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Posted: 9 years ago
aww my nandu u are so sweet
choclate sharing then that desk scene melody humming and all time fav jokes
yipee so loved them
please do continue
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aww my nandu cried...
aryamaan u are dead
hehe nandu my sweetie manik will protect you
loved it
please do continue
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U suppose to give one part tonight and its night I guess??? Plz post part I'm anxiously waiting 😊
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Chapter 4 A


Manik's POV


I reached the orphanage at 7:30. I got down of the car and knocked the gate. A guard came out and I asked him about Nandini. He allowed me to go inside.I walked inside it was a small building with a small garden. I was about to step inside the building when suddenly 10 kids around 8 or 7 years old blocked my way.

"Stranger in the orphanage..!"One of them shouted and all of the pointed their water guns towards me. I gulped my saliva and faked a smile as I can't afford getting wet at that moment because I have to join the party in an hour or so.


"Hy..! I am not here to harm you..!"I tried to clear my point but the kids were least satisfied.


"On the count of three..!"The same kid shouted again and I thought of running from there. "One..! Two..!"They shouted and I closed my eyes. When suddenly.


"Rayaan..! No..! He is not here to harm you all stop it bacha..!"I heard Nandini's shouts and opened my eyes to look at her. For a second I forgot to breathe. She was looking so beautiful..! Red dress white leggings,matching heels,earrings,bracelet and open hair with a cute headband..!



(i forgot to share these yesterday I am so sorry;mawara)

She was looking like a teenager..! She stood in front of me as if trying to protect from the children gang.


"Dido..! Ap hath jaoa..!"Rayaan shouted.


"Rayaan..! I said na..! He is a friend..!"She again protected me.


"Nandini..! Save me..!"I whispered in Nandini's ear and she nodded. While the kids were discussing something with each other. Suddenly they look at us and what they shouted was a blast for ears..


"Jeju..!"They all shouted and pounced upon me. Nandini too was standing numb and I was unable to figure out how to react. I look at Nandini helplessly and she gave me pleading look.


"Bachoon..! Yeah Jeju nahi hain..! Mery boss hain..!"Nandini tried to clear their confusion and they again look at me curiously.


"Oh..! Dido..! That means he is your kharoos wala boss..! Jis kay bary main ap nay btaya tha..!"Rayaan said looking at me and I frowned while Nandini showed him eyes. I was about to say something when..


"Bachoon..! Dinner time..!"I heard a voice and look at the direction. I saw an old lady maybe in her early 60's was coming towards us and the kids run from there.


"Namasty Beta..!"The lady folded her hands in front of me and I too did the same.


"Maa..! He is my Sir..!"Nandini introduced me then I came to know that she was Nandini's Maa.


"Myny pehchaan liya..! Jeety raho..!"Maa gave me blessings and I was overwhelmed with this.


"Ok Maa..! Abhi hum jaty hain...!" Nandini bid a goodbye to Maa and I again folded my hands. Then we both walked out.

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Nandini's POV


Mann yeh sahib ji
Jane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahane

I was feeling Manik Sir's gaze on me. We both were stealing glances. He was looking breathtakingly handsome. In his black dress coat and white shirt. Bilkul kise film kay hero..! Hye..! Aiyaapaa..! Then he opened the door for me and I sat in. The he too sat on the driving seat.


Naina nawabi ji

Dekhe hai sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishare


He started the car and look at me.


"Umm Nandini..!"He called me slowly.


"Ji?"I asked looking at him.


"Wo..! Tum ach-achi la-lag rahi ho..!"He stammered and I was shocked.Manik Sir has praised me.


"Ap nay meri tareef ki?"I asked totally lost and he frowned.


"Nahi..! Tmhry farishtoon ki..!"He shouted and I came out of the trance. I made a bad face.


"Larki ki tareef aisy nahi krty..!"I said staring at him with very frowny expressions.


"Acha tou phir kaisy karty hain?"Manik Sir asked sarcastically concentrating on the road.


"Pyaar say kehty hain..! Ankhoon main ankhain daal kay..!"I said abruptly and then bite my tongue. Aiyoo bohat bak bak karti hai Nandu tu..! Kya zarorat the is bakwas ki..! While Manik Sir laughed loudly for the first time I saw him laughing so loudly. All my confusion flew away and I too started smiling.


Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere
Bhayo re saibo

Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere
Lage re saibo


"I think tum bohat ziada bollywood movies dekhti ho..!"Manik Sir said laughingly and I frowned.


"Nahi ji..! Aisy real main bhi hota hai..!"I almost shouted angrily.


"Acha ji?"Manik Sir mocked and again started laughing. I was again lost in his laughs he was looking so handsome.


"Sir..! Aik bat boloon?"I asked hesitantly.


"Bolo?"He said smilingly.


"Ap ki smile bohat beautiful..! Keep smiling like this..!"I gave him the compliment and he nodded smilingly.


"You wanna listen music?"Suddenly he asked and I look at him excitedly.


"Can I?"I asked blinking my eyes.


"You can..!"He nodded his head and I happily turned on the music player. The song was beautiful and was all lost in the song. Unknowingly we both were coming close..! I don't know it was right or not but the feeling was so awesome..!

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 4 B


Manik's POV


Unknowingly I was fulfilling her wishes. She was so cute when she said that ankhoon main ankhain dall kar wali thing I laughed so loudly maybe for the first time I laughed. This girl is really something. And now she was lost in music I smiled seeing a little glimpse of peace on her face atlast we reached the Khurana's farmhouse.


"We are here..!"I said in a loud voice and she came out of her trance. We got down of the car and walked towards the main door. She was a step behind me an unknown proud filled my heart as she was with me. With my all time famous attitude I entered the party hall and Nandini after me. We saw Cabir and he too saw us. He rushed towards us and look at Nandini.


"Wow..! You are looking so gorgeous..!"Cabir complimented her twirling her with him and she smiled. Her smile was so pure.


"Thank you bhai..! Dekha..! Aisy karty hain tareef..!"She thanked Cabir and taunted me childishly and I sighed. Cabir look at me and winked. I just wanted to shoot him now and then.


"Main Khurana say mil kar ata hoon..!"I said in a serious tone and walked towards Khurana and family. Leaving brother sister with their giggles and laughs.


"I am really glad to see you Malhotra..!"Mr.Khurana said shaking hand with me and I smiled. Suddenly I felt pair of arms encircling my waist and I became annoyed. SOHA KHURANA..!


"Hi Manik..! Long time no see..!"Soha said smilingly as I shoved her arms away.


"I was busy..!"I said shrugging my shoulders.


"Come on..! Tmhry pass mery liye bilkul time nahi hota..!"Soha complained and I sighed total frustrated.


"Soha mjy Mr.Singhaniya say milna hai excuse me..!"I excused myself and was about to walk away when I felt pair of eye staring at me I look at the direction of the gaze and I saw Nandini. Her eyes had something..! Maybe jealousy..! Maybe a little glimpse of pain seeing me with Soha..! As soon as she noticed me looking her she look away and I smiled a little...! Nandini Murthy was jealous..! Interesting..!

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Nandini's POV


I didn't felt good seeing that girl with Manik Sir..! I know I shouldn't be thinking like this..! I know I have no such relation with Manik Sir which make me insecure but still..! Arghhh..! I want to kill that girl.


"Bhai..!"I called Cabir Bhai who was taking the sips of whisky.


"Ji bhai ki behna..!"Cabir bhai asked affectionately.


"Wo larki kon hai?"I asked pointing at Soha as I wanted to know who was that Chipko girl..!


"Wo..! Soha hai..! Khurana ki beti..!"Bhai told me and I nodded. Mera aur us ka kya muqabla..! She was so rich..! Her dress was way expensive then me..! Her figure was very perfect unlike me..! Why would Manik Sir will like me..! What? Nandu kya bak rahi hai..! Why would Manik Sir like you? And wait a second why you want that Manik Sir like you..! Pagal khoti..! Kuch bhi soch rahi hai..! Chup..! Aik dam chup..! Yeah...! I was staring at Manik Sir that too was an unknown action but when I saw that he caught me staring at him..! I immediately look away..!


"Kya pee rahy hain ap kab say?"I slapped Cabir Bhai's shoulder as I wanted to release my frustration on someone.


"Wine pee raha hoon..! Cause I love being drunk..!"Cabir bhai said proudly and I wanted to beat him black and blue.


"Give me too mjy bhi peeni hai..!"I demanded and he look at me shocked.


"Tum? Wine piyo ge?"Cabir bhai asked with shocking expressions.


"Haan..!"I shouted and snatched his glass. Don't know what had gotten into me and I gulped the whole glass in one shot. That Soha was making me go insane..!


"Pagal ho gai ho?"Cabir said laughingly and I gave him a deadly glare to which he mumbled a sorry. I again poured some more and gulped it too.


"Nandini bus..! Stop it..!"Cabir bhai tried to stop me and I push him away. "Main Manik ko bula kar lata hoon..! Only he can handle you..!"He murmured and left. I didn't care about anything now..! I just wanted to kill Soha..!


"Hy beauty..!"Suddenly I heard a voice and my anger rose to seventh sky. Aryaman..! Don't know that wine thing was just igniting the fire more and more in me..! I think now Arayaman's bad time was coming.


"Kya hai?"I said frowning my face and glared at him.


"Wohoo..! Chill baby..!"Aryaman retorted back.


"Tameez hai kay koi ni?"I asked staring at him.


"Excuse me?"He fumbled.


"Excused..!"I said and turned my face.


"Did I said something wrong?"Aryaman again tried to continue the conversation and I got up to leave. When he held my hand and that was it for me. The next thing I did was something I never ever dreamt of. I gave a tight slap to Aryaman and he was shocked.


"What the hell is your problem? How dare you to touch me...!"I shouted in my full time talli mood and Aryaman's hand was on his cheek. Suddenly Soha came and pushed me away.


"How dare you to slap my brother?"She shouted on me and everyone look at us. And that was it for me..! I was about to shout something when suddenly Manik Sir came..!


"Nandini..! Lets go home..!"He said holding my hand but I was no mood I wanted to tell Soha about her right place.


"No..!"I freed my hand from Manik Sir's grip. "You are asking me how dare I? You tell me how dare you to touch MY Manik Sir..!"I shouted and everyone else was shocked. I didn't knew what I was blabbering but everything was coming from my heart.


"Your Manik Sir?"Soha said sarcastically and I just wanted to pull her hair.


"Yes..! My Manik Sir..! Hai na Sir?"I shouted and that "hai na Sir" I said looking at Manik Sir who was looking at me with wide eyes.

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 4 C


Manik's POV


I was shocked. She said MY..! Like seriously..! Kehty hain Sharab kay nashy main insaan sach bolta hai..! That means her heart had accepted me as her..! Now she was asking me am I hers or not?


"Nandini..! Let's go..!"Once again I tried to drag her with me.


"Manik..! Your employees really don't have manners..!"Soha shouted and I gave a pleading look to Cabir.


"Oye..! Ab tm mjy manners sikhaoa ge..!"Nandini shouted and was about to pounced upon Soha when I held her waist from back. "Leave me Sir..!"She again shouted but I picked her up and walked out gesturing Cabir to handle everything. Nandini was constantly struggling to free herself from my grip but I didn't left her.


"Leave me na..!"She again protested.


"And why would I do so?"I asked angrily.


"Because I am telling you to do so..!"She said making a cute pout and I sighed. Then we reached my Car and I with lots of difficulty almost STUFFED her in my Car as party was over for me.


"Let me go..!"She once again shouted as soon as I started the Car.


"Why you want me to let you go?" I asked in a serious tone.


"Mjy Soha say baat karni hai..!"She said angrily.


"Kya baat krni hai?"I asked laughingly as now I was enjoying her cute antics.


"Girls talk..!"She said nodding her head in a serious tone and I very well knew what was her GIRLS TALK..! She will surely pull Soha's hair...! Her behavior was clearly indicating she also feels for me and I was also accepting it slowly. I knew now Khurana will surely cancel the deal but who care hahaha..!


"STOP THE CAR..!"Nandini's shout broke the chain of my thoughts and I unintentionally stopped the car and that was the biggest mistake of the day because Nandini without giving me time to react run out of the Car.


"Nandini stop..!"I shouted as I too run behind her. She climbed a bench as I reached her. "Come down..!"I shouted angrily.


"No..! You can't order me..!"She said showing me her tiny winy finger.


"Why? I am your boss..!"I said angrily and she laughed.


"But office hours are over..! You can only order me in office..!"She said naughtily and I wanted to bang my head in wall on her stupid logic.


"Ok..! Abhi bus ho gya..! Come down..!"I said politely as I noticed my anger will not affect her.


"No..! First you have to accept my two conditions?"She said showing me her two fingers.


"And what are those two conditions?"I said totally enjoying her cute cute antics. Her long silky hair were disturbing her eyes..! She was stumbling on the bench and I was covering her all the time.


"Condition No 1...! you have to promise me that you will never ever talk to Soha?"She said showing me her finger and I had no choice unless to accept her condition.


"Ok Madam..! I agree..!"I said suppressing my smile.


"Really? You will not talk to her?"She asked as excited as a kid.


"Absolutely..!"I said in a hell serious tone. I was playing along. For the first time I was liking such a waste of time..! No one will believe that THE MANIK MALHOTRA was wasting his precious time with a drunk girl and was agreeing to her conditions..! But nobody knows that the drunk girl in front of me was my everything now bus mjy accpet krna baki tha..!


"Wow..! Thank you..!"She clapped excitedly and jumped on the bench. "OK second condition..!"She said in a serious tone.


"Ap ko meri tareef karna ho ge..! Ek dam filmy style main..!"She demanded and I was taken aback for a second. I don't know how to praise a girl..! Kahan phas gya yaar?


"I can't do this..!"I said scratching my head in confusion.

"Then I will not go home..!"She said angrily. "Kya Sir? Itna bara business chalaty hain aik larki ki tareef nahi kar skty..!"She mocked me and that was it for me. I pulled her towards me and look in her eyes. She smilingly blinked her eyes and I was lost.


"You are looking so beautiful Nandini..! So much beautiful.! Itne khobsorat kay mjy dar hai kahen tmhy meri he nazar na lag jye..!"I said softly brushing her bang away and she was also lost. She smiled and leaned forward her next move was enough to took my breath away..! She kissed me on my right cheek.


"Thank you..! Ap bohat achy ho..!"She confessed with a pure eye contact. "You know you are the only one in this whole world to whom I think is mine..! My own parents threw me away..! Boojh the main un par..! Tabhi choor diya mjy..! Ya shaid bohat tang krti hoon ge islye choor diya..! Main ap ko bhi bht tang karti hoon na..! Ap bhi mjy job say nikaal do gay?"Her words really had something which left me bewildered I noticed something wet on my cheeks..! TEARS..! I was crying on the pain of the small doll infront of me who was also crying..! She too had a storm inside her just like me..! She too was fighting with the world alone just like me..! Our conditions were same..! But the difference was she was so much expressive..! She had the guts to explain her inner turmoils..! I think it was her strong point..! At least she can let it all out..! But I was a coward..! I didn't had the courage to accept it..! I didn't had the courage to express myself..!

"Boliye na Sir? Ap bhi mjy job say nikaal day gay?"She shook my shoulder and I came out of my thoughts.


"No Nandini..! I will never ever let you go..!"I said with so much purity and she banged in my chest. She once again started crying like a two year old and I wrapped my arms around her tiny,fragile figure.


"Sir..! Ap please mery sath rehna..! Please..!"She said between her sobs and I closed my eyes to control myself.


"I am with you Nandini stop crying..!"I said softly and rubbed her back,caressed her hair to console her. She look at me with teary eyes and I smiled. She too smiled. "Acha chocolate khani hai?"Iasked to cheer her up and she bobbed her head in a yes. "Then let's go..!"With that I dragged her with me towards my Car. I can't take her to the orphanage because I know her Maa will start freaking out so I decided her to take her with at my home. I called Cabir and told him about my plan he too agreed. I drove towards my home and the whole way Nandini's non stop chatter box was on. Soon we reached home.

"We are home..!"I told her and helped her to come out. She took off her heels and held them in her hands. She look at my home carefully and then she look at me.


"How come my orphanage turned into a villa?"She asked me hell confused and I smiled.


"Nandini..! It's my house..! Not yours..! Now come..!"I told her and she blinked her eyes. With that she started walking with me and opened the door for her. I turned on all the lights and she look at my house with wide eyes. Maybe for the first time she had seen such a big house I smiled on her amazement.


"Sir..!"She said stretching the word and I look at her."Ap ka ghar tou bohaaatt bala(bara) hai..! It's so big..!"She said excitedly and threw her heels on the floor. I laughed on her word "bala" she was so cute. "Aquarium..!"She shouted excitedly and run towards the fish aquarium which was placed in the corner of the lounge. I smilingly followed her. She pressed her nose with the glass wall of the aquarium and tapped her finger on the glass to distract fish.


"You liked it?"I asked looking at her smilingly.


"I loved it..! I always wish for an aquarium in my house..! But I tou have no house of my own..!"She suddenly became sad and I became worried.


"Acha acha..! You want to eat chocolate na..! Come..!"I said and dragged her to my kitchen. Then I get those chocolate halves from my fridge which she gave me.


"Here..! Eat these..!"I said to her and she smilingly started eating. During all her eating session I was admiring her. After sometime she was done with her chocolate eating and suddenly I noticed a small drop of chocolate on her lower lip. Don't know from where the urge of sucking that droplet curved in my heart she herself moved closer to me and I gently grabbed her waist. She tiptoed and lean forward I without any intention too leaned forward. I bent more and more until I was so close to her lips. She closed her eyes and I did the same. I gently sucked the drop from her lower lip and that time I realized how much tasty a chocolate is.


After sucking the drop I was about to pull away when Nandini's hands traveled in my hair and she didn't allowed me to broke the kiss. I kissed her gently although my mind was alarming me that it was not right but my heart was pushing me more and more to complete my crazy action. Nandini almost dug her nails in my hair and pressed her waist tightly. We broke away gasping for air and suddenly my mind hit the reality and felt ashamed. I took advantage of Nandini's condition..! What the hell I had done.! I look at Nandini she was smiling..!


"Don't feel regret..! I trust you..!"She whispered and I was shocked how come she know that I was regretting. She gently placed her head on my chest and closed her eyes. She was falling asleep and gently picked her up in my arms and walked towards mt bedroom. I don't know what will gonna happen tomorrow but I know..! When she will come to know what we shared just a moment ago..! She will leave me..! She will slap me..! I will lose her for forever..! I wanted to kill myself..!I gently placed her on my bed and took off her jewelry and headband. I was about to move away when she held my hand.


"Don't leave me..!"She whispered and I wanted to move away but I couldn't. I took off my shoes and coat and laid beside her. She placed her head on my chest and dozed off. She will hate me for taking advantage of her..! I was in a real bad trauma how the hell I lost my control..! Nandini's ayiapa..! Please make everything go well..! I silently prayed and wrapped my arms around her. Then I again unintentionally kissed her hair and closed my eyes. Tomorrow morning will be a disaster for her..! I thought..!

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Update ray Update..! Lambaaa Update khush? How was Taali Nandini? I tou seriously enjoyed a lot..! Here comes the first KISS..! What will be Nandini's reaction in the morning? Usy yaad bhi ho ga that they kissed? Agar na yaad hua aur Manik nay usy btaya tou what will be her reaction? Ya tou agli update main he pta chaly ga..! It was a fun update..! Nandu and Soha hahaha..! Hilarious..! Then Arya ko thapar..! That misbehave thing bht old fashioned ho gai hai so I tried something new..! I hope it was up to the mark..! Aur apsab mj say aik sawaal pochty hain..! How do I manage to write like this..! Answer I don't know..! Khudi likha jata hai..! Mera koi kamaal nahi hai bhai log..! I really had no intention to write a kiss but pta ni khudi say type ho gya ab ho gya so gya kya kar skty ab hahahaha...! Chalo I hope you all must have enjoyed it..! PLEASE GIVE ME LONG LONG COMMENTS..! Aur ya jo log bolty hain na kay words nahi hain to express aur islye choto comment bachooo myny lagaya na aik chaamat tou khud ba khud bara comment aye ga hahahaha just joking but take it seriously..! ;) Ok bohat hue bak bak keep smiling..! Keep shining for your love ones..!

Lots of love..

Mawara

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update like how nandini deal with that soha and aryamann and promise
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb..its was an emotional and romatic update dr.][/DIV]
it was an amazing one...U penned it perfect..
Ur writings are mind blowing dr ...
Manan romance was on full swing...
The way manik love and and tc of nandini was commentable...
Naughty druken nandhini...
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
Waiting for nandhinis reaction aft hangover ..., make it as postive dr ...
.Update soon dr seriously can't wait...
Always stay blessed nd happy... 😉
Edited by Afila1993 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
whats this yrr?? its just amazing,,awesome update...👏👏
love it very much...n from now it is my favourite story,more than ur other stories...

in part A- jeju is best,,n also manan conversation...😆

in partB- jealous n drunk nandini...😉

n partC- the best kiss ever...😳

now u have to come soon with next updt,,bcz waiting is really typical fr me...😊😊
continue soon,,n ty fr pm...
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just loved it yr plz cont soon

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