MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

I am so freaking happy reading this! Please update soon!
Babyish Nandini is always a treat to read and that chocolate wala thing totally stole my heart! Kaash I had someone like Nandu,sigh! Anyway, this was amazing! Couldn't have asked for more!😃

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aysha_rah

@aysha_rah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Yayyyiiieee...its a SS nw...i love u loads yrrr mawara... u r a sweetheart...scchiii... u fulfil all my wishes relatd to ur stories... i feel so proud to b ur fan yrrr literally m ur fan nd addictd to ur stories...nd y r u depressed abt sun sathiya?? Plz let me knw ok...

Nd cming to d update...omg wat shud i say m going all awww ovr it..n u knw evn i hv dis habbit of sharing evn if d persn is sumone m nt so pleased wid bt still maa kehti h so krti hu ..heheheee i luvd it yrr choclate prt ws my favrt cz i ws relating it to me...heheheee bt i cnt get manik na... nd cabir n nandu bond is adorable...i loved it cabir is so good n so polite n dwn to earth prsn...i luv his chrctr..nd d bhai thing was vry sweet... nd our cute li'l nandu ws wrth reading...
Nd nandu undr manik's table n shwing her teeth in respnse...heheee cute...it reminds me of babyish nandu of TUM MILE... u knw i used to adore her a lot in dt stry...cute antics...awww...are yr rulaoge kya purani yaadein taza krke?? Heheheee... i luvd it ovrall nd ya here goes nandu again in manik's lap...hawww she's heavy??? Dt ws cute prt manik teasing her... he strtd freaking out seeing her tears...ohooo u r in love mr.malhotra... nd ya wud luv to see d happy realisatn... nd d update ws early one...thnks a ton fr anothr beautiful stry...loved it...thnks fr d pm..nd ya update soonnn...waitinggg fr all three...waiting eagrly actually...luv yaaa tc...

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Swagatika

@sws2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

I am falling in love with this story.

Thanks for the update.

If possible pm next time.

😊

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Peu Das

@Daz4488

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

The sharing the chocolate scenes were soo cute!! Love this MaNan!! Awesome update!!

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vaishnavi

@vaishnavigarla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Amazing story
nandu so innocent she
shared 6 halves of chocolates
with manik that was a sweet gesture
now cabir told her to cal him bhai so
playing cupid role
story is very interesting
cont soon

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aadhya_cute

@aadhya_cute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

this is freaking amazing part

aww cabir bhai...i guess cabir is a big cupid here for manan😆..lud nandu nd cabir connection😃

OMG that desk thing reminded me of IPKKND...wow soo cute

nd nandu's childish nd naive nature...completly STOLE MY HEART..😊

..choclate sharing wow...hope to see manik eating them one day

nd that romantic scene...wow he told her she is fat...thats a big fat lie😆...soo funny convo

aww manik stored the half choclates in de fridge carefully..something special

love is in de air

ho soo nandu writes diary..intresting

MANAN bond was soo cute in this ff...hope to see their realisation of love DHEERE DHEERE

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Maddy_236

@Maddy_236

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Haaayyyeee kya update h...

Shhhooo cuutteee

U r an outstanding marvelous supperbb writer

Chocolate scene wad awwweeesoommee

Table k neeche nandu...it was tooo cute...

Thank you so much for pm...

Cont soon... keep smiling...

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Hadjer13

@Hadjer13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Woww awsome update...

I loved every part on it...

We are waiting what will happen in the office

Hahahah our cabira alwyas rock

I alwyas want to read more and more Ur storys srssly amazing

Yayyy SS great news

Cont soon...

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AvantikaRoy

@AvantikaRoy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Haha. I am a silent reader. I read a lot of your other manan works too. I must say this one is one of your bests. This one is different from your other works too. It has a lot of humor to it, that too cute one. Like a situational humor. Nandu is unintentionally funny.

So cute nandu and teasing manik. You started it at a good point. Where they already have alight feelings for each other from the beginning, without all the typical hate story beginnings and all. So dheere dheere is gonna give a very good manan feel to us.

ThanQ mawara. The best part about your writing is you are experimenting with different styles of writing and storylines on the same characters simultaneously and you are able to pull all of them pretty well too.

And dear your updates are also generously long enough usually with part a b c sometimes for the same chapter. So try to give the same lamba updates with dheere dheere too.

Keep the humor levels high. It gives a fresh feel to ur ff.

ThanQ once again.

Avantika Roy