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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Awww...love it.. lke Musicana, great job.. that knot and he way they both got lost... i am glad for the interruption, he needs to clear things out with Soha before anything happens with Nandhu, otherwise its not fair... but this is great...looking forward to what will push him to break it off with Soha and admit his feelings for Nandhu... wonderful job...

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deepanksha

@deepanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

CHAPTER 23

manik went and joined his frnds where as nandini on the other hand was changing into her casuals to leave

c:yaar,thank god manik tu aa gaya,yaar yeh nano she is just not ready to come for the party,yaar uske liye rakhi hai party

manik was still very much mad at cabir but on hearing the dreadfull news,he was now more concerned about nandinis refusal

abhi:lets do one think,tumhare apartmant chalte hain,nano toh wahin jayegi na,bass wahi party kar lenge

abhis suggesstion brought smile on maniks face,he cud now finally meet nandini,even he was not sure whyhe was having this urge of meeting nandini,but rite now he was only concerned about meeting her

mu:ok,then lets go

all of them left,and reached the apartment before nandini cud,all of them were partying hard,but maniks mind was somewhere else,he just wanted nandini to be back

at that time nandini reached home,aryamann had dropped her home safely

n:come aru,andar aao na,ghar pe toh abhi koi ni hoga,sab party karne gaye honge,just as nandini finished her sentence,loud music started to come from her apartment

ar:haan woh toh dikh raha hai,and he gave her a silly grin

n:idk,yeh kaise,anyway,come na

ar:no,not today,nands,i might be a very nice frnd for u all,but honestly speaking,this is ur moment,to enjoy wid all of them the way u used to,so i will take my leave now,go and enjoy,and yeah dont forget to dance on that peppy song,said aru indicating at the peppy bollywood music which was coming from within

nandini smiled,waved a bye to him and returned to her apartment,as soon she opened the door,she witnessed a view which she forgot even ever existed

cabir and abhi were doing the snake dance and were rolling on the ground on the peppy dhol and manjira music of chhamiya style,rest mukti,aliya and navya were doing the signature thumka step whereas manik and dhruv had tied one of the duppattas on their heads as a turban and were doing the mawali dance,they then tuk their turban off and were now doing the signature salman khan duppatta step

then as soon as the lyrics started all of them got together and were now dancing like maniacs,nandini was having a fun time luking at them like this,she remembered how they all used to do this on their night out,dancing crazy,nandinis laugh got everyones attention and within no time cabir dragged her along with him towards abhi so that the so called terrific trio,as they were named by the grp for their mad moves,cud do their tatad tatad step,ruffling their hair,soon everyone joined them and then the song came to and end

everyone was dead tired,they were panting heavily,all of them luked at each other and then started to laugh and had a grp hug

c:oh god!!!!!how much i missed all this yaar,hamare night outs

mu:haan,i missed the terrific trios signature step,aaj woh bhi pura ho gaya

nav:this was crazy,i cant even imagine tum log kitne mazze karte honge yaar

d:yup,a lot

al:yeh toh kuchh bhi nai,yeh nano haine,iske parents,they were like really scared ki delhi mein hai,kahin ladko ke saath kuchh ho na jaye,toh night out ke liye kabhi permit nai karte thhey,aur fir ham na,main aur mukti,we used to sneak her out of her house with the help of rishabh bhaiya,aur fir subhe subhe,arounf five yeh saare boye used to go and sneak her in inside her room,it used to be so much fun

n:haan,aur uske baad mujhe bhai ka saara kaam karna parta tha,he used to black mail me

abhi:i remember,how he once locked u in the kitchen and asked u to do the paa dance,warna woh tumhare parent ko bata dete

n:provided i was having fever,he is mad,crazy

m:and thats y v all luv him

nav:oh god,tum sb kitne crazy ho

c:woh toh ham hai

and then they all had a hearty laugh

everyone was sitting in a circle and were chit chatting,for after ages manik once again felt like a part of them

n:umm...guys mom dad ka phone arra hai,main do min mein aai,as soon as nandini leaves mukti says

mu:yaar kitna tym ho gaya,kisi ko prank nai kiya,aaj karte hain

c:hmm..baat toh sahi hai,parr kisse

abhi:socho socho,and everyone started to think

d:idea,ek kaam karte hain,ek trap banate hain,fir na ham aru ko phone karenge aur kahenge ki koi emergency aa gai hai,umm..nandini ko chot lag gai,usse help mangenge,woh ayega,and the...u know what i mean

c:hmm..idea achha hai,but ham usse generally bula lenge,yeh chot wala thoda zyada serious ho jayega,haan yeh sahi hai

everyone agreed,but manik was not satisfied,though they were playing a prank on him and it gud for manik,yet the fact that he wud then join them was roubling him,but still he decided to go wid his frnds

n:so kya horra hai

al:ham prank karre hain

n:kisko?

c:main batata hoon,initially nandini was not ready,but when all of them made the puppy face she had to agree ad she called and invited aryamann,whereas the rest of the team was preapring for the prank

everything was ready,all of them were ready and waiting for aryamann to arrive,just then nandinis phone rang

n:um...guys main 2 min mein and she went inside her room

n:yes???

ar:hi nands,its me aru,actaully main apne frnd ke phone se baat karra hoon,i wanted to say ki mai nai aa paonga,woh mera best frnd aa rakha hai toh,sorry...

n:no its ok,bye

ar:bye

as soon as nandini disconnected the call,she heard the door bell

n:kun ho sakta hai,and then her eys widened,oh shit!!!!!!prank,and she hurried out of the room to save the poor soul from their prank,but to her dismay before she cud say smthing,the door opened,as soon as the person stepped inside,a bucket full of white paint warmly welcomed him,then two buckets of glue thrown by our very own cabir and mukti,complimented him and lastly and blow of feathers showered him with its praises and greetings

c:wohhooo...mazze aa gaye,kyu aru,kaisa laga??

n:CABIR!!!!!woh aru nai hai,he jut called to inform that he is not coming

d:too..hhh,toh...yeh kaun hai

WHAT THE HELL WAS THIS,screamed the guest,who was not a he but a she,and maniks very next sentence made the gang break into fits of laughter

m:SOHA!!!!!!!

s:yes!!!!SOHA

for minute there was complete silence,and then every started to laugh madly,rolling over the floor,whereas manik and nandini were trying their best not to laugh

s:stop laughing,all of u,its not funny,screamed soha on the top of her voice

everyone stopped laughing now,but were still very much giggling

c:so,,sohaa...tum yahan?kaise?asked cabir in between his giggle

s:main yahan manik se milne aai thi,but luk what u alldid,now where the hell is the washroom and eeryone pointed towards one direction,soha without any other word,ran into the washroom whereas all of them got into fits of laughter once again

n:stop it guys,usse bura lagega,said nano and went to give her spare cloths

soon soha came out with an irratted face and was about to leave when dhruv said

d:soha,kahan jarri ho,join us na

s:no thanks,i have no interest in wasting my time

c:point,waise,soha,kya baat hai,muh bada safed lagra hai,koi cream lagai hai kya,indicating at her white patches of paint all over her face

cabirs comment irritated soha to hell

s:u...but alas!!!she had nothing to say and left without saying a word

abhi:best prank ever

mu:i agree

c:chalo guys,ab hame bhi jana chahiye

m:yeah

d:ok,bye and all the boys bid a bye to girls and had a grp hug,during which manik cunningly came beside nandini and placed his hand over her waist and left

nandini on the other side,was blushing,when the reality stuck her

HE IS STILL IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH SOHA!!!!SOHA,HER SISTER!!!!!!

precap:solo performance and prom,some new confessions and relationships to bloom,and some might droop

NOTE:

THANX FOR THE COMMENTS EVERYONE,I JUST WANTED TO CLARIFY FEW THINGS

one of the readers said that the story was going off track,i realized that i forgot to mention one thing in the intro

this story revolves aroud everyday experiences,which most of us have,be it complexes,frndship or love

i wanted to cover broad aspects-complexes

frnds and how frndship may help us to get out of it

true love,based on qualities and how one often tends to get attracted towards outer beauty

i covered the complexes part,frndship is like ever going,love-manik got attracted towards soha,mow he is realizing his mistake and then true love will win,so i just wanted to clarify these doubts

Edited by deepanksha - 10 years ago

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Danny92

@Danny92

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Wow nice update

The gang is back with a bang just loved it they all hav some much fun together all after so many days manik was also with thm they r just awesom continue like this

Sohaaa poor baby but that was a nice prank

Continue sooonnn

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rimsha01

@rimsha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

No its not going off track

Its a wonderfully written story.

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deekshagarg

@deekshagarg

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Finalllyyy.. it seems like ages since u updated..

But the wait was worth..

And thank you sooo much for the prank.. I loved the way the prank got wrong but in a way right.. soha hahahaha uske saath aisa hi hona chahiye..

Manik to pura pyaar mein pad gaya..

Chalo achha hai..

But why nandini had to realise the awful reality. .waise to its ok cause yeh reality jaldi hi khatam ho hi jayegi.. after all manik to Nano ka hi hai.. aur vo jaldi soha se breakup kar hi lega..

Waiting for the solo performance and prom..

Please give next update soon..

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Wat a nice update u hav given us its dammm... Owsm yaar bas ab manik jldi smjh jaaye

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

awesome update...

loved the prank on soha...i was laughing my ass off...too funny...

can't wait for manan to get closer together...

hope manik breaks up with soha soon...nandu should win the solo competition...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Love it... the trick, and what Nandhu realized. Hopefully Manik breaks up with Soha soon, I am glad Nandhu is being practical...looking forward to how they get together...

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deepanksha

@deepanksha

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

m like really happy right now bcoz i just got a gud news,so out of happiness i decided to update the next chapter as well

CHAPTER 24

as soon as manik left nandini was struck with this dreadful realization,she knew what manik did or what he was doing was wrong from the very start,but she ignored it but this time,the real realization came out,from nowhere,she mentally decided to keep distance from manik,though she knew its going to be hell difficult,but she had to do this

NEXT AFTERNOON

it was 3 in the afternoon and the competion was to start at 4,after the competition around 6 or 7 the prom ud start,so natuarally there was double excitement today

nandini was sitting in her green room,but unlike yesterday,she wasnt nervous,she was lost in her thoughts,thoughts of manik,she was thinking something very deep when she was interupted by rest of the NA4

nav:so meri jaan,lets get u ready

n:hmm...

abhi:tumhe kya hua?oh god,dont be nervous,ur gonna rock it,agar haar bhi gaye toh kya hua

if only abhi knew,more than losing,nandini rite now was more concerned about her relationship wid manik

nav:ok now boys,get out

ar:ouch,that hurts,still,bye nands,rock it

abhi:yup,bye

n:bye and thanx

nav:ok so now its time to get ready,here is ur dress

n:gown?navya!!iss sab ki kya zaroorat thi?

nav:kyu nai thi,ab dekho prom typical prom toh hai nai,we r supposed to wear knee length dresses,aur maine kitne shauk se yeh dress liya tha tumhare liye,so pehnlo na,plz

n:ok,do

nav:i luv u

n:yeah yeah,same

after few minutes nandini came out wearing a beautiful white gown,when navya handed her something

n:yeh kya hai

nav:yeh abhi ne bheja hai,gud luck ke liye,pehanlo

nandini opened it and it turned out to be a beautiful flower tiara

n:wow its so baeutiful

nav:of course,abhi ki jo choice thi

NANDINIS DRESS AND TIARA:

nav:u r luking so beautiful!!!

n:thanx and they had a hug

MANIKS GREEN ROOM

manik was getting ready but his mind was with nandini,he so wanted to see her face and wish her luck,today for the first time he wanted nandini to win rather than him

AUDI

ny:ok everyone,i know today we have double celebration so i wont waste anymore time and call upon stage our first contistent,we r going to follow the same schedule as yesterday

after two performances it was maniks turn to perform

ny:ok so now i call upon stage manik malhotra,male lead of fab5 to come and make us move on our feet

as soon as manik entered on stage,nandini came backstage,manik felt her presence but was not able to see her,but he knew she was there near him

he came near the mike and said:this song is for someone special

I fell in love next to you
Burning fires in this room
It just fits, light and smooth
Like my feet in my shoes
Little one, lie with me
Sew you heart to my sleeve
We'll stay quiet underneath
Shooting stars if it helps you sleep
And hold me tight, don't let me breathe
Feeling like you won't believe

(manik remembered how once he got locked wid nandini in the skul store rum and how she lit fire for him,it was then that their frndship bloomed,then he remembered their car convo)

There's a firefly loose tonight
Better catch it before it burns this place down
And I lie if I don't feel so right
But the world looks better through your eyes

Teach my skin those new tricks
Warm me up with your lips
Heart to heart, melt me down
It's too cold in this town
Close your eyes, lean on me
Face to mouth, lips to cheek
Feeling numb in my feet
You're the one
To help me get to sleep

(he remembered how earlier he used to have a heart to heart convo with her nad how she always managed to calm him down,he rememered his kiss on her cheek when his parents went out widout informing,then the gud luck kiss yesterday before performance)

And hold me tight, don't let me breathe
Feeling like you won't believe

There's a firefly loose tonight
Better catch it before it burns this place down
And I lie if I don't feel so right
But the world looks better through your eyes

It's only been one night of love
And maybe that is not enough
Hold me tight, don't let me breathe
Feeling like you won't believe

(then he remembered aout their recent romantic moments and how it got interupted,he wanted to that moment to be complete and was now blushing hard)

There's a firefly loose tonight
Better catch it before it burns this place down
And I lie if I don't feel so right
But the world looks better through your eyes

ny:BRAVO!!!!it was an amazing performance,now i call upon stage the female lead singer of the wining grp yesterday,nandini vashishth

nandini got out of her trance hen her name was announced,she had gone deep down the memory lane and forgot about her own performance,manik till that time had joined his frnds in the crowd,as soon as nandini entered on stage,manik was left dumbstruck,nandini luked like an angel,his angel,she came near the mike,and then started

Heart beats fast,Colors and promises

How to be brave
How can I love when I'm afraid
To fall
But watching you stand alone
All of my doubt
Suddenly goes away somehow

One step closer

(she was luking down and remembering how she used to fell when she was around manik,then she remembered about her complexes and soha)

I have died every day
waiting for you
Darlin' don't be afraid
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more

(she was luking down and singing,she was confessing on stage that she loved manik but she didnt have the guts to luk up and say it into his eyes)

Time stands still
beauty in all she is
I will be brave
I will not let anything
Take away
What's standing in front of me
Every breath,
Every hour has come to this

One step closer

(she then luked up as soon as she remembered how her frnds helped her,taught her to be brave,she luked into sohas eyes and sang she wont let her take away her frnds from her)

I have died every day
Waiting for you
Darlin' don't be afraid
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more

(she luked towards her frnds and sang her heart out,all her fears and insecurities vanished when she saw their smiling faces)

And all along I believed
I would find you
Time has brought
Your heart to me
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more

One step closer
One step closer

(she luked straight into maniks eyes and sang this part,then she luked around )

I have died every day
Waiting for you
Darlin' don't be afraid,
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more

And all along I believed
I would find you
Time has brought
Your heart to me
I have loved you for a
Thousand years
I'll love you for a
Thousand more

(she once again got her confidence and today,she finally got over her complexes when she luked at manik and her frnds)

ny:omg!!!that was something,brilliantly beautiful,so we will wait for sometime untill the judges make their choices

nandini went towards her frnds who knew all this while she was singing what was deep inside her heart,they knew that song was for them and manik and they did nothing but hug her with all their love,but nandini hadnt forgotten that she had to keep distance from amnik,though she loved him,but what all happened between them yesterday was wrong and she ignored manik which irked him,but then he got distracted when the results were anounced

ny:ok,so here r the results,the third position goes to OMEGA,the secont position to FAB5,on hearing this everyone jumped with joy,but manik was worried about nandini,and the first position goes to,nyonika got silent and then said,no doubt NA4,that was it for thewhole gang,everyone just hugged nandini,manik was on cloud9,he felt as if he won,for the first time fab5 was happy to lose,

ny:congratulations NA4,so its 6 right now,u all have one hour to get ready for ur freshers party,gud night everyone,enjoy and party hard

and the whole college jumped in joy,but the joy that a grp of 8 people felt was far far more than the whole college

pre:nandini meets nyo,freshers party,few conffessions

Edited by deepanksha - 10 years ago