Manan ff LOVE BRINGS HATRED ALONG(LINK TO THREAD 2/PG1) - Page 81

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome chapppyy manik baba cant underestimate his frnds also they love him equally and yash he has done so much for nandu being selfless respect for him moreover he protected all of themm second part of plan kya hai manik kr puchte hi sabke bolti band ho gayii fab 5 abhi and navya's moment was blissful avya's lines for manil were wonderfull nandu kahi peeche khade hoke toh nhi sun rahi haiii well u alwayd shock me soo cant predit update soon take care thanks for p,
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for pm.dear

Wow good nyo get what she deserves. ..

Manik was angry about the things that his friends did. ..

Because he cares so much. ..

Awesome friendship. ..

Thanks for sharing this part..

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm
It was awesome
Finally maniks friends fid something for his happiness
Hopefully nyo is gone forever
N Nandu hopefully can sing soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb finally nyonkia is convicted...n wats d next plan
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART - 41 A HAPPY DAY...!!

Hello readers...!! Here I am with another update...!!A BIG THANK TO THE COMMENTERS...!!

HAPPY READING...!!
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After good...5 mins... while still in the group hug... manik asked...

Manik: vese... what's the second part of your plan haan...??

With this all of them broke the hug all of sudden... and looked here and there...!!

Manik: I am waiting...!!

Dhruv: fine... it's shifting back to Mumbai...!! (Dhruv blurted the plan...)

Manik: what do u mean shifting back to Mumbai...!! Do u even know what u are talking... u have seen her naa...!! She won't agree ... she is still running away from past...!!

Mukti: and did u even realise... what are we doing...?? We are helping her in running away... by keeping her here...!!

Alya: manik...!! I also know at some point of time she has to... we have to and even u have to go back... back to where we actually belong...!! Don't u feel that emptiness in ur life...?? Mumbai... the place where we met... the place which gave our precious friendship a new meaning... which gave our music a platform... the place where u met ur nandini...!! Mumbai has seen all are good and bad times...!!

Abhi: Manik... I know... u have always missed that place... ur city... being in pune... then why not...?? And about nandini she will also agree... once... she will be cured she will definitely agree...!!

Manik: but Nyonika is still there... and it's not safe... for u all... !!

Cabir: aree... toh when did we say... ki hum kal hi Mumbai jaa rae hai... it's just... we have planned for it...!! Let nandini get well first... then we will ask her...!! But till then... we can make her realise that she too misses her country... her city... her house...!!

They convinced manik... and he agreed...!!

Manik: Fine... I agree with u guys...!! But only if nandini wants to... and will willing come to Mumbai... we won't force her...!!

All of them nodded... and then manik continued...

Manik: But guys... this is not done... u all did everything alone... u did not tell me anything...!! U all took all the risks alone...!!

Dhruv: Buddy...!! So... u want to say u wanted to do something... (Manik nodded) ok... so there is one thing... which u can do... or to be more accurate... only u can do...!!

Manik: kya...??

Dhruv: talk to nandini... tell her everything about yash uncle...!! Like y he went... what he did for her... for all of us...!!

( Manik looked at him... as he said this... as he thought how would nandini take all this...!!)

Dhruv: Buddy... I know tu kya soch raha hai... par.. I know... if u will talk to her naa... then she will surely understand... because... one thing we all have understood... whatever she says... or does... but at the end... she always... listens to u...!! She will definitely take everything positively... if u will make her understand...!!

Cabir: even if u wouldn't have heard us today accidently... then also... we would have told u... about this...!! It's just u heard it all suddenly... so we got a little scared... knowing ur temper...!! Bas the thing is We had planned to tell u a little later... and then also we would have told u only to talk to her... because we knew only u can talk to nandini over this...!!

Dhruv: Manik... think about... yash uncle... he did so much for all of us...!! Atleast we can do this much for him... we can give him... his daughter back...!! Imagine... how hurt he will be seeing that now nandini hates him...!! I have seen the hurt the sadness in his eyes... when he got to know that nandini doesn't even talk about him..!! He will be back in two three weeks...!! After wrapping up everything there... so... we can atleast give him this as a surprise... for doing so much for all of us...!!

( Listening dhruv... even manik was convinced... as he really wanted to repay... yash... for doing so much for him... when they didn't even knew each other...!! )

Manik: I will talk to nandini...!!
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IN NANDINI'S ROOM-

Though alya and Mukti made her sleep... but she didn't sleep... as she was not able to sleep...!! She remembered... the doctor's words... that she won't be able to sing...!! She was feeling as if again she was loosing...!!

So she picked up her fireflies... and was watching them her mind was full of only one question... what if she won't be able to sing ever...?? But then she saw the fireflies glowing... brightly... since her room was black still the glow of fireflies was looking more bright...!! As they glowed... nandini just remembered manik's words... how he said that she will sing... she deserves happiness...!!

(Seeing the glowing fireflies she remembered manik... that was itself a big thing... and on top of that she remembered him in a postie way... was another big achievement...!! But she still did not have full trust in him... so was little scared...)

Nandini then closed her eyes... hugging the fireflies... and she remembered the time when her amms taught her Veena... and singing...!! She so missed her... she didn't knew why she was missing her all of a sudden... may be this was the same situation as at the time after her parents death...!! How amms took care of her... brought her close to music...!! Whenever music was concerned nandini always missed amms...!!

She just moved out of her bed... and kept the jar back on the side table... she moved downstairs...

In the living room-

She came and stood in front of her family picture...!! She was missing them...!! Thinking if they would have been there ... she would have someone... to support her... to guide her...!! Though her friends were there but she missed an elderly hand... on her head...!! In these two years she never missed anyone because... she was never in her senses...!! To think about anything...!! But now the things have changed... now she needed that one hand... to which she can hold on... and move ahead... just as a child takes the first steps... with the help of his father...!! But alas...!! She didn't had anyone... now... all of them left her...!! And the other ones...( her Chacha and chachi ) she herself left them...!!

She was in her thoughts... when everyone entered the living room...!! And with the noise... she came out of her trance and looked back at them...!! They were looking happy...!!

All of them saw her... and doubted if she heard anything...!! But then seeing her calm they were sure she didn't heard anything...!!

Mukti: nandini...u were sleeping naa...??

Nandini: nai wo.. I wasn't sleepy so came here... ese hi...!!

Manik noticed her moist eyes... and then noticed that she was standing near her family photograph... he understood she might be missing her family...!! Then an idea popped in his mind... and he thought he would discuss it later with all of them...!!

At 1 pm

All were really happy today... as there were two two good news... one Nyonika's destruction and the other nandini's chance of singing... they were just talking casually... but manik noticed nandini was still sad... so he thought he would work on his idea later... right now he needs to cheer her up... so he msged abhi... something... and abhi smiled...

Abhi: Guys... it's a happy day... let's celebrate...

Navya: aree... humne... meetha banaya toh...!!

Cabir: haan... toh meetha banana celebration nai hota hai...!! Mai kya kehta hu... let's go out somewhere...!! Bohot time ho gaya hai we went out like this... all together...!!

Mukti: haan... actually nice idea...!!

All of them agreed... and then looked agreed nandini... with the hope that she will agree... as she has never went out like this... for celebrating and all...!! And then as expected she first said no... but them they pleaded her... so she also agreed... and abhi showed thumbs up to manik...!! To which he smiled...

So they decided to go for a lunch...!! Girls took nandini to get her ready... as she will be going like this for the first time... like.. to a restaurant...!!

Then the girls took their own time to get Ready...!!

At 3 pm-

Finally girls were ready...!! As they came... manik was mismerised... seeing nandini...!!

She was wearing simple jeans and top... with a stylish cardigan over it... giving it a stylish look...

Manik came out of his trance... when cabir clicked his fingers in front of his eyes... and saw others giggling at him...!! So he to avoid this situation... moved out... and then was followed by others...!!

At Restaurant -

They enjoyed their lunch...with lots of teasing to manik... cabir and Mukti's fight... their masti... all this while nandini smiled... and sometimes giggled seeing this... and manik became happy... seeing that she is distracted now form her family...!!

The lunch went well...!! Then they moved out the restaurant... and suddenly navya said...

Navya: nandu... tumne kabhi... hamara ghar toh dekha hi nai...!!

And all of them realised the same thing...!! Then cabir said...

Cabir: waha madhubala...!!! Maan naa padhega... kabhi kabhi... tum bhi apna brain chala hi leti ho...!! So nandini would u like to see our house... ??

Nandini nodded... simply... and they turned to go to the Angel's villa...!!

AT ANGEL'S VILLA -

Nandini was mismerised seeing the outers... as it was big... and lavish...!! They moved inside... and showed her around...!! The day passed in showing her around the villa...!!

And then they insisted her to stay here only... to which she agreed... because she didn't wanted to break their heart... as the day was a happy one... so she didn't wanted to spoil it with her no...!!

They all talked till... 11 pm... discussed nandini's exercises... the new schedule... diet charts... and then they did some masti...!!

They all went to their rooms... even nandini went her own room... as they had one for her...!!
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Precap- Nandini to sneak out of her room... Manik and nandini's conversation over past...!!!

Phewww... I only know how I finished this part...!! I thought of giving manik nandini conversation in this part only but... it became long already... so will give in the other one...!! NEXT PART WILL BE FULL MANAN PART... AND WILL BE UPDATED TOMORROW ITSELF...!! SO COMMENT JALDI JALDI...!!

And let me know do u want them to go back to Mumbai... or not...?? How will nandini react when she will know the truth...?? What idea did manik got..?? HAPPINESS ON ITS WAY BACK TO THEM..!!



AMAAYA...!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Res

Unressing...

Yippe!! I am first...

"Wow!! Awesum update dear...''
Lvd it 2 core. U penned it well.
Update was really marvellous.'

Sach mein aftr readin d update i was also so hpy...a hpy day cme 2 all them's lyf aftr years of sadness n pain..dey really deserve it..

Second prt of plan in mumbai...
Dat ws fabulous yaar.. Bt manik s still nt sure 4 nandu... He alwys cares 4 her...
Lvd d way all others make manik understnd d need of gng bck 2 mumbai..it ws fabulous...

Nandu pov was so emotional..
She s missin her music..her family..very badly..poor grl..she suffered a lot..her pain was seen by manik...nandu's scenes vid fireflies ws so spectacular..''
Nandu finally started 2 blivin in herself... Suprbly penned yaar..

All r njyin their hapiness..manik wanna distract nandu frm her painful memories... Evryone gng out 2 celebrate their happiness...
Really awesum idea..finally nandu involvd in dat..manik finally succeeded in his mission...
She s walkin 2wrds happiness. nandu gng 2 d house...dat was suprb...really nice update dear...lvd it so much...

Precap s vry much interesting.. Waitin eagerly 4 dat ..full of manan n manan talks...dat will b vry nice..
Do continue dear...waitin 4 nxt update...

Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unressed above dear..
Title change krdo yaar ..
Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago



Thanks for pm.dear

This is awesome update. ..

All are happy. ..

Nandni seems giving her self a good time. ..

Things are getting better. ..

Looking forward to seeing their past convo...

Thanks for sharing this happy part...

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.



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Posted: 9 years ago
Full on positive update!
Loved it a lot! !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. good to see nandu happy.
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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