Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

nyc update

romatic update

jst loved it

wht a timing of cabir wth knwg r unknw he will be cmg in perfcet time of manan romance

jst hope nw manik shd realise his feelings

continue soon

stay blessed

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mahhi_jain

@mahhi_jain

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Hahahahahah...manik!

That was too good!.

Hey chillax u really good at writing

All this stuff..im impressed.. Even u can work on a little

By reading our romantic literature

Anyways it was awesome

Really liked it

Plzzz next part soon

Ur writing is very good..

Feel like reading it all day

Anyways all the best

Next part soon plzz

Waiting like mad

Plzzz

Soon

Plzz

Soon

Thank u

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Trisha

@BarbieNiti

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

wowww
awsome update
sooo romantic
waiting for the next part
continue soonnn
thnx for d PM

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deekshagarg

@deekshagarg

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Ooommmggg.. what a part it was.. and u say u don't know how to write this stuff.. u were amazing girl.. ufff I'm still captivated by the part..

Manik to soha ko bhool hi gaya.. and I like it..

The most hilarious part was when they were about to kiss and suddenly

Ba ba ba ba ba banana.. hahaha

I just loved today's update please keep giving update like these with romantic scenes..

P.S- I'm somewhere missing the initial days of this ff where it was very hilarious can u add some funny scenes too.. (special request.. a prank on soha) plz plz complete this request of mine..

Will be waiting for next part

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Danny92

@Danny92

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Nice update

U hav written it very well

Manik is nt able to control himself nd he was kissing her oh God that something he has lost himself nd makng her weak by his proximity

Cabirs timing is always perfect at wat a moment he called nandini he is so dead

Manik is so angry on cabir fr nt letng him do wat he want he wana kill cabir fr that

Nandini is nt gng fr party no yar she shud go naa its her success she shud be happy and enjoy

Manik is blushing aww

Continue soonnn

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Baby I'm so gonna finish you
Urghh 😡 😡 you screwed up all my crush on minions and of course ba ba na na
You know after this miss kiss of Manan I'm just hating my ever favorite character all credit goes to you
What effect they had on us yaar... I really realized it today... They are our inseparable parts

And coming to the part I loved nandu's happy time it remind me of ep 63and again romance in changing room
Aww so cute blushing nandu and blushing manik thinking about their miss kiss
Cabir you gonna definitely killed one day my manik...whatta perfect timing Che Che Che paap lagega for disturbing succha moment
Chalo waiting for next update
Take care stay blessed

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rimsha01

@rimsha01

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Omg!! Manan Romantic Moment!!

Finally!

They could have kissed if her minions wouldnt hv disturbed them.

But it was damn beautiful.

I would have loved it more if it would have been a third person's pov totally or just nandini's or manik's. Coz revisiting same event in nandini's pov nd den again in manik's pov made it repetetive. Just a suggestion.

But i really liked it.

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Glara

@Glara

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

wow seriously u knw how to keep us eager to read ur updates
really wonderful & tat ringtone too
cabir i like him here becoz i like to see manik irritated face here.i luv it
sry culdnt comment becoz of some prob in my mob
continue soon