Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow yaar wat an update bas yaar aur manan ko zada dur mat rkhna plzzz... Its dammm... Owsm
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Posted: 9 years ago
The beauty of part was on another level today..
I loved nandini look..
And coincidently when I was reading it the song 'a thousand years' played in the background and just then I saw that u selected the same for nandini.. I was astonished.. but I liked the coincidence..
Last but not the least I wish to see a beautiful prom...
And I think Nyonika and nano's talk will be a turn for nano's thoughts.. let's see what happens next and thanks for the early update.. and a bada wala Congo to you.. actually to the whole fandom.. parth is back yaayiee..

Will be waiting for next one..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Reality is sometimes tough that is wat happening to nandini nw she loves manik but manik is in a relationship with her sister she fels guit wen remembered wat happend last night between her nd manik so wants to keep distance frm him poor girl but who knows what's their in store fr her
Her gown nd band was nice the song she sung is fr manik nd her frnds she pour her heart out on stage nd she definitely deserves to win and she won
Manik is felng bad that nandini ignored him but fr better thngs we hav to wait
Continue sooonn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that's was awesome...
Nandini coming out of her shell & the new confidence in her, very well written...

Thank you... Waiting for ur next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved all of it...hope manan sort out their problems...
the song selection was the best...nandu's 1000 years suited it so well...
can't wait to see what happens next...want soha and manik to break up...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for not commenting...
but all the chapters wre amazing...
waitin for nxt update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
But Plz sort the difference between manan
So next will be confession
Plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update...the songs were perfect, love the mention of fireflies in his, and her determination to stay away, he is only realizing now...waiting to see what will push him to admit his feelings for her... and break things ff with Soha, terrific job, can't wait to see what is next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 25
as soon as the competiton ended the girls hurried back to the apartment to get ready for the prom where as the boys went back to their respective houses to luk their best
if the girls were trying to luk the most beautiful girl,the boys were no less,they wanted to be the most handsome guy,it was a modern prom where girls were ought to wear knee lenght dresses instead of gowns,and then the prom king and queen wud be judged
where every girl was trying to luk the best and defeat their so called best frnds,3 girls were busy dressing up their best frnd,widout caring about themselves
n:guys,kya karro ho,prom sirf mera nai tumhara bhi hai,tumhe taiyyar nai hona hai kya?
mu:ohho..nano,ham taiyyar ho jayenge,parr abhi tujhe taiyyarkarna zyada important hai
al:right,competition toh jeet liya,ab yeh bhi jeetna hai
nav:soha ko harana hai
n:guys,yeh kya olympics ka koi game hai jisme soha doosri country ki player hai aur main India ki,ki jo mujhe harr haal mein jeetna hai,r u guys crazy
nav:olympics nai usse bhi zyada imp hai yeh
n:ALIYA!!!!!keep that pink blush away fromme,u know i hate make up
al:shut up!!m not listening to u
n:tum log aise ko behave karre ho jaise aaj meri shadi hai aur mujhe apne hone wale husband ko impress karna hai
mu:chinta not!!iske baad iski zaroorat bhi nai padegi,saare ladke khud hi impress ho jayenge,line laga denge roses aur proposals ki
n:urghh...I HATE U GUYS
al,muk<nav:and WE LUV U...
and all four of them had a grp hug
AUDI(PROM VENUE)
the audi was decorated beautifully,with white ballons and flowers and yellow lights and candles,it indeed was a best place for any date
everyone had started to come,in fact all were their,except the girls of the gang
abhi:yaar yeh mukti kahan reh gai hai,mujhe usse dekhna hai
d:aliya bhi nai aai
m:guys stop it,aa jayenge
c:yaar dekho main theek toh lagra hoon
abhi:tujhe kya hua hai?pichhle aadhe ghante se 100 baar puchh chuka hai,teri toh koi gf bhi nai hai fir?
c:chup kar,jitna puchha hai utna jawaab de
m:oh god,u guys r troublig me
c:teri asli pareshani toh ab aai,said cabir indicating at soha who widout any warning just jumed on maik and hugged,manik on the other hand made an irritated luk
s:baby,batao na min kaisi lagri hoon,she was wearing a pink knee length dress-http://www.bridesmaidlook.co.uk/one-shoulder-pink-knee-length-bridesmaid-gown-780.html
manik was not interested in her dress or anything,he was wauting for nandini to come,so just to drop the topic said
m:hmm..achhi hai
soha on hearing this was more than happy,she believed she luked the best and had some kind of attitude in her body language
s:baby,main na abhi aati hoon
abhi:yaar yeh ladkiyan kab aayengi?
c:le,aa gai woh dekh
abhi,dhruv and cabir lost their senses when they saw their lady loves entering
NAVYAS DRESS
MUKTIS DRESS
ALIYAS DRESS
but there was one girl who was luking drop dead gorgeous,and that was no one else but nandini,she had to,afterall her besties selected the most beautiful dress for her keepinga side their own interests
NANDINIS DRESS
nandini entered with following her 3 besties,every guy was ogling at her,dying to be with her,she luked a fairy,walking down aisle,throught he stairs,to be with her man,manik went numb when he saw nandini,never had he ever seen such a beautiful girl in his life,her dark black kohl,those long eyelashes,that smokey eyeshadow,those red blushy cheeks and those pink pouty lips,tuk his heart away
abhi:mu..mukti,cupcake ur luking so...so...beautiful
mu:thanx sweetheart,and she started to blush
n:oh my my,someone is blushing...!!!
d:aliya,babes,ur luking so gorgeous,i have no words to describe!!
al:thanx muffin,even ur luking hot!!and dhruv blushed on her comment whereas everyone had a awww face
c:um..um,navya,luking gud!!!
cabir was not meeting his eyes with navya,he knew he wont be able to keep his blush in control
nav:thanq cab..cabir,even ur luking nice
cabirs face lit up on this comment
nandini was not luking at manik,but he didnt care,coz he was busy luking at her,he was going to praise nandini when a voice interfered and made him boil in anger as wellas jealousy
OMG!!!!NANDS,U...R...LUKING...SO...DEAD...RED...HOT!!!!!!!!!!!
everyone,turned around to fing aryamann ogling at nandini
n:thanx aru,even ur luking handsome
nandinis comment made maniks inside jump on the fire of jealousy
MANIKS POV
handsome,bloodyhell!!!kahan se lagra hai nandu ko yeh handsome,luk at the way he is checking her out,m gonna snatch his eyes out his sockets
ar:uhh...thanq god thanq,agar aaj party ki sbsi hot ladki ko main handsome lagra hoon,toh mtlb chance toh hai ki yeh pat jayegi,kyu cabir,pat jayegi na
n:(whispering)pehle iski khud ki toh pat jaye
c:bilkul,pkka,agar nai bhi patti toh ham help kar denge
nandini being the innocent one had never got such comments and she was blushing on this,where as maniks anger reached its peak
just then soha came,who was baffeled to see nandini so beautiful
s:hi everyone,nano,um..achhi lagri ho...
n:thanx soha,even u r luking ud
soha gave a fake smile to nandini
everyone was talking to each other when dj started and everyone entered on the dance floor,soha dragged manik along with her and nandini was alone,she didnt go to have a dance as her dress didnt allow her to dance madly,just then nyonika approached her
ny:gud evening nandu beta,kaisi ho
n:hello aunty,m fine,aap kaise ho
ny:even m gud,but i must say u sang really well today,i didnt know u sing so well
n:thanx aunty,thanq so much
ny:aur rishabh kaisa hai?
n:oh he is gud,banglore hai
ny:og gud gud,waise tum aaj bahut beautiful lagri ho my darling
n:not better than u
ny:oh..sweet heart,main kahan,m getting old now
n:arre,who tld u that,wait i will show u somthing and nandini tuk out a minion image which said
"MNOT GETTING OLD,M JUST BECOMING CLASSIC"
ny:hahaha...oh beta,u r such a darling,agar main tumse kuchh mango toh dogi?
n:yeah aunty of course...
ny:jab bhi iss idiot ko realize ho that he chose glass instead of the real diamond,dont let him have that diamond easily,otherwise u will reduce the worth of this rare diomand,with this she lovingly patted her cheek and left saying,"and enjoy the party my jaan"
nandini was shocked on hearing this nyonika,she cud have never expected her to talk about all this,instead she thought that she wasnt aware of it
manik saw nyonika talking to nandini and then her flushed and shcked face,he presumed that nyonika must have said something bad and wasangry on her,so he cleverly left the stage saying that he is going to bring something to drink
he came behind nandini and then suddenly tuk he by her arm and went out in the garden
n:manik,kya karre ho?
m:nyonika ne kuchh kaha kya?
n:manik,mom,call her mom,maa hain tumhari,and nahi kuchh nai kaha unhone mujhe,she is such a nice lady
m:nandini dont lie
n:manik main jhooth nai bolri hoon,i swear,...nandini promise
manik was now satisfied that nothing happened,nandini turned to leave but manik had somthing else in mind,he pulled her by her arm and her back collided with his chest,nandini's heart beat started to race,she knew what was coming and wanted leave before she cud lose control
n:manik ky..kya...kare ho...mujhe ja..jana hai...
manik without saying anything brought his face down and nuzzled into her neck,nandini was loosing control,his hot breath was faning over her neck creating havoc inside her
m:kuchh bhi toh nai...said manik huskily in her ears and then planted a soft kiss on he temple
n:mm...manik...plz...st..stop
manik smirked and said huskily
m:but maine toh kuchh kiya hi nai abhi tak,but if u insist...
and then he started kissing her neck,he left trails of kisses on her neck,and then sucked her neck,nandini was loosing her control
manik was now not in his senses,he flipped nandini and started to give open mouth kisses on nandinis naeck,shoulder and collarbone,he then slowly approached her lips but soon reality sruck nandini,she opened her eyes
n:th...this is wrong and she ran inside the audi leaving a completely shocked manik

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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic fabulous chapter..
I love the girls gang bond..
Nandini's dress was beautiful..
Again that stupid soha.. everytime she has to come in between..
I even found nano's and Nyonika's small chat very good..
Hayyeee.. I love the way manik losses his control when he is with Nano. .
But nandini stopped it saying it's wrong but koi baat nahi jaldi everything will be right..
Please update next part soon

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