MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1 - Page 14

Hey damn nice yar new story n different. I love it. Keep writing dear...

I can just do *awww* after reading this ;) I love it when someone writes about Manik suppressing his actual self, he makes beautiful mistakes and the way cabir teases him ! Eee :D I am already getting goosebumps thinking how this will unfold !

Interesting concept!!!

heya...i am late again..i.know..bt what to do...i dont have enough time...little busy..yet i managed to read ur story..and guess what i loved it...too much...omg...10 years difference nd our arrogant sa manik and cutie.pie nandu...Nd that too childish...and moreover he has feelings for our cutie...wowwiii...it will be fun..jaldi jaldi...nxt part...waiting...and yeahh...tumhare koi bi story me hume 4 parts se khushi nai milne vali...tum likhti hi itna acha...ho...so be prepare in advance to make it ff...see ya...and pm.me

sounds interesting...😳😳

awwwsmeee. why u r feeling nervous??? its superb so keep conting & waiting for next

Wow.
It's Awesome.
loved it.
And yes its too cute.
love this eidi.
Thank you so much for this new story...

Well...wat a story...👏👏..

hmmm interesting yaarr...its FS so I'm sure they'll fall for each other soonn...can't wait to read