MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1 - Page 46

Awesome update Mawara.I loved it so much.there r some amazing moments which stole my heart and for these moments u really deserve a salute...

My most favorite scene was the starting scene where Manik and Cabir was talking about Nandini.I loved these lines so so so very much..."Yaar..! I don't know..! Wo bohat choti hai..! Bachi hai..!" And ..."She is a pure soul..! Main usy hurt nahi kar skta..! Us kay aanso bardasht nahi hoty mj say..!"...these r the most precious lines...

MaNan scene was awesome.specially Nandini's cute antics her bakbak and Manik's adoration to her.she is actually changing Manik Malhotra...and it's in an awesome way.

Rat scene was so funny...haha Nandini was so scared.but it also gave an amazing MaNan moment.but the best thing was my love Cabira.I want to give u a special thanks for the cutest and sweetest word Cabir Bhai.I love it.

Car scene was awesome.Sach me karwa hai Manik.the whole Aryaman scene was amazing.I liked each word of the situation.

Nandini is so innocent so child hearted.I loved MaNan hug so much.I loved the way Manik consoled Nandini. Finally Manik came to know about Nandini.I just loved that scene.

Cabir said right.Nandini needs Manik.I hope he also accepts his own feelings.
Thanks for pm
Please update soon
I want u to know one thing that Sun Sathiyaa is my most favorite story and it will always be...

Awesome...i really loved it.nandu is too cute...coconut manik...he is also good...eagerly waiting for ur next update.

AWSOME...BANNER...AMAZING...LOVED IT...

APPI U ARE AWSOME YRWWW...KAISE KAR LETI HO APP...WHERE IS YOUR HAND...I WANT TO KISS YPUR HAND...MUAHHH!!! APPI U ARE SOOO TELENTED...AMAZING...LOVE U

COMING TO UPDATE...
3A...FIRSTLY MANIK AND CABIR TALK...AWSOME...THEN NANDINI P.O.V...HHEHEH...SHE SAID TO LOUD KE MANIK NE APNE KAN BAND KAR LIYE...😆...AMAZING...OMG!! THERE TALK WAS...FUNNY...AND MINDBLOWING...AND NANDU IS SO INNOCENT...SAB KUCH KEH DETI HAI...SO CUTE...AWWW!! BECHRI FLOWER LAI KE SIR KHUSH HONGE..BUT NHI MANIK IS MANIK...THEN SCARED WALI TALK...AWW!! SOOO...AMAZING...SUPERB..BRAVOOO👏...THEN MANIK P.O.V...AND HE WONDER..HOW SHE KNOWS THAT HIS ANGER WAS FAKE...HHHEHE😆...AND THEN NANDU'S CUTE ANTICS...SHE SOOO CUTEEE...CHOTUUU BABY...THEN RAT SCENE...SOOO AWSOME...THERE CUTE...EYELOCK...AMAZING...THEN NANDU AND CABIR SCENE...AMAZING...MANIK IS SO GENTLE MAN...HE OPEN DOOR FOR NANDINI..THEN CHOCOLATE TALK...HEHEHEHE😆...MISS.DAIRYMILK...MANIK TAUNTED HER...THEN MANIK,NANDINI AND MR.KHURANA AND ARYAMAN SCENE...NICE...AND ARYAMAN EYES ON NANDU...THEN PARTY INVITATION...AND NANDU RUN FRON HERE...

3B...SHE IS CRYING...AND MANIK BECOME WORRIED...AND MANIK WIPED HER TEARS AND NANDU COMPLAIN ABOUT ARYAMAN...SHE IS SOO CHOTUU YRWWW...LOVED HER...AND MANIK CONSOLE HER...AMAZING...THERE HUG...SO SWEET...AND SHE AGREE FOR PARTY...AND THEN COME'S TO KNOW..THAT SHE IS ORPHAN...HE IS SO SHOCKED...AND NANDINI TELL ABOUT HER STORY...NANDINI'S DRESS...MINDBLOWING...AWSOME...AND THEN MANIK TELL CABIR ABOUT HER...AND CABIR TELL HIM...KE SHE NEEDS HIM...AMAZING...SPEECHLESS...LOVED IT...

THANKS FOR PM...
CONT SOON...
LOVE U

wow!! it was such a beautiful update nd i must say u r really vvery gud writer...ur all the stories r realy awesome nd even this one is so unique; it has its own essence!! 😃
i loved all the single parts of ur update...that rat scene was so funny nd i jst got nostalgic..i remembered that store room nd rat scene of manan in kyy... 😳
my most fav part like of almost everyone was "THE MANAN HUG"...nd i hve a feeling that aryaman has to face maniks anger very soon... 😡
bt u know i felt that it ended so soon..i so wanted to read the party scene bt it ended... 😭
bt i know u will be updating soon which is worth waiting fr...so eagerly waiting fr the update...

It was sooo cute n emotional too keep it up 😊

Cute nahi yeh Bht Bht Bht Bht Bht bhttt zada cute thaaa !

Your stories❤️ i'm already loving it!! Eagerly waiting to see how they will fall in love & what happens next!

Um loving this one more and more 😊

Nice update...
Nandu is soo stuborn tht manik ki daant ka koi phark hi nhi.. also so pure..dont no abt the cruel world.. Nd manik cant believe tht she is orphan...
Continue soon...

Its awsm.. ...i hav falllen fr ur ff.. ...egarly waiting for yr next part.. ..
Can't believe dat cute tatics of nandu...nd a age diff between manik nd nandu.. ...its awsm.. ...
I can't hav words to tell u how much i like ur ffs.. ...all ur ffs
I really luv u fr keeping our manan alive
thanks a lot