya's reaction...

Manik was helpless...he had his responsibilities too which he couldn't ignore...


Next morning

As he had a early morning flight manik got ready nd left for airport...

"banglore...im cuming...!!"


Phew...!! Suspence revealed...hehe manik knew it frm frst itself... so hw was the update do let me know frm ur precious comments... suggessions nd criticism is welcomed...

So manik banglore aa raha hai... so ppl ny guesses wht next...

NOTE : i know many of u r waiting fr manan.. but main point nd twist in da story lies in them .. i mean manan itself... agar itni jaldi sab khatam ho jayae. tho maza kya hoga.. even i want manan but kya karu.. story kae liyae thodae din un dono ko thoda doorcrakhna padaega..

PRECAP :

The most awaited entry...keep guessing... ;)

keep smiling...
tak care...
Luv u a loads...

Neeraja

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Only Other Stuffs nothing elsss No Manan...plzzz add Manan plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
It was awesome
Waiting for the next
Please pm me if possible

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Amazing update
Hahahaha manik ko phle sehinpta tha aur wo abhi ki hlp bhi kr rha tha love birds ko milane mein...
Kya punishmnt di hai abhi ko shoppng...uske drr se dinnr bhi theek se nhi kiya...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: A12609z

Only Other Stuffs nothing elsss No Manan...plzzz add Manan plzzz


yaak kya bataun tumhae... agar manan milae tho story vil end...
plzzz plzzz...hve sum patience...
there are lots of more interesting characters coming...
im nt a villan to keep them apart yaar...
its just dat..story hi kuch aaisa hai...
nyways thnks fr xpressing ur views regarding my ss...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: paarsaa

tell me one thing Jo tumne ek is update kiya that khwahishen inaayetein k swath wala ur story khwahishen uska continuing part hain kya?

hii...
im neeraja..nd da writers of khwaishen nd inaayetein ki writer mai nahi its kajsl di... shez posting this story on my request...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: manan_eku

It was awesome

Waiting for the next
Please pm me if possible

Love you
Ekta

thnks fr ur rply Ekta...
ill definately try to pm u nxt time..
coz i dnt no hw to send but ill definately figure it out nd send u. ..
thnks fr xpressing ur views once again...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazing update
Hahahaha manik ko phle sehinpta tha aur wo abhi ki hlp bhi kr rha tha love birds ko milane mein...
Kya punishmnt di hai abhi ko shoppng...uske drr se dinnr bhi theek se nhi kiya...lovd it
Continue soon

thnks fr ur lovely reply regarding my story...
really it means a lot... thnkbu sooo much fr encouraging me fr moving further confidently..thnkx.

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