MaNan SS//Lips Do Lie//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150 - Page 71

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi just completed all four chapters and ur an awesome writer seriously first chapter and a kiss and manik CRIMINAL and mukti supposed to be his wife 😲 what is this going on itna suspence it kills yaar
And what abt the chip they r talking in 4 chapter and cant stand on dhruv getting friendly wid nandu
Hatsoff to u for such a beautiful work of lips and ex's 👏👏👏
Update soon...waiting to know what he's goin to do now
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update dea...
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh ghosh! Thankyou soo much for continuing
i was so happpyy to know that you continued😊
Coming to the last two updates as always it was amazingg
their handhsake😆
nandini calling manik criminal was expected but manik behaving so so weird after that was so unexpected
nd den she again got stuck with manik
nd when manik wasnt able to control i was like yayyie😳😆
nd den again he was so rude
nd i really was very happy when nandu reacted that way nd went close to dhruv
she had to show him😆
i loved ittt :*

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Posted: 9 years ago
😃Oh wo to app karoge hi after alL you are so damn talented...
Waise continue soon...
Your story is making me restless day by day... and yes congratulations. Ur ff completed 100 pages...
Bt avi toh or v centuries lagane hai naye naye threads par.
😃😃
Keep writing.. ..
lots and lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
Girl this ff is awesome i just love ur work even if you write shit i wil love it so never think of stopping your ff coz I always wait for u to update ur ff's ohk I agree m lazy at commenting but this doesn't mean I don't love ur work I do so plz continue writing lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
And nandini went to manik's room to get her bag
And then she was checking his phone but password was there and then she was gonna check his wallet and then manan kiss again
And then how could manik throw her bag
And then nandini got angry and then she started talking to dhruv
And then manik is always possessive about nandini
Superb update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

PROMO



"Amm Navya I think I left my bag at the shop...you go ahead I will just get it and come"

"Okay", Navya proceeded happily; she couldn't waste a single moment to be around Harshad.

I trailed back to the accessory shop that I had shopped for earrings, bangles and beaded necklaces. I inquired with the shop keeper but he declined that there was no bag there. I got tensed, I was sure I had left it there but where could it vanish in a few minutes. Although there was not much stuff in it except for my handy make up items, some tissues and a little money, nothing that would make my survival impossible yet I felt sad of losing it.

I stepped out disheartened and walked past the shacks to join my team. Suddenly the bag appeared in front of my eyes and somehow it shocked me to see it appear out of the dark.

"Don't worry I have checked your plum rose is intact...I need it more than you na", Manik whispered in a low teasing tone.

I looked at him with flustered eyes and tried to snatch the bag from his hands but he dodged it every time I tried to catch it. I was in no mood to play silly games with him at that hour in the evening so just gave up and moved ahead. Manik grabbed me from behind by my tummy and pulled me in his warm embrace. I just stood in his protective grip without protesting. I was too annoyed to react.

"Gussa ho??", he said in an innocently soft tone and lightly placed the strap of the bag over my shoulders.

I dug my nails on his hand placed rightfully on my tummy to answer his question. He did not remove his hand rather pressed it harder into my flesh. He rested his chin on my shoulder and whispered into my ears.

"Look what I have got for you", he opened his closed fist in front of me to show a pair of earrings. They were beautiful in fact exotic when the neatly carved stones twinkled under the moon light.

"I don't want them", I said uninterestedly without trying to free myself from his grip.

I could hear him giggle lightly to see me behave this adamant. He slowly raised his hand and removed the earring that I was wearing and carefully slid the one he had got in its place and kissed my earlobe softly. I flinched again to his kiss and it immediately reminded me of his behavior earlier in the day just after we had shared that passionate soulful kiss. I knew he will again be rude to me after this and I could not insult myself anymore. I reacted the very moment, I used one of my hands to remove his grip on me and the other one to take his earring off.

"I will never ever wear them", I threw the earning at him and ran out of there.


Bata dena agar acha laga toh😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
yar super just waiting how their love story takes twits and turns plz try to give some scenes ly this lovig it

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the way you write...dear...i always be your fan of writing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
MAnik & his changing behaviour exciting me..!!
Poor nandu ek tym pr kiss & then insult...how rude of him...:/
Phr b waiting...cox i trust ur writings...!!
& & & jealous manik always treat to read...:p
Promo was good...:)
Keep it up...!!

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