MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1 - Page 49

Ohhh ... it's too hilarious and cute ... I just went awww reading it ... it was cute but emotional too ... but the way u penned it down ... it's just superb ... the way Nandini saves Manik from the children ... and then children call him jiju. .. and then Talli Nandini the Best part ... and the caring Manik ... u just nailed it perfectly ... love it ... and enjoyed a lot reading it 😊👏

awesome blossom
drunk nandu was always treat to watch chahe vo "TUM MILE" me ho ya "IT'S LOVE" me or Ab "DHEREE DHEREE"
you r amazing dear
N aryman ko thapad n soha ko sunna maza gaya NANDU THE SHERNI
manan scene was pure bliss
nandu ki conditions vala part was hilarious
N kiss to Amazing
Ab nandu gussa na ho bus manik se
god bless you

I read all d parts in one go...n they all are really amazing...u r seriously a damm good writer..eagerly waiting for d next update.😊

So cute I loved it taali nandini was awesome manik caring side was also very cute

Yaar kaise likhti ho tum itna accha
I mean like seriously.
It's awesome babes...!!
Waiting for your next update

WOW..MANAN'S FIRST KISS...HAWWW SO CUTE
FOR THE FIRST TIME OTHER THAN THE SHOW I LOVED THE DRUNK NANDINI.SHE WAS TOO CUTE N HER CONDITIONS WERE ADORABLE

Hey mawara,

Thank a lot girl. You gave us such a lamba update tonight as u promised. And the chapter was awesome so much fun. Humor is becoming a trademark trait for dheere dheere. And I'm loving it. That's what keep this ff unique, different and interesting. We hardly find this kind of humor in manan jn any other ff. So... Great job dear. Keep going.

The whole chapter was awesome. It was balanced pretty well. The jealousy, the humor, the emotions, the pain, the assurances, the drunk nandu, the regret, the kiss, the trust and last but not the least the cliffhanger at the end. You r an awesome wiriter. Ache se paths Hein. Chap kahan shuru karma hei aur kaha khatam.

Thanks once again. Update soon. Among all ur ff's dheere dheere is so unique n spl. Loving it.

Awesome update di
I just loved it
I was laughing like hell after reading the drunk nandu
Haaahaaa
Literally awesome
And their first kiss was awesome
Waiting for nandini reaction
Continue soon
Awesome
Thanks for the PM