Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
R u kiddng?? u r nt tourchrng us..infct u mk us xitd fr more prts in one go..
its amzmg... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
amzing update
nh4 won sad fr fab5 thre were happy towards nandu
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Why r u being sorry dear don't think u r troubling us infact we r enjoying every ounce of it...
And for the update.. lots of ghee and sugar for u..
What an update yaar.. mazzzaa aa gaya..

And yes precap I can imagine ^_^
But I don't want to as I need to read it..
Soo please trouble us more and more with these lovely ans sweet torture of yours
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey ..today i found this ff ..started reading it.
Omg
It was so much fun
Its beautiful
Plzz update as soon as possible
Waiting eagerly
In love with this ff
Plzz
Plzz
Plzz update soom
Waiting!!! Plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
I missed ur updates so much.
But no problem coz what you have deluvered now is amazing.
I loved it all.
Nd 3 updates at once is a great package. A treat to read.
Eagerly waiting for d next one coz i know it will be all manan.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh they won, now looking forward to what happens between MANAN...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow the update were superb nd I think like in serial how it hapnd I mean their first kiss may b it will be the precap I tink ok
Take care
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahahahahaaa naughty manik... Seeing nandini lyk dis got al flushed nice one
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...im glad nandu won...this should prove to soha and everyone that nandu is the better sibling...she should get confident with herself and self image...
can't wait to see what manan are doing in nandu's room...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 22
ok ok,so i suck at all these lovey dovey moments so if by any chance u dont like the update then just forgive me

nandini was busy trying to undo her knot and was murmuring some song,she was on cloud 9 today,after 17 years in her life she got a fair chance to prove herself and she did,she won,she was so happy about the fact that absolutely didnt acknowledge maniks presence,nandinis exposing back was giving a hard time to manik,he was trying to control himself,he knew he shudnt be doing this,but his heart over tuk his mind and he unknowingly started to walk towards nandini,her straight exposing back was teasing his fingers,he so wanted to touch it and feel it,he brouht his hand close to her back,slowly heading towards it and then,finally,he touched it,oh what feeling was it,it felt as if he found a missing piece of himself,nandini on the other hand was startled,she knew that touch but was just not ready to accept it,she luked up in th mirror and found manik shamelessly gazing at her exposed back,and only word excaped from her mouth-MANIK,on hearing his name manik luked up
NANDINIS POV
as soon as he touched me,i felt a strange peace within me and his name excaped from my mouth,he luked up,oh that intense gaze made me go all weak on my knees,i understud by his expressions that he was trying hard to control but then he cudnt

manik started to move his fingers down her back softly and slowly,giving nandini the hardest time on earth,but not for once did he tuk his eyes off her face,on feeling his fingers moving and creating weird sensations nandini just closed her eyes,and bit her lower lip,she wanted him to stop,to stop his sinful act but she cud only take his name,which was more like a moan,manik was enjoying luking at nandini like that and to know what affect he had on her,but he lost all his control when nandini moaned his name
MANIKS POV
i was enjoying luking at her like that,but when she tuk my name in that seductive manner,i lost all my control and the next moment i know i pulled her closer to me,keeping my hand on her bare waist,her back collided with and slowly brought my face close to her neck

manik pulled nandini close and brought his face down to her neck,he gave a wet kiss on her shoulder,nandini tightened her grip over his hand,which further instigated him and then he started to give trails of kisses all over her neck and then slightly bending down started kisssing her back,nandini was trying hard not to let any kind of moan excape through her mouth and was biting her lips,manik then suddenly turned her and pulled her closer to him,nandinis eyes were already closed,he kissed her jawline,then moving down repeated his kisses over the neck,he then once again moved up and bit her earlobe,nandini in respose just clutched his jacket
manik was loosing it,he did know how to stop or rather he did not want to stop,he saw nandinis face,her eyes were closed,his fingers once again started their deadly act and were moving up and down her back,manik just closed his eyes and brought his face near to hers,second by second his hand started to make a tighter grip over waist and his lips were slowly moving towards her lips,he slightly tilted his face,his lips were just inches apart from claiming hers when

ba-ba-ba-ba-ba-nana
ba-ba-ba-ba-ba-nana
banana-ah-ah

potato-na-ah-ah
banana-ah-ah

togari noh pocato-li kani
malo mani kano chi ka-baba
ba-ba-nana
yoh plano boo la planonoh too
, ba-na-na, ba-ba ,
PO-TAE-TOH-OH-OH
when nandinis phone rang,already manik had never like minions,but this incident just tuk away every possibility of of ever liking them,he was angry and frusted,and sweared he wud just kill the caller when nandini tried to calm down her breath and finally picked up the call
n:haan CABIR,kya hua?
on hearing cabirs name maniks fuse burst out
MANIKS POV
what the bloody hell
CABIR,m gonna kill him,kyu bhagwan kyu,kyu banaya aapne iss prani ko,every time,every time he ruins my plan,pehle yeh nandu ke minions upar se yeh CABIR,god if only i cud get to murder someone,it wud be cabir for sure,kahin usne koi secret camera toh nai lagay hua mere kapdo mein,and manik started to luk for a secret camera,nai,fir kaise,kaise iski hamehsa sab ke saath perfect timing hoti hai,how,today m not gonna leave him,m not and with this without even thinking twice manik ran out of the room just strangle cabir to death and lay him on his death bed
cabir on the other side was inviting nandin i for a party,but she knew that manik wud also be there and right now she was not in a situation to face him so she just refused saying that she was tired
as soon as she kept the phone she remembered about her recent romantic moments with manik,she knew she was wrong,that she shud not have lost control over heremotion but at the same time she cud also not gnore the fact that somewhere deep down,she always wanted to have such a moment with manik and that she loved it
she luked at herselfin the mirror and started to trace the trails of kisses that manik gave her with her fingers,she closed her eyes,she then brought her fingers to her lips and opened her eyes
n:what if cabir ka phone nai aata,kya manik mujhe sach mein?and then she started to blush badly thinking about what cud have happened if cabir wudnt have called her at that time
manik on the other han was trying to find cabir like a mad dog
MANIKS POV
aaj nai chhodonga isse,i was this close to kissing her,aur yeh cabir,aaj toh yeh gaya...parr ek min...agar usne puchha ki main uska murder kyu karra hoon,toh main kya bolunga
never mind,he wud probably be dead after that...but agar saathmein baaki log huye toh...toh main usse akele mein jake maar doonga,yeah right,what? manik,tu pagal ho gaya hai,leave it,isko toh kisi aur din maroonga,but agar cabir ka phone nai aata toh,and here manik started to blusha and smile like an idiot thinking about what cud have happened if cabir wudnt have called
wait a min,manik malhotra r u blushing,oh god,this girl is driving me crazy,with this manik ruffeled his hair and with a smile went to change lost in the thoughts of nandini

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