#2 MANAN SS YOU BECOME MY STORY for all readers New link -150 - Page 103

This story is so much different from others i just love it.
I mean how can someone bring such an amazing concept and story line
Kudos to you

Hey .. Hw r u.? a sweet n lill romantic update .!! Waise mene Kabi mention ni kiya dat I love Nandini's self takl very much.. " here m singing dukhda n he wants to become Shahrukh Khan winking wiinking".. Hehe so cute.. "Lady Imraan Hashmi " n many more.. Hahaha.. N ur " incompletely complete .. Completely incomplete" theorem .. Lyk Ata kahan se h ye sab . I mean so deep n so perfect .. N nt forgetting ur life goes on theory to which is common bt I liked d way u explaind .. Hole part was nice..
I 9 aaj e update kiya h n an u will take 2-3-4 days to give us next dream .. Bt phir bhi deti no hesitation to say update soon .. Wait is killlinggg... .. Waiting 4 Nandini's reaction .. Lots of love to u..

Sorry i didn't checked page and read it from pm only and commented from page1 only.. But silent readers should give some respect to the writers na.. Wayse,koi nahi we are still here and we love you work and always respect your writings..

Thanks alot for the PM...

Thanks for d pm
so so so sorry late comment krne k liye...
Exams prblm 😔
now coming to d update
song game was Awsm manan, cavya, mukbhi all of them r perfect...
N special thanks to aryaman for helping d couples
finally d wait is over manik n chod k Jane ka reason bata diya...
but nandini ka answer uska Ky, firse we have to wait for d next interesting part...
n plz I have one qus Manik ne nandini ko call krke kyu nhi bataya n he should hv trusted her ...

plz story end mat krna...
continue soon ... 😊

thnks for pm 😆
awsm update finally the secret is out 😃
plzzz update soon 😳
and plzz continue this stry lovng it very much 😉

wow
the song wala part was awesome
finally manik told the reason
pta nhi ab kya hoga
😭
how will nandu react

Awesome update.. Now eagerly waiting for nandu's reaction.. :)

So finally the truth is out!
Loved d game
D songs were awesome
Manan scene ws beautiful
Loved d way manik confessed
Eagrly waiting for nandini s reaction
I specially love when nandu wears manik's pullover
Dats so cutee!!

Plz pm dear...m nt silent reader

wat a story... i m really in luv wid it... i m a silent reader bt ur story forced me to comment...bt plz dnt end this story.. plzzz