MaNan SS//Lips Do Lie//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150

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CutiePie_Me

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Posted: 9 years ago

#691

I liked the update very much.. Nd banner is also gud

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aadhya_cute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#692

update is awesome

actually u r awesome

even if we donot understand the charecter nd background of manik we will stick to ur story

u make us stick to ur story by ur skills...👏👏👏 gr8 job

after impulsive u started 2more ff's both r faad...keep writing nd entertain us

i love reading ur stories

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APS_AURA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#693

Hey !!! Hw cn u call such an amazing,super awsum chapter as crap.. & if its crap,dn u knw wat,u shud write more of such crap.. cuz we totally loved it !!! Manik jst cant resist her !! D sudden kiss proved it ! & Nandu surely knws hw to play d game..& make Manik jealous..haha..Im jst loving dis Nandu & d jealous Manik is my fav.. Jst Loved every bit of d chapter !! & I undrstnd hw difficlt it mst b 4 u to manage 2 FFs at d same time..Bt ur doing a splendid job at it !! Ur doing complete justice to both stories !! Keep up d gud work !! :) & dnt let dat Battisi fade away ;) Stay Blessed !! #OkThanksBye ! ;)

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sanikagokhale

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Posted: 9 years ago

#694

Too good!!!

Maza aa gaya padke!!

I love the way you write!!

Awesome!!😃

Continue soon..

Take care😃

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Ishika Gaba

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Posted: 9 years ago

#695

Hey.. Maine aaj hi yeh ss padna start kiya.. And maine decide kiya tha ki main ssirf ek chapter padongi.. But it's so interesting that i couldn't controlled myself.. Just loved it.. It was mind blowing.. Awesome.. ⭐️

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simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#696

awsm update...actually read both the updates togthr so thy wre amazing...i guess manik is nt a criminal ...amazing updates...manik is jealous thats y he ws angry... n ovio they kissed again awww it ws awsm...nw waiting to see wats gonna happen nw... bye update soonnn ... tc

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Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#697

Manik's wonderful trait's! 'Impulsive' 'Punching The Wall' 'Possessive'! Manik & Nandini sharing a kiss yet again! Nandini not understanding his behaviour & to teach him a lesson started flirting with Dhruv & being extra sweet to him. Manik's character is so mysterious! I want to know why!!!
Update soon!

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priyanair04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#698

Its not at all crap yaar...ur story is really awesome and tis part was too...it was cool to c possessive and jealous manik and of course monster mmanik. nandu felt so bad...monster kaisa behaviour hai it was too much...but nandu was also awesome...anyways waiting for next chap...but I wanted to know which is ur another ff ...pls if u cld reply I want to know ..do u write another ff other than tis...I mean impulsive I have read but dnt know another than tis...

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simranstar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#699

I just completed reading all the four chapter and the only word that escaped from my mouth was amazing...

this was awesome.

In the impulsives we were dying to know about manan's past.

In the ex's at war we are dying to know why these two got separated...

And now in lips do lie this mysterious manik is killing us.

Toh matlab hame suspense se marne ka irrada bana liya hai di apne i hope i can call you that.

This story is mind blowing...

But for one thin i am very upset with you aap khudpe itna doubt kyun karte ho??

areee you are an inborn writer.

take your time. Do not stress. We can wait but a little.

He he he ...:-)

Well all the chapters were amazin... :-) :-)

Update sooon

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sujal1fan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: simranstar
I just completed reading all the four chapter and the only word that escaped from my mouth was amazing...
this was awesome.
In the impulsives we were dying to know about manan's past.
In the ex's at war we are dying to know why these two got separated...
And now in lips do lie this mysterious manik is killing us.
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Toh matlab hame suspense se marne ka irrada bana liya hai di apne i hope i can call you that.
This story is mind blowing...
But for one thin i am very upset with you aap khudpe itna doubt kyun karte ho??
areee you are an inborn writer.
take your time. Do not stress. We can wait but a little.
He he he ...:-)
Well all the chapters were amazin... :-) :-)
Update sooon