Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Nice update
This soha fr being popular she want to be maniks gf so disgusting
Manik said nano is just a frnd and she is too simple to be hus gf he is nt gonna repeat it defanetly not
Cabir is right he wil cum back to nano
Watng fr seeng her in new avtar nd reaction of manik on that it will be fun...
Her frnds r sooo understanding she is so lucky to hav thm in her life
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
NANO'S MAKEOVER..
chalo let's see what makeover she will have..

But if manik will fall in love with her after her makeover then I would not like manik at that time cause it's just not right..

loving someone only on the basis of looks is wrong.. after all outer beauty fades away but inner beauty is alway there
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
awesome update...
loved the deep connection all the friends have with each other...
soha is just acting like a selfish person who only cares about her image...
hope manik realises it soon...
i want manik to fall on his knees and apologise to nandu for his mistakes...
hope her make over goes well...
keep up the good work...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Okk.. it was okk


but waiting eagerly for nandini's makeover plzzz...
update soon plzz...

really plzzz...
plzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
jst came across u sory jst love there together
want too see manik reaction on nandu make over
soha was too cheap tht she was dng fr selffish ness
continue soon
stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Ur story is just great. How can manik call nandu a behenji. He is sure gonna regret it.
But i feel u should hv done nandu's makeover for the FRESHERS PARTY. Den she would have had a grand entry with all men ogling at her and soha being sidelined nd manik being dumbstruck. Nd y not get someone for nandini at the party like Aryamann and Madhyam which would provoke some feelings in manik.
Ur narration is really good. Love fab4, abhi nd navni's bonding. They are what is called true friends. Together in good nd bad times. Would love to read more of this ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
CHAPTER 9

muk:so nano ke makeover ke baare mein kya decide kiya
Al:kar toh liya but we will need two boys
Nav:boys kyu?
Mu:tumhe nai pata
Nav:ok then i will go and with dhruv will keep an eye on soha,meanwhile main bir aur abhi ko bhek deti hoo
Al:yeah cool
COLLEGE
abhi:yaar bir tujhe nai lagta ki nano ka makeover karne se manik will start falling for her beauty instead of her qualities
C:abhi maine yeh sab isiliye nai kiya taki manik nano se attract balki isiliye coz manik needs to know how wrong was he,plus abhi nano ko soha se complexes thhey,aur complexes ek din mein nai jaate,iss sab nano will get a new confidence aur manik ko jeetne ke liye she needs to fight soha aur tabhi possivle hai jab woh apne aap ko uske equal samjhe aur rite nkw nano ki sabsi badi prbln hai uske luks
d: baat toh sahi,hope manik ko realize ho jaye
Abhi:aur time pe ho coz uss realization ka kya faida jo time rehte na ho
Just then cabirs phone rings
C:mukti??haan mukti bol
Mu:listen navya wahan arri hai aur u and abhi come over for shopping
C:shopping and us,y??
Muk:dont u know nano,uska makeover horra hai,nano ka makeover
C:got it,will be there in five,parr ho kahan
Mu:college ke back gate pe
C:ok,chal abhi shopping ke liye jana hai
Abhi:kyu??
C:bhul gaya kya nano ka makeover hai
D:all the best
Abhi:thanx we really need it

MALL

Al:chalein??
N:ok

They move towards a shop and then nano freezes at her place
Tum ho kamaal Tum bemisaal Tum lajawab ho aisha Aisi haseen ho Jis ko choo lo usko haseen kar do Tum sochti ho duniya me Koi bhi kyu kharaab ho aisha
Tum chahati ho Tum koi rang har zindagi me bhar do Bhar do Nikli ho likhne kismat kisiki Apni hi dhun me tum aisha Yeh shauk kya hai Yeh zid hai kaisi Itna bata do humko(It was a stop for haircut and all,and nano loves her long hair,she runs away from there,alya and muk signals the boya and they pick nano by her shoulders and forcingly brings her inside,they cut her hair in steps till her back while nano emotionally luks at her already cut hair)

Suljaane me tum aur bhi uljane Hoti ho jo ghum aisha Apni bhi koi uljan ko door Kar ke dikha do humko Suno aisha Itna to tum bhi samjho Aisha Tum chahe jitna chaho Aisha Tum jitni koshish karo lo Aisha Tum sa na hoga koi
(They then head towards the footware section where they select many high heel sandals and flat sandals for nandu while she tries one heel sandal and falls down,leaving bir and abhi to hold their heads,then comes the accesories where she finds a minion necklace and alya and mukti give her a stern luk)

Baaton me ho aa jaati Ho jaati ho jazbaati Soche samjhe bin ke mohabbat Ki hai rah kya Pal me ho ke diwaani Karti ho tum manmaani Tumko hai duniya vuniya ki Koi parwaah kya Aisha jise kehte hain Ek hain wo lakho me Dil me jaake rukti hain wo Aati hai jo ankhho me Magar aisha Itna to tum bhi samjho Aisha Tum chahe jitna chaho Aisha Tum jitni koshish karlo Aisha Tum sa na hoga koi
(She instantly leaves it and then again picks it up and triea to run away when bir and abhi get hold of her and she makes a grumpy face,they then head towards the cloths section,wgen nandu view how short the cloths r she nods her haed in a no but when alya and mukti do not budge she sits on the ground not caring about the ppl who were staring while bir and abhi actually drag her into the showroom,there mukti and alya checkout many oufits and then finalizing a specific style turna nano around and slaps her butt)

(Suno aisha Itna to tum bhi samjho Aisha Tum chahe jitna chaho Aisha Tum jitni koshish karo lo Aisha Tum sa na hoga koi) - (2)(then alya and mukti put on their gogles,move out of the mall with nandu who had a angry pout on her face and bir and abhi high fiving each other,and then off they)
NANO,MUKTI,ALYA,NAVYAS APARTMENT
N:m not gonna wear this at all,said nano picking up a shorts with her index finger and thumb,which was not at all visible
Nav:shut up ur wearing it
N:but main yeh kaise pehan sakti hoon,isme toh kuchh hai hi nai,said nano innocently
C:come on nano,its ok
Mu:yeah,aur chhote kapre pehna galat nai hota
D:waise nano r u sure soha and u r sisters,i mwan r u really related by blidd
N:of course y
D:nai coz ek woh hai jo college ek rumal bandh kar aati hai aur ek tum ho jo puri razai aud kar aati ho
Everyone laughed on his comment
N:haha,very funny
C:ok chill,dont worry,everything is gonna be fine,aur sharmana mat,tim ueh sab manik ke liye nai apne liye karri ho,to show him ki tum bhi kisi se kam nai,ok
N:yeah
Al:ok guys now leave,nano needs to sleep,kal big day haina,i just cant wait to see maniks face
Mu:and yeah ham kal seedhe j room mein milenge,u guys be with him,kal toh maze aayenge
Abhi:yup,ok now bye
And all the boys left
Edited by deepanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Wow nano ka makeover done!!
Update asap...wanna kno manik ka reaction...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Shopping part was awesome...
Loved it...plz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Nice update
The shopng part ws so nice u dint make her tooo short na
Abhi nd cabir helped thm mostly in shopping by kepng her ther itself by nt letng her go
Big day watng fr it nd exited tooo
Update sooonnn

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